Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。より自然な英語表現を使い、理由を明確に述べることが重要です。また、冗長な部分を避け、5文以内で簡潔に答えましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel calm. It also reminds me of happy memories from my childhood, which makes me love singing even more.

Gợi ý: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭な部分があります。過去の経験を述べる際は、正しい時制と文法を使い、具体的な内容を明確に伝えましょう。接続詞を使って文をつなげると自然になります。

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned how to sing when I participated in a chorus contest at school. Although I didn't perform very well, it was a fun experience. Since then, I have enjoyed singing more.

Gợi ý: 内容は良いですが、文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を述べる際は、正しい表現を使い、文を論理的に繋げることが大切です。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my mother because she always came to watch my chorus concerts at school. She supported and encouraged me, which made me really happy.

Gợi ý: 回答は概ね理解できますが、文法と語彙の誤りが目立ちます。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、具体的な理由や効果を明確に述べると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it is really fun. Singing with others is even more enjoyable, and songs have the power to encourage and inspire people.

× It makes me more relaxable and stable and the memories of my.

✓ It makes me more relaxed and stable, and reminds me of my childhood.

The word 'relaxable' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'relaxed'. Also, the sentence structure is incomplete and unclear. 'The memories of my' is incomplete and should be 'reminds me of my childhood' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Child food. Makes me. Love singing?

✓ Childhood memories make me love singing.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'Child food' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'childhood'. The corrected sentence combines the fragments into a coherent statement.

× Yes, I have been learned how to sing when I had.

✓ Yes, I have learned how to sing when I had

The phrase 'have been learned' is incorrect. The correct present perfect form is 'have learned'. However, the sentence is incomplete and needs further context to be fully correct.

× Chorus contest in school I actually I didn't.

✓ I actually didn't do well in the chorus contest at school.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. It needs to be rephrased to clearly express the intended meaning.

× Thanks so well, but it was really. Peng.

✓ I didn't do so well, but it was really fun.

'Thanks so well' is incorrect; it should be 'didn't do so well'. 'Peng' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'fun'. The sentence is corrected to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I want to sing for my mother because she always came to reason my thing when I have.

✓ I want to sing for my mother because she always comes to listen to me when I have

'Came to reason my thing' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'comes to listen to me'. Also, tense consistency is important; 'comes' is present tense to match habitual action.

× Chorus concert in my school.

✓ chorus concerts at my school.

The phrase is incomplete and needs to be connected properly to the previous sentence. Also, 'at' is the correct preposition for events at a location.

× And she always supported me and encouraged me to think thing.

✓ And she always supported me and encouraged me to think positively.

'Think thing' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'think positively' or another appropriate phrase to convey encouragement.

× It was really enjoyed.

✓ I really enjoyed it.

'It was really enjoyed' is passive and awkward. The active form 'I really enjoyed it' is correct and natural.

× Yes I think singing come bring happiness to people becauses thing is really fun and singing with other people is more fascinating them singing around.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because singing is really fun, and singing with other people is more fascinating than singing alone.

'Come bring' is incorrect; 'can bring' is correct modal verb usage. 'Becauses thing' is incorrect; should be 'because singing'. 'More fascinating them singing around' is incorrect; should be 'more fascinating than singing alone'. Pronouns and conjunctions are corrected for clarity.

× Also. Song have power to encourage people.

✓ Also, songs have the power to encourage people.

'Song have' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; 'songs have' is correct. 'The power' is the correct article usage here.