Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp lại. Bạn nên kết hợp các câu ngắn thành câu hoàn chỉnh và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love singing because it allows me to express myself freely and helps me relieve stress.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh ngắt quãng và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in elementary school. Although I didn't feel confident at that time, I have grown to enjoy singing a lot now.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng câu rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về lý do bạn thích hát cho mọi người.

Ví dụ: I want to sing for everyone because I enjoy sharing music with my friends, especially when we go to karaoke together. The lively atmosphere makes it very enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại ý tưởng và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng. Hãy dùng từ nối để liên kết các ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

Ví dụ: In my opinion, singing can bring happiness to people because when I feel down, listening to or singing a song helps improve my mood and makes me feel happier.

× Yes, I love singing. Because when I sing a song I can express myself in the way I like an it help. Helps me. I re stress. Anti stressful.

✓ Yes, I love singing because when I sing a song, I can express myself in the way I like and it helps me. It relieves stress and is anti-stressful.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper connection, causing sentence structure errors. Combining related ideas into complete sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I have when I was a kid. I learn how to sing in elementary school.

✓ Yes, I have when I was a kid. I learned how to sing in elementary school.

The verb 'learn' should be in the past tense 'learned' to correctly indicate a completed action in the past.

× Uh it. Doesn't help me much because I feel I cannot sing at that time.

✓ It didn't help me much because I felt I could not sing at that time.

The pronoun 'it' should be connected properly to the verb, and tense consistency requires past tense verbs 'didn't help' and 'felt' to match the time frame.

× However, I change my mind now I feel happy for singing.

✓ However, I have changed my mind now and I feel happy about singing.

The verb 'change' should be in present perfect 'have changed' to indicate a change up to now, and 'happy for singing' should be 'happy about singing' for correct preposition use.

× I think I want to sing for everyone because I love to go to karaoke with my friends or college at that time.

✓ I think I want to sing for everyone because I love to go to karaoke with my friends or college mates at that time.

The word 'college' is incorrectly used as a noun for people; 'college mates' or 'classmates' is appropriate. Also, 'or' is confusing here; 'and' or 'with' would be better.

× I can sing with friends with my college an all.

✓ I can sing with friends and my college mates as well.

The preposition 'with' is repeated unnecessarily, and 'an all' is incorrect; 'as well' or 'too' is appropriate.

× I love the atmosphere there.

✓ I love the atmosphere there.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× On my opinion I think singing can bring happiness to people because if I am not in the mood I can I want to listen a song it help me happiness.

✓ In my opinion, I think singing can bring happiness to people because if I am not in the mood, I want to listen to a song; it helps me feel happy.

The phrase 'On my opinion' should be 'In my opinion'. Also, 'listen a song' requires the preposition 'to'. The sentence is run-on and needs punctuation and conjunctions to clarify meaning.

× An I think singing can bring happiness to people.

✓ And I think singing can bring happiness to people.

The word 'An' is a typo and should be 'And' to connect the sentence properly.