Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp lại và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn.

Ví dụ: No, I don't like singing because I think my voice is not very good. I used to enjoy singing, but now I feel embarrassed when I sing.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và giải thích rõ ràng hơn về việc học hát.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have taken some singing lessons before, but I realized that my voice is not very pleasant, so I don't practice much.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu rõ ràng hơn.

Ví dụ: I don't want to sing for anyone because I find it difficult to hit the right notes, so I usually avoid singing in front of others.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng bị lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý kiến.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because music helps express emotions and makes people feel joyful.

× I used to consider that I am one of the people who sing us very good and better than anyone else

✓ I used to consider that I am one of the people who sing very well and better than anyone else

The phrase 'sing us very good' is incorrect because 'us' is an unnecessary pronoun here and 'good' should be the adverb 'well' to describe the verb 'sing'. The subject-verb agreement is correct but the phrase needs correction for clarity and grammar.

× so I like to say anything that days but now I think that my singing voice is really bad and it. Do here like dog poop?

✓ so I used to say things like that, but now I think my singing voice is really bad. Does it sound like dog poop?

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Anything that days' is incorrect and should be 'things like that'. The question 'Do here like dog poop?' is grammatically incorrect and should be 'Does it sound like dog poop?'. Proper sentence structure and verb forms are needed.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'Learnt' is a British English past tense form, while 'learned' is American English. Both are acceptable, but consistency is important. Since the rest of the transcript uses American English, 'learned' is preferred.

× What I have learned how to sing before because I eat something that I can't get it, but I realized that my voice is not very pleasant.

✓ I have learned how to sing before, but I realized that my voice is not very pleasant.

The original sentence is confusing and contains unnecessary words like 'What' and 'because I eat something that I can't get it'. These parts do not make sense and should be removed for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, why don't you just saying I often feel embrassed because I can hit the right notes.

✓ Well, I often feel embarrassed because I can't hit the right notes.

The phrase 'why don't you just saying' is incorrect and unnecessary here. Also, 'embrassed' is a misspelling of 'embarrassed'. The sentence should clearly express the student's feeling and inability to hit the right notes.

× I often fat in breast when I found it very difficult to hit the Red Nose and presented Lee.

✓ I often feel embarrassed when I find it very difficult to hit the right notes and present well.

'Fat in breast' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or misspelling of 'feel embarrassed'. 'Red Nose' should be 'right notes'. 'Presented Lee' is incorrect and should be 'present well'. The sentence needs correction for proper adjectives, nouns, and verb forms.

× So I've never want to sing for anyone, including my mother or my family.

✓ So I've never wanted to sing for anyone, including my mother or my family.

The phrase 'I've never want' is incorrect because 'want' should be in the past participle form 'wanted' to match the present perfect tense 'have never wanted'.

× Asking is considered one of the music.

✓ Singing is considered a form of music.

'Asking' is a mishearing or typo for 'singing'. Also, 'one of the music' is incorrect; 'music' is uncountable, so 'a form of music' is appropriate.

× Music brings everyone hapiness, Ann.

✓ Music brings everyone happiness and

The word 'hapiness' is misspelled; it should be 'happiness'. 'Ann' seems to be a mishearing or typo and should be removed or replaced with 'and' to continue the sentence.

× A lot of updates for emotional so yeah, I think singing can bring happiness to people as it going around world.

✓ A lot of emotional benefits, so yeah, I think singing can bring happiness to people as it goes around the world.

The phrase 'A lot of updates for emotional' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'a lot of emotional benefits'. 'As it going around world' is missing the verb 'goes' and the article 'the' before 'world'. Proper sentence structure and articles are needed.