Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh những phần không liên quan hoặc không rõ ràng. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu đơn giản để truyền đạt ý kiến của bạn một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

Ví dụ: No, I don't like singing because I think my singing voice is not very good. I used to believe I was a good singer, but now I realize I am not. Therefore, I prefer not to sing.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản và rõ ràng, đồng thời tránh những phần không liên quan hoặc không rõ nghĩa. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu đơn giản để truyền đạt ý kiến của bạn một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have tried to learn singing before, but I found it difficult because my voice is not very pleasant. I often feel embarrassed because I cannot hit the right notes.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh những phần không liên quan hoặc không rõ nghĩa. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu đơn giản để truyền đạt ý kiến của bạn một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

Ví dụ: I don't want to sing for anyone because I find it hard to sing well. I have never sung for my family or friends because I am not confident in my singing.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng bị ảnh hưởng bởi lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và từ vựng phù hợp để truyền đạt ý kiến của mình một cách mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. Singing is a form of music, and music can improve people's emotions and mood. Therefore, singing can make people feel happy all around the world.

× I used to consider that I am one of the people who sing us very good and better than anyone else

✓ I used to consider that I am one of the people who sing very well and better than anyone else

The phrase 'sing us very good' is incorrect because 'us' is an unnecessary pronoun here and 'good' should be the adverb 'well' to describe the verb 'sing'. The subject-verb agreement is correct but the phrase needs correction for clarity and grammar.

× so I like to say anything that days but now I think that my singing voice is really bad and it. Do here like dog poop?

✓ so I used to say things like that, but now I think my singing voice is really bad. Does it sound like dog poop?

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Anything that days' is incorrect and should be 'things like that'. The question 'Do here like dog poop?' is grammatically incorrect and should be 'Does it sound like dog poop?'. Proper sentence structure and verb forms are needed.

× What I have learned how to sing before because I eat something that I can't get it, but I realized that my voice is not very pleasant.

✓ I have learned how to sing before because I tried something that I couldn't do, but I realized that my voice is not very pleasant.

The sentence mixes tenses and has incorrect verb usage. 'What I have learned' should be 'I have learned'. 'Eat something' is incorrect; likely intended 'tried something'. 'Can't get it' should be 'couldn't do it'. The sentence needs past tense consistency and correct verb choice.

× Well, why don't you just saying I often feel embrassed because I can hit the right notes.

✓ Well, I often feel embarrassed because I can't hit the right notes.

The phrase 'why don't you just saying' is incorrect and irrelevant here. 'Embrassed' is a misspelling of 'embarrassed'. Also, 'can hit' contradicts the meaning; it should be 'can't hit'. The sentence needs correction in pronoun use and verb form.

× Well, I don't want to sing for anyone because I often fat in breast when I found it very difficult to hit the Red Nose and presented Lee.

✓ Well, I don't want to sing for anyone because I often feel embarrassed when I find it very difficult to hit the right notes and present well.

'Fat in breast' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or misspelling of 'feel embarrassed'. 'Red Nose' should be 'right notes'. 'Presented Lee' should be 'present well'. The sentence needs correction in adjective/adverb use and vocabulary.

× So I've never want to sing for anyone, including my mother or my family.

✓ So I've never wanted to sing for anyone, including my mother or my family.

The phrase 'I've never want' is incorrect; the past participle 'wanted' should be used after 'have'. This is a past tense issue requiring correct verb form.

× Asking is considered one of the music.

✓ Singing is considered a form of music.

'Asking' is a typo for 'singing'. 'One of the music' is incorrect; 'music' is uncountable, so 'a form of music' is appropriate. The quantifier and noun usage need correction.

× Music brings everyone hapiness, Ann.

✓ Music brings everyone happiness and

'Hapiness' is misspelled; should be 'happiness'. 'Ann' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'and'. The sentence needs spelling and conjunction correction.

× A lot of updates for emotional so yeah, I think singing can bring happiness to people as it going around world.

✓ It has a lot of emotional benefits, so yeah, I think singing can bring happiness to people as it goes around the world.

The phrase 'A lot of updates for emotional' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'It has a lot of emotional benefits'. 'As it going around world' lacks proper verb form and article; should be 'as it goes around the world'. The sentence structure and verb forms need correction.