Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在拼写错误（relive应为relieve），句子结构不够自然，且表达略显冗长。建议简化句子结构，使用更地道的表达方式，并注意拼写。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress and connect with friends who share the same interest.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且有拼写错误（onan Peach应为on pitch，emerge应为immerse）。建议使用简单明了的句子，注意语法和拼写，逻辑上更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I was a choir member in secondary school. My teacher taught me how to sing clearly and stay on pitch, which helped me improve my skills.

Gợi ý: 回答中断句不完整，表达混乱，且有语法和拼写错误。建议先明确回答，再用连贯的句子详细说明原因，避免断句和重复。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for an audience because it allows me to express my passion for music and share my feelings and experiences with others.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在严重语法错误和拼写错误（如PS4 Occupation不明，take her应为help them，live应为life），表达不清晰。建议使用简单句子，明确表达观点，避免无关或错误词汇。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can make people happy by helping them relax and forget their worries for a while.

× Yes, because I think that it can help me to relive my negative emotion and also it can help me to keep up with my friends which have the same interest with me.

✓ Yes, because I think that it can help me to relieve my negative emotions and also it can help me to keep up with my friends who have the same interests as me.

emotion 应为复数 emotions，因为这里指的是多种负面情绪；interest 应为复数 interests，表示多种兴趣；which 用于指代人时应改为 who；同样，表达“有相同兴趣”应使用 as 而非 with。

× Yes, because in the past I'm a choir member in my secondary school and my choir teacher always told me how I can think clearly and loudly in the correct onan Peach and also how I can emerge to the context of lyrics.

✓ Yes, because in the past I was a choir member in my secondary school and my choir teacher always told me how I could think clearly and loudly in the correct on-pitch and also how I could immerse myself in the context of lyrics.

描述过去的事情时，动词应使用过去时态，如 am 应改为 was；can 在过去时中应改为 could；句中 onan Peach 应为 on-pitch（音高正确）；emerge 应为 immerse，表示沉浸于歌词内容。

× Yes, because in the past I'm a choir member in my secondary school and my choir teacher always told me how I can think clearly and loudly in the correct onan Peach and also how I can emerge to the context of lyrics.

✓ Yes, because in the past I was a choir member in my secondary school and my choir teacher always told me how I could think clearly and loudly on the correct pitch and also how I could immerse myself in the context of lyrics.

介词使用错误，应该说 on the correct pitch 而不是 in the correct onan Peach；immerse 后面应接介词 in，表示沉浸于某物。

× Yes, because in the past I'm a choir member in my secondary school and my choir teacher always told me how I can think clearly and loudly in the correct onan Peach and also how I can emerge to the context of lyrics.

✓ Yes, because in the past I was a choir member in my secondary school and my choir teacher always told me how I could think clearly and loudly on the correct pitch and also how I could immerse myself in the context of lyrics.

动词 immerse 需要反身代词 myself 来表示动作作用于自身。

× I want to sing to my audience because so first I want to relieve my. My huge passion in music an also I can share my feeling an my past experience, thoughts, the music.

✓ I want to sing to my audience because, first, I want to relieve my huge passion for music and also I can share my feelings and my past experiences, thoughts, and the music.

表达“对音乐的热情”应使用介词 for 而非 in；feelings 和 experiences 应为复数形式；句中缺少逗号分隔；and 前后应保持并列结构一致。

× I want to sing to my audience because so first I want to relieve my. My huge passion in music an also I can share my feeling an my past experience, thoughts, the music.

✓ I want to sing to my audience because, first, I want to relieve my huge passion for music and also I can share my feelings and my past experiences, thoughts, and the music.

feeling 和 experience 应为复数 feelings 和 experiences，因为表达的是多种感受和经历。

× Yes, because I think that my wonderful voice can help them to reduce their stress an let them to have the PS4. Occupation an also I think that's take her forgets their worries from their live an feel joyful.

✓ Yes, because I think that my wonderful voice can help them reduce their stress and let them have a peaceful occupation and also I think that it helps them forget their worries from their lives and feel joyful.

reduce 和 let 后面不需要 to；PS4. Occupation 应为 peaceful occupation（平静的状态）；that's take her 应为 it helps；live 应为 lives；句子中多处拼写和用词错误需修正。