Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit long and repetitive. Try to be more concise and clear. Start with a direct answer, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax during my free time. For example, when I feel stressed, singing calms my mind and reduces my anxiety.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct answer first, then explain your reason clearly and politely. Avoid negative self-descriptions and confusing sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I enjoy singing casually as a hobby. I feel that formal training is not necessary for me at the moment.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but is a bit confusing and repetitive. Use clear sentences and linking words like 'because' to explain your reasons. Avoid unnecessary repetition and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my soulmate, brother, and sister because they are very close to my heart. They have always supported me during difficult times, so singing for them feels special.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words like 'because' and 'for example'. Avoid confusing or irrelevant phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it relaxes the mind and reduces stress. For example, singing during leisure time can be more enjoyable than other activities, and discovering new songs adds excitement.

× Yes I like singing because I'm having much free time for doing anything and I like to sing as it is my hobby 2 and singing gives me relaxation when I have whenever I'm free and whenever I have to relax my mind I do this activity and it will give me many benefits like self stress reduction eccetera.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I have much free time to do anything, and I like to sing as it is my hobby. Singing gives me relaxation whenever I'm free, and whenever I want to relax my mind, I do this activity. It gives me many benefits like self stress reduction, etc.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I'm having' which is not appropriate for expressing possession of free time; 'I have' is correct. Also, 'for doing anything' should be 'to do anything' to correctly express purpose. The sentence is long and run-on; breaking it into shorter sentences improves clarity. 'Whenever I have to relax my mind' is better expressed as 'whenever I want to relax my mind'. 'It will give me' is changed to 'It gives me' to maintain present tense consistency.

× No, I didn't even learn anything about how to sing becauses as I am a very lazy person and I don't want to learn about anything but the just I want to. Saying because I like it but it didn't mean that I have to learn it that how to sing and it just a waste of time if you are going to know how to sing.

✓ No, I haven't learned anything about how to sing because I am a very lazy person and I don't want to learn anything. I just want to sing because I like it, but that doesn't mean I have to learn how to sing. It is just a waste of time if you try to learn how to sing.

The original sentence uses 'didn't even learn' which is less appropriate than present perfect 'haven't learned' when referring to life experience. 'Becauses' is a typo and corrected to 'because'. The sentence structure is confusing and fragmented; rephrasing improves clarity. 'It didn't mean' is corrected to 'that doesn't mean' to maintain present tense for general truth. 'If you are going to know' is corrected to 'if you try to learn' for natural expression.

× I want to sing for my soulmate, brother and sister as they are the ones who are near my heart and they're also the number one priority of mine because they are the one who always helped win my bad times when they are the one who are. I'm giving this board and I like to sing for them rather than other other persons who are strangers to me.

✓ I want to sing for my soulmate, brother, and sister as they are the ones who are near my heart and they are also my number one priority because they are the ones who always helped me during my bad times. I am giving this board, and I like to sing for them rather than other people who are strangers to me.

The original sentence has singular/plural mismatches: 'they are the one' should be 'they are the ones' to agree in number. 'Helped win my bad times' is unclear and corrected to 'helped me during my bad times'. 'Other other persons' is redundant; corrected to 'other people'. The sentence is long and confusing; breaking it into clearer parts improves understanding.

× Yes, people can bring happiness when they sing because singing is the one activity that can relax your mind or reduce your stress. And if you sing in the your leisure time, it will give you a much more relaxation rather than doing any other activity and it will bring some more excitement and curiosity. Christy about knowing new songs which are not newly released.

✓ Yes, singing can bring happiness because it is an activity that can relax your mind and reduce your stress. If you sing in your leisure time, it will give you much more relaxation than doing any other activity, and it will bring more excitement and curiosity about discovering new songs that are not newly released.

'People can bring happiness when they sing' is awkward; corrected to 'singing can bring happiness'. 'Singing is the one activity' is corrected to 'it is an activity' to avoid unnecessary definite article. 'In the your leisure time' is corrected to 'in your leisure time' removing the extra article. 'A much more relaxation' is corrected to 'much more relaxation' as 'relaxation' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. The last sentence is fragmented and unclear; rephrased for clarity and correctness.