Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing very much. I often sing when I am alone because it helps me relax. Although I don't have a perfect voice, I enjoy singing for myself and it makes me happy.

Gợi ý: Ответ нечеткий и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует использовать правильные формы глаголов и более связные предложения. Также избегайте повторений и старайтесь выражать свои мысли ясно и логично.

Ví dụ: No, I have never learned how to sing professionally, but I have always wanted to try. I hope to take singing lessons in the future to improve my skills.

Gợi ý: Ваш ответ содержит несколько ошибок и нечетких выражений. Постарайтесь использовать более точные слова и правильную структуру предложений. Также используйте связующие слова для логичности и плавности речи.

Ví dụ: Firstly, I want to sing for myself because it brings me joy. Secondly, I would like to sing for my friends and family to make them happy and share my feelings with them.

Gợi ý: Ответ хороший, но есть небольшие грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Постарайтесь использовать правильные времена и согласование слов, а также избегать тавтологии. Добавьте более разнообразную лексику для улучшения качества речи.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For instance, when someone sings for me, I feel special because it shows their care. Singing creates a joyful atmosphere and helps people express their emotions, which is why it often brings happiness.

× Actually when I all my own, I always singing and you know I will sync every time when I have nobody around.

✓ Actually, when I am all on my own, I am always singing and, you know, I will sing every time when I have nobody around.

The verb 'singing' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense correctly. Also, 'sync' is a misspelling of 'sing'. The phrase 'all my own' should be 'all on my own' to be idiomatic.

× But if I would have a beautiful voice, I think I will sync without any weakness but.

✓ But if I had a beautiful voice, I think I would sing without any weakness.

In conditional sentences, 'if' clauses use the past simple tense ('had') instead of 'would have'. Also, 'will' changes to 'would' in the result clause. 'Sync' should be 'sing'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× I can sing with. Perfect voice.

✓ I can sing with a perfect voice.

The sentence is incomplete and missing an article before 'perfect voice'. Also, the period after 'with' is incorrect. The corrected sentence completes the thought properly.

× I'm actually not but I always wanted to try it but I didn't have to do this experience but.

✓ I actually haven't learned, but I have always wanted to try it; however, I haven't had the chance to do this yet.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clarity. 'I'm actually not' is incomplete; it should specify what is not done. 'Didn't have to do this experience' is incorrect; 'haven't had the chance' is more appropriate. Conjunctions are used improperly.

× I wanna try it in the future.

✓ I want to try it in the future.

'Wanna' is informal and should be replaced with 'want to' in formal speech or writing.

× First of all of myself and 2nd table for my friends and close people like my relatives, family and I think I would try to sing for them because I wanna make people happy and I hope that my sink will make people happy.

✓ First of all, for myself, and secondly for my friends and close people like my relatives and family. I think I would try to sing for them because I want to make people happy, and I hope that my singing will make people happy.

'2nd table' is incorrect; it should be 'secondly'. 'Sink' is a misspelling of 'singing'. The sentence is long and needs to be broken up for clarity. 'Wanna' should be 'want to'.

× Singing and created joyful atmosphere an help people expressed their emotions, which is why it often brings happiness.

✓ Singing creates a joyful atmosphere and helps people express their emotions, which is why it often brings happiness.

'Created' should be 'creates' to agree with the present tense. 'An' should be 'and'. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject. 'Expressed' should be 'express' to match the present tense.