Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some grammatical errors, such as 'really good boys' which seems incorrect. Try to be more precise and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because I have had a good singing voice since childhood, which I believe I inherited from my grandmother who was a musician. Moreover, I love how singing allows me to change my voice to different pitches and express various emotions.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Avoid repetition like 'I I' and incomplete sentences. Provide a clear and complete response with linking words to explain your learning experience.

Ví dụ: Yes, I started learning to sing in second or third grade at school, where our teacher taught Indian classical music. Additionally, I took extra lessons from a teacher in my neighbourhood who specialised in Indian classical singing.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: I don't have a specific person in mind to sing for, but in the future, I would love to perform on a big stage in front of hundreds of people who enjoy and appreciate my music.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and ends abruptly. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and complete your sentences. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific reasons.

Ví dụ: I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and communicate their feelings. When listeners connect with these emotions, they often feel joyful and uplifted.

× I am very fond of singing uh, because ever since I was a child I've always had a really good boys, which I believe I inherited from my grandmother because she was a musician as well.

✓ I am very fond of singing uh, because ever since I was a child I've always had a really good voice, which I believe I inherited from my grandmother because she was a musician as well.

The word 'boys' is incorrect here as it does not fit the context. The correct singular noun is 'voice' to refer to the ability to sing. This is a singular and plural issue where the wrong plural noun was used instead of the singular noun.

× And I love how I can change my voice to different pitches an issue.

✓ And I love how I can change my voice to different pitches easily.

The phrase 'an issue' is incorrectly used here. It seems the intended meaning is to express ease or ability, so replacing 'an issue' with 'easily' corrects the prepositional and phrase usage.

× Yes, I learned how to sing in second or third grade in our school where our teacher useful teachers Indian classical music and I I also had some extra lessons outside of school as well.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing in second or third grade in our school where our teacher used to teach Indian classical music and I also had some extra lessons outside of school as well.

The phrase 'useful teachers' is incorrect. The correct past tense form is 'used to teach' to indicate a habitual action in the past. This is a past tense issue where the verb form was incorrect.

× There was a teacher in my society, he used to teach Indian classical music, so I.

✓ There was a teacher in my society who used to teach Indian classical music, so I took lessons from him.

The original sentence is incomplete and has a comma splice. Adding 'who' to connect the clauses and completing the sentence improves sentence structure and clarity.

× There's not really a particular person who might want to sing for, but in the future, if I do get a chance, I would definitely love to sing in a really big stage in front of hundreds of people who listen to my music and admire that.

✓ There's not really a particular person I might want to sing for, but in the future, if I do get a chance, I would definitely love to sing on a really big stage in front of hundreds of people who listen to my music and admire it.

The phrase 'sing for' is correct but the sentence structure was awkward; removing 'who' improves clarity. Also, the correct preposition is 'on' a stage, not 'in'. Lastly, 'admire that' should be 'admire it' to refer properly to 'my music'. These are preposition and pronoun usage issues.

× I believe singing can bring happiness to people because through singing you can express your emotions and express what you want to tell people, and people usually do get those emotions and they feel happy that. While they feel happy sharing those.

✓ I believe singing can bring happiness to people because through singing you can express your emotions and what you want to tell people, and people usually understand those emotions and feel happy. They also feel happy sharing them.

The original sentence has awkward conjunctions and incomplete thoughts. Removing redundant 'and express', replacing 'do get' with 'understand', and correcting sentence fragments improves clarity and flow. This is an incorrect conjunction and sentence structure issue.