List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and slight redundancy. For example, "I always need to list" should be "I always make a list". Also, avoid repeating similar ideas like "stay organized" and "don't forget anything important" without linking them properly. Try to use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important. Moreover, making a list saves time and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some contradictions and unclear expressions. Saying "makes my work much more efficient and less successful" is confusing. Also, "in addition to it" is not the best linking phrase here. Try to be clear and positive, and use appropriate linking words like "also" or "furthermore". Avoid vague phrases like "the whole experience" and specify what you mean.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a list for my work. It definitely helps me become more efficient and productive. Also, making a list reduces stress and makes completing tasks more enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. For example, "go down every single thing that they want or" is incomplete. Also, avoid vague phrases like "any other reason could be there too." Try to give specific reasons and use linking words like "because" and "also" to connect ideas clearly.

Ví dụ: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because it can be time-consuming. Also, they might feel lazy or find it boring to write down every single item they need. Additionally, some prefer to rely on memory instead.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. For example, "more easier" should be "easier", and "without rerunning it" is unclear. Also, the last sentence is incomplete. Try to use clear and complete sentences, and link your ideas logically using words like "because" and "also".

Ví dụ: I personally prefer making lists on my phone because it is more reliable and easier than writing on paper. Also, I can carry my phone anywhere without worrying about losing it, unlike paper which can get wet or damaged easily.

× Yes, I always need to list before I go shopping.

✓ Yes, I always need to make a list before I go shopping.

The verb 'list' is incorrectly used here without an article or as a noun. The correct phrase is 'make a list' because 'list' is a countable noun and requires an article 'a' when singular.

× It helps me stay organized and and shows that I don't forget anything important.

✓ It helps me stay organized and shows that I don't forget anything important.

The word 'and' is repeated twice, which is a typographical error. Only one 'and' is needed to connect the two clauses properly.

× Making the list also saves time and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

✓ Making the list also saves time and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

While 'things' is not incorrect, 'items' is more appropriate in this context when referring to shopping. This is a stylistic improvement rather than a strict grammar error.

× Yes I do. I often make a list for my work. Obviously it works as it makes my work much more efficient and less successful.

✓ Yes, I do. I often make a list for my work. Obviously, it works as it makes my work much more efficient and more successful.

The phrase 'less successful' contradicts the intended meaning. The correct phrase is 'more successful' to indicate improvement. Also, commas are needed after 'Yes' and 'Obviously' for correct sentence structure.

× In addition to it, making a list makes the whole experience much more joyful.

✓ In addition, making a list makes the whole experience much more joyful.

The phrase 'In addition to it' is awkward and incorrect here. The correct phrase is 'In addition' to add information smoothly.

× In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because it's a time consuming process.

✓ In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because it's a time-consuming process.

The phrase 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as a compound adjective before a noun.

× In addition to it, they might be so lazy to go down every single thing that they want or.

✓ In addition, they might be too lazy to write down every single thing that they want.

The phrase 'In addition to it' is incorrect; 'In addition' is correct. Also, 'so lazy to go down' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'too lazy to write down'. The sentence was incomplete and has been corrected for clarity.

× Any other reason could be there too.

✓ There could be other reasons too.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence uses proper word order and plural 'reasons' to make sense.

× I personally think the list on my phone it's because it's more reliable and I think it's more easier than jotting down everything on a paper.

✓ I personally think the list on my phone is better because it's more reliable and easier than jotting down everything on paper.

The phrase 'it's more easier' is incorrect; 'easier' is the correct comparative form without 'more'. Also, 'on a paper' should be 'on paper' as 'paper' is uncountable here. The phrase 'it's because' is unnecessary and removed for clarity.

× Moreover, I can carry a phone with me anywhere without rerunning it.

✓ Moreover, I can carry my phone with me anywhere without running out of it.

The phrase 'rerunning it' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'running out of it' (battery or service). Also, 'a phone' should be 'my phone' for specificity.

× Instead the paper that gets wet easily in.

✓ Instead, paper gets wet easily.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence is concise and grammatically correct, conveying the intended meaning.