Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Сіздің жауабыңыз табиғи және шынайы, бірақ кейбір грамматикалық қателер мен сөздерді дұрыс қолданбау байқалады. Мысалы, "wrap" орнына "rap" болуы керек, және "favorite hobby" орнына "favorite hobbies" немесе "a favorite hobby" деп айту дұрысырақ. Сонымен қатар, сөйлемдерді қысқарту және нақтылау қажет. Мысалы, "I usually sing when I feel overwhelmed or confused because it helps me relax." деген сияқты.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing very much. It is one of my favorite hobbies. I usually sing when I feel overwhelmed or confused because it helps me relax. I would recommend singing to everyone as it is a great way to relieve stress.

Gợi ý: Жауабыңыз түсініксіз және грамматикалық қателер көп. "Now I've never had in vocal training" деген сөйлем дұрыс емес, оны "I have never had vocal training" деп айту керек. Сонымен қатар, "focal" орнына "vocal" және "kill" орнына "skill" деп айту қажет. Сөйлемдерді қысқарту және нақтылау керек, мысалы, "I have never had formal vocal training, but I sometimes watch online videos to improve my singing skills because I am very interested in this topic."

Ví dụ: I have never had formal vocal training, but I sometimes watch online videos about singing techniques to improve my skills because I am very interested in this topic.

Gợi ý: Жауабыңызда грамматикалық және құрылымдық қателер бар. Мысалы, "the ones that who wants" орнына "people who want" деп айту керек. "If I became a singer" орнына "if I become a singer" дұрыс. Сөйлемдерді қысқарту және нақтылау қажет. Мысалы, "I would like to sing for people who enjoy my music. If I become a singer, it would be great to have many fans who listen to my songs. I would be happy to perform for them and impress them."

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for people who enjoy my music. If I become a singer, it would be great to have many fans who listen to my songs. I would be happy to perform for them and impress them.

Gợi ý: Жауабыңызда кейбір сөздерді дұрыс қолданбау және грамматикалық қателер бар. Мысалы, "one of my friends always thinks" дегеннің орнына "one of my friends always sings" болуы керек. "Overcome with like this feelings" орнына "overcome these feelings" деп айту дұрыс. Сөйлемдерді нақты және қысқа етіп құрастырыңыз. Мысалы, "Yes, I definitely think singing can bring happiness. For example, one of my friends sings when she feels angry or anxious, and it helps her feel relaxed and happy afterwards."

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely think singing can bring happiness. For example, one of my friends sings when she feels angry or anxious, and it helps her feel relaxed and happy afterwards.

× Singing is one of my favorite hobby and I also can wrap.

✓ Singing is one of my favorite hobbies and I can also rap.

The word 'hobby' should be plural 'hobbies' because it follows 'one of my favorite', which requires a plural noun. Also, 'wrap' is a misspelling of 'rap'. The modal verb 'can' should be followed by the base form 'rap'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns after 'one of my favorite' and check spelling of verbs.

× I usually do that when I get overwhelmed and confused, like full of emotions and it really helps me to feel relaxed.

✓ I usually do that when I get overwhelmed and confused, full of emotions, and it really helps me to feel relaxed.

The phrase 'like full of emotions' is incorrect; 'like' is unnecessary here. Instead, use a comma to separate the descriptive phrase. This improves sentence clarity. Suggestion: Avoid unnecessary prepositions that confuse sentence meaning.

× So I would recommend everyone singing, it's really good idea too.

✓ So I would recommend singing to everyone; it's a really good idea too.

The phrase 'recommend everyone singing' is incorrect. The verb 'recommend' should be followed by the gerund and the indirect object with 'to'. Also, 'good idea' needs the article 'a'. Suggestion: Use 'recommend [gerund] to [someone]' and include articles before singular countable nouns.

× Now I've never had in vocal training but I sometimes watch videos about focal and how to sing correctly in the about the nodes to gain my musical knowledge because I'm really interested in the kill on this topic.

✓ I have never had vocal training, but I sometimes watch videos about vocal techniques and how to sing correctly to gain musical knowledge because I'm really interested in this skill.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'Now I've never had in vocal training' is incorrect; 'in' is unnecessary and 'now' is misplaced. 'Focal' should be 'vocal'. 'Kill' should be 'skill'. The phrase 'in the about the nodes' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. Suggestion: Use present perfect correctly without unnecessary prepositions, correct vocabulary, and clear phrasing.

× I'd like to sing for the ones that who wants to listen to my music and listen to my voice so I can call him my fans if I became a singer.

✓ I'd like to sing for those who want to listen to my music and my voice so I can call them my fans if I become a singer.

'The ones that who wants' is incorrect; use 'those who want' for plural. 'Him' is incorrect pronoun for plural 'fans'; use 'them'. 'Became' should be 'become' to match the conditional mood. Suggestion: Use correct relative pronouns and pronouns matching number, and correct verb forms in conditionals.

× So it'll be great if I have lots of fans in the day of ready to listen to my songs.

✓ So it'll be great if I have lots of fans ready to listen to my songs one day.

'In the day of ready' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'one day' or 'in the future'. Also, 'lots of fans' is correct plural. Suggestion: Use common time expressions correctly.

× So I'd be happy if I sing for them and I'd like to impress.

✓ So I'd be happy if I sang for them, and I'd like to impress them.

The verb 'sing' should be in past subjunctive 'sang' after 'if' in conditional mood. The object 'them' is missing after 'impress'. Suggestion: Use correct verb forms in conditionals and include objects after verbs.

× Yes, I definitely think in that way.

✓ Yes, I definitely think that way.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary after 'think' in this context. Suggestion: Avoid unnecessary prepositions after verbs.

× For example, one of my friends always thinks when she gets angry or anxious and overwhelmed.

✓ For example, one of my friends always sings when she gets angry, anxious, or overwhelmed.

The verb 'thinks' is incorrect in context; likely intended 'sings'. Also, 'and overwhelmed' should be 'or overwhelmed' to list feelings. Suggestion: Use verbs that fit context and correct conjunctions in lists.

× So it really helps her to overcome with like this feelings and emotions.

✓ So it really helps her to overcome these feelings and emotions.

The phrase 'overcome with like this feelings' is incorrect. 'Overcome' is followed directly by the object without 'with'. 'Like this' should be 'these'. Suggestion: Use correct verb-object structures and demonstrative adjectives.

× And she said that after this kind of thing she really felt feel feels excited and relaxed so.

✓ And she said that after this kind of thing, she really felt excited and relaxed.

Multiple verb forms 'felt feel feels' are incorrect; only 'felt' is needed. The sentence ends abruptly; 'so' is unnecessary. Suggestion: Use correct verb forms and avoid redundant words.