Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các từ vựng liên quan đến chủ đề và cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp.

Ví dụ: I used to enjoy singing, but recently I have less time because of my busy schedule. Also, I find it hard to remember the lyrics, so I don't sing as much as before.

Gợi ý: Bạn trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng có lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, câu chưa mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, tránh lỗi sai và thêm liên từ để câu trôi chảy hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. When I was in grammar school, I took music classes twice a week. It was one of my favorite subjects at that time.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu và từ vựng chưa chính xác, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng.

Ví dụ: Honestly, I am not confident to sing in front of others. But if I had to choose, I would sing for my mother because I feel comfortable singing to my family members.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng đúng nhưng cách diễn đạt không rõ ràng, nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và dùng từ vựng phù hợp với chủ đề.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Singing is a relaxing activity that helps people relieve stress and gain more energy after a hard day at work.

× Well, it used to measure copy Business Today due to my hectic schedule, so I don't have much time to like go to dressing room with my friends.

✓ Well, I used to enjoy singing, but due to my hectic schedule, I don't have much time to go to the dressing room with my friends.

The original sentence is confusing and contains irrelevant phrases like 'measure copy Business Today'. The sentence structure is incorrect and unclear. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects sentence structure errors.

× And I think the lyric now that is quite difficult to remember to remember so.

✓ And I think the lyrics now are quite difficult to remember.

The phrase 'the lyric now that is quite difficult to remember to remember so' is redundant and awkward. 'Lyrics' should be plural, and the sentence should be concise and clear.

× Is not my. Interest anymore?

✓ It is not my interest anymore.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks a subject. The correction provides a complete sentence with proper subject and verb.

× Yes, of course. When I was a student at grammar school, there was a applicated subject, code music.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was a student at grammar school, there was an applied subject called music.

'Applicated' is incorrect; the correct word is 'applied'. Also, 'code music' is unclear; 'called music' is more appropriate. The article 'an' is used before a vowel sound.

× I had to learn it about twice a week.

✓ I had to learn it about twice a week.

This sentence is correct; no change needed.

× An it was quite up my favorite subject at a time.

✓ And it was quite my favorite subject at the time.

The phrase 'quite up my favorite subject' is incorrect. 'Quite my favorite subject' is correct, and 'at a time' should be 'at the time'.

× Oh honestly, I'm not confident enough light to perform my own singing in front of the other persons.

✓ Oh honestly, I'm not confident enough to perform my own singing in front of other people.

'Light' is incorrect here and should be removed. 'The other persons' is unnatural; 'other people' is more appropriate.

× However, if I had to choose a good ratters thing to my mother.

✓ However, if I had to choose, I would rather sing to my mother.

The phrase 'a good ratters thing to my mother' is incorrect and unclear. The correction uses 'would rather' to express preference and clarifies the meaning.

× Because I like I feel comfortable with people who are the members in my family and I feel that I can freely to sing to them.

✓ Because I feel comfortable with people who are members of my family, and I feel that I can sing to them freely.

The phrase 'I like I feel comfortable' is redundant. 'Members in my family' should be 'members of my family'. 'Can freely to sing' is incorrect; it should be 'can sing freely'.

× Oh yes, definitely, because now so that people consider thing is like relaxing.

✓ Oh yes, definitely, because many people consider singing a relaxing activity.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Now so that people consider thing is like relaxing' is incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× Activity an I'll sing that singing can help them to release their own dress and is also a right way to like help them to get more energy after.

✓ Singing can help them to release their own stress and is also a good way to help them get more energy after a hard working day.

The original sentence contains many errors: 'Activity an I'll sing that' is incorrect; 'release their own dress' should be 'release their own stress'; 'a right way to like help' should be 'a good way to help'; the sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction fixes these issues.

× Like a hard working day.

✓ After a hard working day.

The phrase 'Like a hard working day' is incomplete and unclear. It should be connected to the previous sentence as 'after a hard working day' to make sense.