Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意主谓一致和词汇拼写，避免重复和冗余，使表达更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: Although I'm not very good at singing, I really enjoy it because it gives me energy and helps me relieve stress when I feel depressed.

Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰，内容具体，但可以注意拼写和连词的使用，如"Overtime"应为"Over time"，使表达更准确。

Ví dụ: During primary school, my friend persuaded me to join the school choir. Since then, I started learning how to sing and really enjoyed it. Although I wasn't very good at first, over time I've improved a lot and gained more confidence in my singing skills.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不连贯，建议练习完整句子表达，避免断句错误，并使用恰当词汇表达意图。

Ví dụ: Honestly, I don't have a specific person I want to sing for. But if I had to choose, I would sing for my parents, especially on their birthdays, as a special gift.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好，但句子结构不完整，表达不够连贯，建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意拼写错误。

Ví dụ: Definitely, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, during Christmas, it's common to see groups of people singing Christmas songs on the street, which expresses their feelings and spreads happiness to the audience.

× Although I'm not people who really sing good, I really like is saying because I think seeing uses provides me some energy and provides me an opportunity to express my stress when I feel really, really depressed.

✓ Although I'm not a person who really sings well, I really like singing because I think singing provides me some energy and gives me an opportunity to express my stress when I feel really, really depressed.

这里“people”是复数，而主语“I”是单数，应该用单数形式“a person”。“sing good”中“good”应改为副词“well”修饰动词“sing”。“is saying”应改为“singing”，动名词形式。句中“seeing uses”应为“singing provides”，动词拼写错误。

× Although I'm not people who really sing good, I really like is saying because I think seeing uses provides me some energy and provides me an opportunity to express my stress when I feel really, really depressed.

✓ Although I'm not a person who really sings well, I really like singing because I think singing provides me some energy and provides me an opportunity to express my stress when I feel really, really depressed.

主语“who”指代单数“person”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“sings”。

× Although I'm not people who really sing good, I really like is saying because I think seeing uses provides me some energy and provides me an opportunity to express my stress when I feel really, really depressed.

✓ Although I'm not a person who really sings well, I really like singing because I think singing provides me some energy and provides me an opportunity to express my stress when I feel really, really depressed.

“like”后面应接动名词形式“singing”，而不是“is saying”。

× During my primary school, my friend persuaded me to join the school choir.

✓ During my primary school years, my friend persuaded me to join the school choir.

“During my primary school”表达不完整，应该加上“years”表示时间段。

× From that time on I started learning how to sing and I really enjoyed it, even though I wasn't very good at first.

✓ From that time on, I started learning how to sing and I really enjoyed it, even though I wasn't very good at first.

句子结构正确，无时态错误，仅需加逗号使句子更通顺。

× Overtime I've improved a lot and gained more confidence in my singing skills.

✓ Over time, I've improved a lot and gained more confidence in my singing skills.

“Overtime”应为两个词“Over time”，表示随着时间的推移。

× Honestly, I don't really. Have a target of a person that I want to sing for.

✓ Honestly, I don't really have a target person that I want to sing for.

“I don't really.”后面断句错误，应与后句合并为完整句子。

× Honestly, I don't really. Have a target of a person that I want to sing for.

✓ Honestly, I don't really have a target person that I want to sing for.

“a target of a person”表达不自然，应改为“a target person”或“a specific person”。

× But if I really have to choose one.

✓ But if I really have to choose one,

这是一个不完整的句子，应与后文合并或补充完整。

× Maybe I would choose to sing for my parents. IK specially dream their birthday.

✓ Maybe I would choose to sing for my parents, especially on their birthday.

“IK specially dream their birthday”语法错误且表达不清，应改为“especially on their birthday”。

× IK specially dream their birthday.

✓ especially on their birthday.

“dream”用法错误，应使用介词“on”表示特定时间。

× It can be seen as a birthday gift for them too.

✓ It can be seen as a birthday gift for them too.

句子正确，无需修改。

× Definitely. I really think that singing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Definitely, I really think that singing can bring happiness to people.

“Definitely.”单独成句不完整，应与后句合并。

× Imagine during the Christmas as not uncommon to see a bunch of people on the street while they're singing some Christmas songs.

✓ Imagine during Christmas, it is not uncommon to see a bunch of people on the street singing some Christmas songs.

“during the Christmas”应为“during Christmas”，且句子缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整。

× To all of the audience on the street.

✓ To all of the audience on the street,

这是一个不完整的句子，应与后文合并或补充完整。

× It's really can express your feelings and their hapiness.

✓ It can really express your feelings and their happiness.

“really”位置错误，应放在情态动词“can”之后。拼写错误“hapiness”应为“happiness”。