Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: No, I don't like singing because I am not good at it. Singing is not one of my hobbies, so I rarely practice or enjoy it. Instead, I usually listen to music in my free time.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý nhưng cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp chưa chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: No, I have never learned how to sing because I know my voice is not good. However, I enjoy playing the piano and listening to music, which are my hobbies.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu do lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để người nghe dễ hiểu.

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my close friend. We often go to music classes on weekends where we sing together. It is always an amazing experience.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý nhưng bị lộn xộn và nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc, sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời logic và dễ hiểu hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to many people. It helps them feel joyful and relaxed after a busy day. Also, some people with good voices can earn money by becoming professional singers.

× No, I don't realize things because I am not good at it for them are.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I am not good at it.

The original sentence uses 'realize' incorrectly; the intended meaning is about liking or enjoying singing. The verb 'realize' is not appropriate here. The sentence should express preference or ability, so 'I don't like singing' is correct.

× Singing is not one of my hobbies so I I don't always practice or enjoy it.

✓ Singing is not one of my hobbies, so I don't always practice or enjoy it.

There is a repeated word 'I I' and a missing comma before 'so' which connects two independent clauses. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Frighten ball.

✓ (This sentence is unclear and seems unrelated; it should be removed or clarified.)

The phrase 'Frighten ball' is nonsensical in this context and does not form a proper sentence. It should be omitted or replaced with a meaningful sentence.

× Instead of singing I usually listen to music in my free time.

✓ Instead of singing, I usually listen to music in my free time.

A comma is needed after the introductory phrase 'Instead of singing' to separate it from the main clause.

× No, I have learned how to sing before because I am aware that my voice is not good enough.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because I am aware that my voice is not good enough.

The original sentence contradicts itself by saying 'I have learned' but implying the opposite. Using 'have never learned' correctly expresses that the student has not learned singing before.

× However, I really enjoy playing the piano in listening to music is also one of my hobbies, so I sometimes thing.

✓ However, I really enjoy playing the piano, and listening to music is also one of my hobbies, so I sometimes do that.

The sentence lacks proper conjunctions and has incomplete phrases. Adding 'and' connects the two hobbies, and 'do that' completes the thought. 'Thing' is incorrect here and should be replaced.

× I think there are only person I want to sing for is my past friend.

✓ I think the only person I want to sing for is my past friend.

'There are only person' is incorrect because 'person' is singular and 'are' is plural. It should be 'the only person' to match singular subject and verb.

× At the weekend we is really go to music class where we can sing together an is amazing in unforeseeable experience.

✓ At the weekend, we really go to music class where we can sing together, and it is an amazing and unforgettable experience.

'We is' is incorrect; it should be 'we really go'. Also, 'an is amazing in unforeseeable experience' is ungrammatical and unclear. Corrected to 'it is an amazing and unforgettable experience' for clarity and grammar.

× So for tomorrow is on SO.

✓ So, tomorrow we have a session.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. A clearer future tense sentence is provided to fit the context.

× Yes, singing is a hobby of many people in the war when they think they will feel really happy.

✓ Yes, singing is a hobby of many people in the world when they think it will make them feel really happy.

'In the war' is incorrect; it should be 'in the world'. Also, 'they think they will feel' is awkward; 'it will make them feel' is clearer.

× Anna confortable UM It also a way for them to relax after a busy days.

✓ It is also a way for them to relax after busy days.

The phrase 'Anna confortable UM' is unclear and should be removed. 'A busy days' is incorrect; 'busy days' without 'a' is correct.

× For the mall, for some people who have great voice is also a way for them to earn money by a become a singer or.

✓ For many people who have great voices, it is also a way for them to earn money by becoming a singer.

'For the mall' is incorrect; it should be 'for many people'. 'Great voice' should be plural 'great voices'. 'By a become' is incorrect; it should be 'by becoming'.