Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and coherence. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas more clearly and naturally, and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it is my favorite hobby. I like listening to my own voice and experimenting with new melodies. Singing helps me relax and express my emotions.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat fragmented and unclear. Avoid short, incomplete sentences and repetition. Also, be careful with unclear references like 'Ann'. Provide a clear, connected response with relevant details.

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. Instead, I have learned by watching tutorials on YouTube and listening to various artists. For example, I really enjoy songs by Adele because of her powerful voice.

Gợi ý: Your answer contains unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid mistakes. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my mother because she has made many sacrifices to help me achieve my dreams. Singing for her would be my way of showing gratitude and making her proud.

Gợi ý: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Focus on clear sentence structure and use linking words to explain your ideas logically. Avoid unnecessary words and be specific.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their feelings. It can also help shy or introverted individuals communicate emotions they find hard to share in daily life.

× I I I really like to hear my own voice repeatedly and I would like to create. New.

✓ I really like to hear my own voice repeatedly and I would like to create new songs.

The original sentence ends abruptly with 'create. New.' which is incomplete and unclear. The verb 'create' should be followed by an object to complete the meaning. Adding 'new songs' clarifies the intent and corrects the sentence structure.

× No, I never learned how to sing.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing.

The present perfect tense 'have never learned' is more appropriate here because the action of learning to sing is relevant to the present moment and has not occurred up to now.

× I listened to different artist.

✓ I listened to different artists.

The noun 'artist' should be plural 'artists' because 'different' implies more than one person.

× Ann, I really appreciate your songs.

✓ And, I really appreciate your songs.

The word 'Ann' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'And'. Using 'And' connects the sentence properly. If 'Ann' was intended as a name, it should be clarified, but context suggests 'And' is correct.

× I will I would like to sing for my mom because she had sacrificed or gyms to make mines come true and I really like to. Bring her on top.

✓ I would like to sing for my mom because she has sacrificed a lot to make mine come true and I really want to bring her to the top.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'I will I would like' is redundant; 'had sacrificed or gyms' is unclear and likely a mishearing of 'has sacrificed a lot'; 'mines' should be 'mine'; 'I really like to. Bring her on top.' is fragmented and should be 'I really want to bring her to the top.' The modal verb 'would like' is appropriate for expressing desire.

× she had sacrificed or gyms to make mines come true

✓ she has sacrificed a lot to make mine come true

The phrase 'or gyms' is incorrect and likely a mishearing of 'a lot'; 'mines' should be 'mine' to correctly refer to the speaker's dreams or goals.

× I really like to. Bring her on top.

✓ I really want to bring her to the top.

The phrase is fragmented and 'like to' is less appropriate here than 'want to' to express intention. Also, 'bring her on top' should be 'bring her to the top' for correct prepositional usage.

× Is I think singing and bring happiness to people because it expresses the feeling salon in heart and it also makes heart. Don.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to people because it expresses the feelings in the heart and it also makes the heart calm.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'Is I think' is incorrect; 'and bring' should be 'can bring'; 'feeling salon in heart' is unclear and likely 'feelings in the heart'; 'makes heart. Don.' is fragmented and likely 'makes the heart calm'. The corrected sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× It graduates the IT gratitudes the feeling of people who are introverted and can't talk in. Society.

✓ It expresses the gratitude and feelings of people who are introverted and can't talk in society.

The phrase 'graduates the IT gratitudes' is incorrect and likely a mishearing of 'expresses the gratitude'; 'can't talk in. Society.' should be 'can't talk in society' without the period. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun and article usage.