Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer shows enthusiasm, but it lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clear and concise, avoid repeating words, and organize your ideas logically. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love singing because it is my favorite leisure activity. Interestingly, my mother is also a singer, and we often sing together in the evenings. Singing helps us relax and reduces stress.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes and irrelevant phrases. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details. Avoid unnecessary or confusing words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was very young. During my school years, I took singing lessons with my teacher, which helped me improve my skills. Singing has always been an activity I enjoy with my mother, who shares the same interest.

Gợi ý: Your answer expresses emotion but is fragmented and repetitive. Try to form complete sentences and organize your ideas logically. Use linking words to connect your thoughts and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my mother because she is my inspiration and motivation. She encourages me to achieve my life goals, and I admire her deeply. She is the closest person to my heart.

Gợi ý: Your answer covers the main idea but is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to use clearer sentence structures and more precise vocabulary. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. From my perspective, many people enjoy singing because it brings them happiness and relaxation. Most people like to sing in the evening as it helps reduce stress and tension.

× interestingly my mother is also also singer

✓ interestingly my mother is also a singer

The noun 'singer' is singular and requires the indefinite article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.

× she usually is he usually sing song in the evening

✓ she usually sings songs in the evening

In the third person singular present tense, the verb should have an 's' ending, so 'sing' becomes 'sings'. Also, 'song' should be plural as 'songs' to indicate multiple songs.

× and me and my mother and we usually it helps reduce the Truss

✓ and my mother and I usually sing; it helps reduce stress

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Me and my mother and we' is incorrect; the correct subject pronoun is 'my mother and I'. Also, 'Truss' is likely a misspelling of 'stress'. The sentence was restructured for clarity.

× I will really remember when I was when I was too young

✓ I really remember when I was very young

The phrase 'I will really remember' is incorrect because the speaker is referring to a past memory, so simple present 'I really remember' or past tense 'I remembered' is appropriate. Also, 'too young' is usually negative; 'very young' fits better here.

× I used to sing songs during my laser laser period of my school and with my teacher

✓ I used to sing songs during my leisure time at school with my teacher

The phrase 'laser laser period' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'leisure time'. Also, 'during my leisure time at school' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× Apart from it are singing is a recognition of activity that I really enjoyed

✓ Apart from that, singing is a recreational activity that I really enjoy

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Apart from it are singing is a recognition of activity' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses 'Apart from that' and 'recreational activity' to convey the intended meaning.

× Your e-mail is at time and I love singing

✓ At any time, I love singing

The phrase 'Your e-mail is at time' is nonsensical in this context and likely a transcription error. The correction removes irrelevant words and clarifies the meaning.

× Me and my mother we have keen interest

✓ My mother and I have a keen interest

The subject pronoun 'I' should be used instead of 'me' when it is the subject of the sentence. Also, 'keen interest' requires the article 'a'.

× I really encouraged by my mother

✓ I am really encouraged by my mother

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the passive voice correctly.

× And she is. She also admired me, and though she's the only one person that I have close to my heart

✓ She also admires me, and she is the only person close to my heart

The sentence fragments 'And she is.' and 'though she's the only one person' are incorrect. 'Admires' should be present tense to match the context. 'Only one person' should be 'only person'.

× some people have keen interest in singing that which gives some contentment

✓ some people have a keen interest in singing, which gives them some contentment

The phrase 'that which' is awkward; 'which' is sufficient. Also, 'keen interest' requires the article 'a'. Added 'them' for clarity.

× and also they feel relax whenever they sing song

✓ and also they feel relaxed whenever they sing songs

The adjective 'relax' should be 'relaxed' to describe the feeling. 'Sing song' should be plural 'sing songs'.

× mostly people they like to sing song in the evening

✓ most people like to sing songs in the evening

'Mostly people' is incorrect; 'most people' is correct. Also, 'sing song' should be plural 'sing songs'.

× and it is there rarely tensional activity

✓ and it is a rarely tense activity

The phrase 'there rarely tensional activity' is incorrect. The correction uses 'a rarely tense activity' to convey the intended meaning, though 'rarely tense' is unusual; possibly 'relaxing' or 'non-tensional' would be better.

× and also it helps to reduce their stress. Time.

✓ and also it helps to reduce their stress

The word 'Time.' at the end is unnecessary and likely a transcription error. The sentence is corrected by removing it.