Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a direct response with clear reasons and avoid unnecessary phrases. Use simple and correct sentences to express your ideas naturally.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it gives me fresh energy and motivates me. Listening to songs is essential in my life as it helps me feel happy and relaxed.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear time references. Please respond directly with clear information about when and how you learned singing, and explain why it is important to you.

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in kindergarten. I took singing lessons from my teacher for several years. Singing is very important to me because it brings me happiness and pleasure.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat confusing and lacks clarity. Try to clearly state the person you want to sing for and explain why, using simple and correct sentences with linking words.

Ví dụ: I want to sing for the famous musician LA Harish Angle because his songs are beautiful and inspiring. I hope to sing with him one day because his music touches people's hearts.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but contains some unclear phrases. Try to use more precise vocabulary and link your ideas logically to explain how singing brings happiness.

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely think singing can bring happiness to people. It provides pleasure and motivates us. Listening to songs can improve our mood and have positive effects on our body and mind.

× I like singing, I'm a singer in my life and I think 30 songs and excuse me, a fresh energy.

✓ I like singing; I'm a singer in my life, and I think of 30 songs and, excuse me, fresh energy.

The original sentence misuses 'think 30 songs' which should be 'think of 30 songs' to correctly express the idea. Also, the sentence structure is unclear and needs punctuation to separate ideas properly.

× For hearing the songs and it is essential for me to hear and motivate.

✓ Hearing songs is essential for me to feel motivated.

The phrase 'For hearing the songs' is incorrect; 'Hearing songs' is the correct form. Also, 'to hear and motivate' is unclear; it should be 'to feel motivated' to express the intended meaning.

× The songs in my life.

✓ Songs are an important part of my life.

The original sentence is a fragment without a verb. It needs to be a complete sentence to convey the meaning properly.

× Yes, I learned singing from my English when I was studying kindergarden.

✓ Yes, I learned singing in my English class when I was studying in kindergarten.

The phrase 'from my English' is incomplete; it should be 'in my English class'. Also, 'kindergarden' is misspelled; the correct spelling is 'kindergarten'.

× Till 212th I studied singing from my teacher.

✓ Until 12th grade, I studied singing with my teacher.

'Till 212th' is unclear and likely a typo; 'Until 12th grade' is appropriate. Also, 'studied singing from my teacher' should be 'studied singing with my teacher' to indicate learning under guidance.

× So it is very essential for me to sing a song and it gives me happy pleasurable moment when I see.

✓ So it is very essential for me to sing a song, and it gives me happy, pleasurable moments when I sing.

The phrase 'when I see' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'when I sing'. Also, 'happy pleasurable moment' should be plural 'moments' and separated by a comma for clarity.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Whom do you want to sing for?

The correct object pronoun 'whom' should be used instead of 'who' when referring to the object of the preposition 'for'.

× I want to sing for the famous musician in our care LA Harish angle and his song is beautiful and amazing, attractive that's influences and effects our hearts balance.

✓ I want to sing for the famous musician in our area, LA Harish Angle, and his songs are beautiful, amazing, and attractive; they influence and affect the balance of our hearts.

'In our care' should be 'in our area'. 'Song is' should be 'songs are' to agree with plural. 'That's influences and effects' is incorrect; it should be 'they influence and affect'. Also, 'hearts balance' should be 'the balance of our hearts'.

× So I want to sing with him.

✓ Therefore, I want to sing with him.

Using 'Therefore' is more appropriate to show cause and effect in formal speech rather than 'So'.

× Yes, I definitely think that singing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I definitely think that singing can bring happiness to people.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× It is a way of bringing pleasure to Abe.

✓ It is a way of bringing pleasure to people.

'Abe' is likely a typo or mispronunciation; it should be 'people' to make sense in context.

× In do a real life and it gives happiness to our minds and it motivates us.

✓ In real life, it gives happiness to our minds and motivates us.

The phrase 'In do a real life' is incorrect; it should be 'In real life'. Also, 'it motivates us' is better without 'and' to avoid redundancy.

× When hearing a song, it is very useful in our body.

✓ Hearing a song is very beneficial for our body.

'When hearing a song' is awkward; 'Hearing a song' is better. 'Useful in our body' should be 'beneficial for our body' to express the intended meaning.