Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Why yes, I like singing because singing is my hobby.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
Not I'm not.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
I want saying. With black being our artists, Hollywood.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yeah, singing can bring happiness. To people, white cars. Can can make me? Find an. Stretching.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda sudah menyatakan kesukaan terhadap menyanyi, tetapi kalimatnya kurang alami dan terlalu singkat. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih alami dan tambahkan alasan yang lebih spesifik agar jawaban lebih menarik dan efektif.
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. It's a hobby that brings me a lot of joy.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan tidak sesuai dengan pertanyaan. Gunakan kalimat yang lengkap dan langsung menjawab pertanyaan dengan jelas, misalnya menjelaskan apakah Anda pernah belajar menyanyi atau tidak.
Ví dụ: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I enjoy singing on my own.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda tidak jelas dan tidak relevan dengan pertanyaan. Cobalah untuk memberikan jawaban yang langsung dan spesifik mengenai siapa yang ingin Anda nyanyikan lagu untuknya.
Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my family and friends because they always support me.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda tidak jelas dan tidak terstruktur dengan baik. Cobalah untuk memberikan jawaban yang jelas dan mendukung pendapat Anda dengan alasan atau contoh yang spesifik.
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their feelings and connect with others.
× Not I'm not.
✓ No, I'm not.
The original sentence 'Not I'm not.' is ungrammatical and confusing. The correct negative response to 'Have you ever learnt how to sing?' is 'No, I'm not.' or simply 'No.' This correction improves clarity and follows standard English sentence structure.
× I want saying. With black being our artists, Hollywood.
✓ I want to sing. With black being our artists in Hollywood.
The phrase 'I want saying.' is incorrect; the verb 'want' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to sing.' The second sentence is unclear and seems incomplete; adding 'in' before 'Hollywood' clarifies the location. The correction improves grammatical accuracy and clarity.