Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of 'Is I really enjoy singing because it is on my passion and it tells me the legs after a long day,' say 'I really enjoy singing because it is my passion and it helps me relax after a long day.' Also, keep your answer concise and clear within 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: I really enjoy singing because it is my passion and helps me relax after a long day. Many of my relatives and friends often compliment me on my melodious voice and encourage me to participate in singing competitions. Singing gives me a sense of joy and confidence, which is why I love it so much.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and well-structured. To improve further, try to add linking words to make your response more coherent. For example, use 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas smoothly. Also, you can add a specific example of a technique you learned to enrich your answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was younger, I took singing lessons for about a year to improve my voice and learn different techniques, such as breathing control. I really enjoyed it because it helped me express myself better and boosted my confidence.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains a small unclear word 'What?' at the beginning which should be avoided. Also, 'former friends' seems incorrect; you probably meant 'for my friends.' Try to use correct vocabulary and avoid unnecessary words. Additionally, use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Honestly, I would love to sing for my family because they always support me and encourage me to improve. Singing for them makes me feel happy and motivated. I also enjoy performing for my friends during special occasions, as it helps me build confidence.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good and includes examples. To improve, correct minor grammatical errors such as 'one people sing' which should be 'when people sing.' Also, use linking words like 'for instance' to introduce examples and ensure smooth flow.

Ví dụ: Oh yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and release stress. For instance, when people sing their favourite songs, they often feel more relaxed and joyful. Singing also helps to create a positive atmosphere, whether alone or with others.

× Is I really enjoy singing because it is on my passion and it tells me the legs after a long day.

✓ I really enjoy singing because it is my passion and it relaxes me after a long day.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'Is I' instead of 'I'. Also, 'on my passion' should be 'my passion' and 'it tells me the legs' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'it relaxes me'. The pronoun 'I' should be the subject without 'Is'.

× it is on my passion and it tells me the legs after a long day.

✓ it is my passion and it relaxes me after a long day.

The phrase 'on my passion' is incorrect; it should be 'my passion' as 'passion' is a noun and does not require a preposition here. Also, 'tells me the legs' is a wrong expression; the correct phrase is 'relaxes me' to convey the intended meaning.

× Many of my relatives and friends often compliment me on my melodious voice an encouraged me to participate in singing competitions.

✓ Many of my relatives and friends often compliment me on my melodious voice and encourage me to participate in singing competitions.

The sentence uses 'an' instead of 'and' and mixes past and present tense verbs. Since the action is habitual, 'encourage' should be in present tense to agree with 'compliment'.

× Singing is me a sense of joy and confidence.

✓ Singing gives me a sense of joy and confidence.

The phrase 'Singing is me' is incorrect; the verb 'is' does not fit here. The correct verb is 'gives' to express that singing provides a sense of joy and confidence to the speaker.

× Why is why I love it so much.

✓ That is why I love it so much.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'Why is why' is not a proper phrase. The correct expression is 'That is why' to explain the reason.

× Sometimes I also enjoy performing former friends during special occasions as it helps me build confidence.

✓ Sometimes I also enjoy performing for friends during special occasions as it helps me build confidence.

The preposition 'former' is incorrect here; it should be 'for' to indicate the audience of the performance. 'Former friends' means previous friends, which is likely not intended.

× For example, one people sing their favorite songs, they often feel more relaxed and joyful.

✓ For example, when people sing their favorite songs, they often feel more relaxed and joyful.

The phrase 'one people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'one'. The correct phrase is 'when people' to indicate a general statement.