Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 文法の誤りと不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「I very enjoy」ではなく「I really enjoy」が自然です。また、「An in addition」は誤りで、「In addition」が正しいです。さらに、「it leaves my moods」は意味が不明瞭なので、「it lifts my mood」などの表現にすると良いでしょう。より自然で効果的な回答にするために、文法の正確さと語彙の適切な使用に注意してください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me reduce stress and express my emotions. In addition, it lifts my mood, especially when I sing my favorite songs.

Gợi ý: 「learned how to think」は誤りで、「learned how to sing」が正しいです。また、「I very enjoyed it」も不自然で、「I really enjoyed it」が適切です。さらに、文が断片的で、「Because」で始まる文は避け、1つの文にまとめるとより効果的です。文法の正確さと文の構成に注意し、より明確で自然な回答を心がけてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned how to sing at school as part of my music curriculum, and I really enjoyed it because it helped me reduce stress and express my emotions.

Gợi ý: 全体的に意味は伝わりますが、「have been always」より「have always been」が自然です。また、「Singing a song」は「Singing songs」や「Singing is」などの方が一般的です。より自然で流暢な表現を目指し、語順や表現の細かい部分に注意してください。

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my family because they have always been my biggest supporters. Singing is a nice way to show my appreciation.

Gợi ý: 「help deduce the stress」は誤りで、「help reduce stress」が正しいです。また、「Singing has a significant flaw in our daily life」は意味が不明瞭で、おそらく「Singing has a significant role in our daily life」などが意図でしょう。文法と語彙の正確さに注意し、意味が明確になるように表現を改善してください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. It allows us to express our emotions and helps reduce stress. Singing plays a significant role in our daily lives.

× Yes, I very enjoy singing a song because it helps me reduce the stress and express my emotions.

✓ Yes, I enjoy singing a song very much because it helps me reduce stress and express my emotions.

The adverb 'very' is incorrectly placed before the verb 'enjoy'. In English, 'very' typically modifies adjectives or other adverbs, not verbs. To express strong enjoyment, 'very much' should be placed after the verb 'enjoy'. Also, 'the stress' should be 'stress' as it is uncountable here.

× An in addition, it leaves my moods, especially when I think my favorite songs.

✓ In addition, it lifts my mood, especially when I think of my favorite songs.

'An in addition' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'In addition'. The verb 'leaves' is incorrect in this context; 'lifts' is appropriate to express improving mood. 'Moods' should be singular 'mood' as it refers to overall feeling. Also, 'think my favorite songs' is missing the preposition 'of'.

× Yes, I learned how to think in school as part of my music curriculum and I very enjoyed it.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing in school as part of my music curriculum and I enjoyed it very much.

The verb 'think' is incorrect; it should be 'sing' to match the context. 'Very enjoyed' is incorrect; 'enjoyed' is a past tense verb and 'very much' should follow it to intensify. The sentence is in past tense, so 'learned' and 'enjoyed' are correct forms.

× Because it helped me reduce the stress and express my emotions.

✓ It helped me reduce stress and express my emotions.

Starting a sentence with 'Because' without a main clause results in a sentence fragment. The sentence should be combined with the previous sentence or rewritten as a complete sentence.

× I would like to sing for my family because they have been always my biggest supporter.

✓ I would like to sing for my family because they have always been my biggest supporters.

'Have been always' is incorrect word order; 'have always been' is correct. Also, 'supporter' should be plural 'supporters' to agree with plural 'they'.

× Singing a song is a nice way to show my appreciation.

✓ Singing is a nice way to show my appreciation.

'Singing a song' is redundant; 'Singing' alone is sufficient and more natural. The article 'a' before 'nice way' is correct.

× Yes, I believe people feel happy through singing.

✓ Yes, I believe people feel happy when singing.

'Through singing' is less natural here; 'when singing' better expresses the time or condition under which people feel happy.

× Singing allows us to express our emotions and help deduce the stress.

✓ Singing allows us to express our emotions and helps reduce stress.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'Singing'. 'Deduced' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'reduce' to indicate lowering stress.

× Singing has a significant flaw in our daily life.

✓ Singing has a significant role in our daily life.

'Flaw' means a defect or problem, which contradicts the positive context. The intended word is likely 'role'.