Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and correct verb forms and articles.

Ví dụ: I live in Australia. The weather is usually pleasant — we have lots of sunshine and short, light showers. The humidity is generally mild, so rainy periods don't last long.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer, use linking words and correct verb forms. Avoid filler sounds and repetition. Mention one or two specific activities and when you do them.

Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy outdoor activities. For example, I often go swimming and hiking with my family on weekends, which is easier when it's warm.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, use a linking word to support your reason, and use correct noun forms. Be specific about what dry weather allows you to do.

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because it makes outdoor plans more reliable. For instance, dry weekends are perfect for hiking in the mountains and spending time with my family.

Gợi ý: Provide a direct statement about frequency, then give one clear reason with correct grammar. Avoid confusing or hypothetical phrasing and use correct articles and verb forms.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before work. This helps me plan my day and decide whether to bring an umbrella or change travel plans.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear statement about effects, then give two specific consequences using linking words. Correct subject-verb agreement and avoid asking the examiner back.

Ví dụ: Climate change has caused higher temperatures and more extreme weather. As a result, sea levels are rising, forcing some coastal communities to relocate, and changing weather patterns have harmed crop yields.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and provide a clear reason with a specific example. Use correct prepositions and complete phrases; mention a particular place or benefit.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit drier places because high humidity in parts of Japan causes mould problems. For example, I would enjoy visiting a dry city like Madrid to avoid dampness and enjoy outdoor cafés.

× The weather is usually fine and it it rains, the raining time is very short and the humidity is very good.

✓ The weather is usually fine, and when it rains, the rain does not last long and the humidity is comfortable.

Original has repeated word 'it it', incorrect noun form 'the raining time', and awkward phrase 'humidity is very good'. Use 'when it rains' for condition, 'the rain does not last long' for duration, and 'humidity is comfortable' to describe agreeable humidity. Also add a comma before the conjunction for clarity. (Type 13)

× MMM I prefer hot weather because I really love outdoor activities like swimming in the pool, pool or hiking.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I really love outdoor activities like swimming in the pool or hiking.

Extra filler 'MMM' and repeated 'pool' create redundancy. Use simple present 'I prefer' and list activities with 'or' between the last two items. Remove fillers in formal answers. (Type 6)

× Especially on the weekend, I really love go hiking with my family.

✓ Especially on weekends, I really love going hiking with my family.

Use plural 'weekends' for habitual actions and the gerund 'going' after 'love'. 'Go hiking' is fine in other contexts, but after 'love' use 'going hiking' to be natural. (Type 6)

× I prefer dry weather because I really love outdoor activity, especially on weekend.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I really love outdoor activities, especially on weekends.

Use plural 'activities' for general activities and 'on weekends' for habitual timing. 'Especially on weekend' is ungrammatical. (Type 14)

× Outdoor activities like going hiking to the mountain makes lasting memories with my family.

✓ Outdoor activities like going hiking in the mountains make lasting memories with my family.

Subject 'Outdoor activities' is plural so verb should be 'make' not 'makes'. Use 'in the mountains' or 'to the mountain' with consistent number; 'in the mountains' is more natural. (Type 27)

× Yes, I'm in habit of checking the weather forecast, so because this activity allow us to go without stress.

✓ Yes, I'm in the habit of checking the weather forecast, because this activity allows us to go out without stress.

Need article 'the' with 'habit'. Remove redundant 'so' before 'because'. Verb must agree: 'allows' for singular 'activity'. Add 'out' after 'go' for clarity. (Type 12)

× So if you're ready umbrella in advance, you will avoid raining.

✓ So if you prepare an umbrella in advance, you will avoid getting wet from the rain.

'You're ready umbrella' is wrong pronoun/verb usage; use 'you prepare an umbrella' and include article 'an'. 'Avoid raining' is incorrect; people avoid getting wet or avoid the rain. (Type 12)

× It's important for your work.

✓ It's important for your work.

Sentence is grammatically correct but could be more natural as 'It's important for work' or 'It's important for your job'. No correction required. (Type 12)

× Are your climate change in recent years significant?

✓ Have the effects of climate change in recent years been significant?

Original word order and pronoun 'your' are incorrect. Rephrase to ask about 'effects of climate change' using present perfect passive 'have been significant' to refer to recent period. (Type 26)

× It really affect the temperature and world.

✓ It really affects the temperature and the world.

Subject 'It' (climate change) requires third person singular verb 'affects'. Also add 'the' before 'world' for correctness. (Type 6)

× So due to global warming, some people cannot live in the seaside area and they also affect agriculture.

✓ Due to global warming, some people can no longer live in coastal areas, and agriculture is also affected.

'Cannot live in the seaside area' is awkward; use 'can no longer live in coastal areas'. 'They also affect agriculture' incorrectly attributes action to people; use passive 'agriculture is also affected'. (Type 12)

× Yes, I really love to with the area with less humidity because in Japan sometimes we have to struggle with mould, so I think dry weather will be suitable for our lifestyle.

✓ Yes, I would really like to live in an area with less humidity because in Japan we sometimes have to deal with mould, so I think dry weather would be better for our lifestyle.

Original 'love to with the area' is ungrammatical; use 'would like to live in an area'. Use 'deal with mould' rather than 'struggle with mould'. Use conditional 'would be better' to express preference. (Type 12)