Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
As a matter of fact, because I don't have a good voice, so I prefer to don't thinking because I don't bother my family and my friends and an everybody wants to. Hear my voice.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
17 I was a teenager I had tried to learn thinking and I in a role to one class but then I went there I realized that really I didn't have a good voice so I.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
My mother encouraged me to the syncing songs when I was a child, but unfortunately because I don't have it I good voice, I realized that it didn't do such a thing as so I forgot to.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, when you can singing a song, you can feel better. And I think that if you can, if you had a, if you have a good voice, singing a really makes you happy and makes you and you can release your.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then explain your reason with correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. For example, say "I don't like singing because I don't have a good voice, and I don't want to bother my family and friends."
Ví dụ: I don't like singing because I don't have a good voice, and I don't want to bother my family and friends by singing badly.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Provide a complete and grammatically correct answer. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add details using linking words. For example, "Yes, when I was 17, I tried to learn singing by enrolling in a class, but I realized I didn't have a good voice."
Ví dụ: Yes, when I was 17, I tried to learn singing by enrolling in a class, but I realized I didn't have a good voice, so I stopped attending.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Answer the question directly and clearly. Use correct grammar and vocabulary. For example, "I wanted to sing for my mother because she encouraged me when I was a child, but I stopped because I don't have a good voice."
Ví dụ: I wanted to sing for my mother because she encouraged me when I was a child, but I stopped because I don't have a good voice.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Give a clear and complete answer with proper grammar and vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "Yes, singing can bring happiness because it helps people feel better and express their emotions."
Ví dụ: Yes, singing can bring happiness because it helps people feel better and express their emotions, especially if they have a good voice.
× I prefer to don't thinking because I don't bother my family and my friends and an everybody wants to. Hear my voice.
✓ I prefer not to sing because I don't want to bother my family and my friends and everybody doesn't want to hear my voice.
The modal verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'not to' plus the base verb, not 'don't' plus verb-ing. Also, 'thinking' is incorrect here; the intended verb is 'sing'. The sentence also had an incorrect article 'an' before 'everybody' and a misplaced period. The corrected sentence uses proper modal verb structure and correct verb form.
× 17 I was a teenager I had tried to learn thinking and I in a role to one class but then I went there I realized that really I didn't have a good voice so I.
✓ When I was 17 and a teenager, I tried to learn singing and I enrolled in one class, but then when I went there, I realized that I really didn't have a good voice.
The sentence had incorrect past perfect tense 'had tried' which is unnecessary here; simple past 'tried' is appropriate. 'Thinking' is incorrect; the intended word is 'singing'. 'I in a role to one class' is incorrect and should be 'I enrolled in one class'. The sentence was incomplete and needed restructuring for clarity and correct past tense usage.
× My mother encouraged me to the syncing songs when I was a child, but unfortunately because I don't have it I good voice, I realized that it didn't do such a thing as so I forgot to.
✓ My mother encouraged me to sing songs when I was a child, but unfortunately, because I don't have a good voice, I realized that I couldn't do such a thing, so I forgot about it.
The phrase 'encouraged me to the syncing songs' is incorrect; it should be 'encouraged me to sing songs'. 'Syncing' is a wrong word here. The sentence also had incorrect article usage 'it I good voice' which should be 'a good voice'. The sentence was incomplete and needed correction for clarity and proper preposition and article use.
× Yes, of course, when you can singing a song, you can feel better.
✓ Yes, of course, when you can sing a song, you can feel better.
After modal verb 'can', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'can singing' is incorrect; it should be 'can sing'.
× And I think that if you can, if you had a, if you have a good voice, singing a really makes you happy and makes you and you can release your.
✓ And I think that if you have a good voice, singing really makes you happy and helps you release your emotions.
The sentence had incorrect modal verb usage and awkward phrasing. 'If you can, if you had a, if you have' is confusing and redundant. The corrected sentence uses the correct conditional 'if you have' and removes unnecessary modal verbs. Also, 'singing a really makes you happy' is incorrect; 'singing really makes you happy' is correct. The sentence was incomplete and needed completion for clarity.