Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve clarity, grammar and coherence: begin with a clear topic sentence, correct articles and prepositions, reduce fillers (umm, uhh), and use linking words to contrast morning and noon. Be specific about temperatures or typical conditions. Keep answer within 3–4 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: Right now I live in Parmara, where the weather is generally cold and quite humid. In the early morning it is freezing when I leave for work, but by noon it becomes much warmer and sometimes even quite hot.

Gợi ý: Remove repetition and give a clear reasoned answer with one or two supporting details connected by linking words. Use precise vocabulary (e.g. 'prefer', 'dislike', 'layers', 'fashionable'). Avoid emotional exaggeration unless explained.

Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because I dislike being cold and I find it uncomfortable. Also, in warm weather I can wear lighter, more fashionable clothes, whereas cold weather forces me to wear bulky layers.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, avoid hesitations, and explain reasons with more precise language. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' correctly and give a specific example of how each type affects you.

Ví dụ: I prefer wet weather because dry conditions make my skin flaky and uncomfortable. However, too much humidity can be uncomfortable too, so I prefer moderate humidity rather than extremely wet weather.

Gợi ý: Be concise and finish your sentence. State frequency clearly (e.g. 'rarely', 'once a week') and how you check (app, TV, friends). Remove filler words and provide a typical situation when you would check.

Ví dụ: I don't check the forecast regularly; I only look it up occasionally, usually once a week or if a friend warns me that it will rain. When I do check, I use a weather app on my phone.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence, accurate facts and avoid incorrect associations (e.g. earthquakes are not caused by climate change). Use linking words and provide specific examples and consequences (flooding, heatwaves, sea-level rise, impacts on agriculture and health).

Ví dụ: I think climate change has caused more frequent extreme weather, such as intense flooding and prolonged heatwaves, which damage crops and displace people. It has also raised sea levels, threatening coastal communities and increasing the risk of storm surges.

Gợi ý: Be specific and concise: state the city and reasons why (culture, experience of a different climate). Correct factual exaggerations (London is not extremely cold year-round) and connect ideas with linking words. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates, such as London, because I want to experience cooler, milder weather and the city's cultural atmosphere. I think it would be interesting to see how daily life and fashion differ in a cooler climate.

× Currently I'm living in Parmara and the weather is quite cold and a bit of the humidity.

✓ Currently I live in Parmara and the weather is quite cold and a bit humid.

Use simple present 'I live' for a current permanent or semi-permanent state rather than present continuous 'I'm living'. Also 'a bit of the humidity' is unidiomatic; use the adjective 'humid' to describe the weather.

× I don't know why UMM but in the early morning when I usually head off to work it's extremely freezing but then at noon time UMM it's becomes way more warmer and most hotter.

✓ I don't know why, but in the early morning when I usually head off to work it's extremely cold, and then at noon it becomes much warmer.

Remove filler 'UMM' and fix sentence structure. 'Extremely freezing' is redundant; use 'extremely cold' or 'freezing'. 'It's becomes' is ungrammatical; use 'it becomes'. 'Way more warmer' and 'most hotter' are incorrect comparative forms; use 'much warmer'.

× I personally prefer hot weather because I'm I'm I'm very scared of the coldness.

✓ I personally prefer hot weather because I'm very scared of the cold.

Reduce repetition 'I'm I'm I'm' to a single 'I'm'. Use 'scared of the cold' rather than 'scared of the coldness' for natural expression.

× Hot weather however doesn't make me feel that bad.

✓ Hot weather, however, doesn't make me feel that bad.

Add commas around 'however' when used as a parenthetical adverb to improve punctuation and sentence flow.

× And also with hot weather I can choose to wear more fashionable clothes rather than cold weather.

✓ With hot weather I can choose to wear more fashionable clothes rather than in cold weather.

Compare conditions using a prepositional phrase 'in cold weather'. The original uses 'rather than cold weather' which is awkward; add 'in' to clarify the comparison.

× This is a hard one. I think I'll prefer wet weather because during dry weather it is very umm dry to my skin and always make my skin very uncomfortable.

✓ This is a hard one. I think I prefer wet weather because during dry weather it makes my skin very dry and uncomfortable.

'I'll prefer' implies a future choice; simple present 'I prefer' fits habitual preference. Fix agreement: 'make my skin' should be 'makes my skin' because 'it' is singular. Reorder to 'very dry and uncomfortable' for clarity and remove filler 'umm'.

× However, during wet weather it's more of a giving more humidity.

✓ However, during wet weather there is more humidity.

The original phrase 'it's more of a giving more humidity' is ungrammatical. Use 'there is more humidity' or 'it is more humid' to describe increased moisture.

× I have to be honest, I don't really have that habit of checking the forecast, especially before, umm, I go out.

✓ I have to be honest: I don't really have the habit of checking the forecast, especially before I go out.

Use 'the habit' or 'the habit of' instead of 'that habit' for naturalness. Remove filler 'umm' and the extra comma. A colon or comma can introduce the explanation.

× I do check weather forecast somehow when I heard that from one of my friends that oh, it's gonna be raining tomorrow, you should be careful.

✓ I do check the weather forecast sometimes when I hear from a friend that 'it's going to rain tomorrow, you should be careful.'

Use 'the weather forecast' with article 'the'. Match tenses: 'hear' (present) fits habitual action better than 'heard'. Replace informal 'gonna' with 'going to'. Clarify reported speech and punctuation.

× So yeah, say once in a while I will check the.

✓ So yeah, I check it once in a while.

Complete the sentence by adding the object 'it' (the forecast) and use simple present 'I check' for habitual actions rather than 'I will check' which implies future. 'Say' is unnecessary.

× For the past few years the climate change, I think they have a lot of effect on human being and the most obvious 1 is probably the constant flooding and also earthquake all around the world.

✓ Over the past few years, climate change has had a large effect on human beings, and the most obvious examples are frequent flooding and earthquakes around the world.

Remove 'the' before 'climate change' and correct subject-verb agreement: 'climate change has had'. Use plural 'human beings'. Replace 'they have a lot of effect' with 'has had a large effect'. Use plural 'earthquakes' and 'examples are' for clarity.

× I would like to visit cities that have different climates and weather conditions from my current work, current place and for example, I want to travel to London where it's extremely cold.

✓ I would like to visit cities that have different climates and weather conditions from my current workplace; for example, I want to travel to London, where it's often very cold.

Use 'workplace' or 'current place of work' instead of 'current work, current place'. Add a semicolon or period to separate clauses. 'Often very cold' is more natural than 'extremely cold' for a general statement. Add commas for clarity.

× It looks like it's cold all year round, but it has this very good vibe that I want to try.

✓ It seems cold all year round, but it has a pleasant vibe that I want to experience.

'Looks like' is acceptable but 'seems' is more formal. 'Very good vibe' is informal; 'pleasant vibe' or 'atmosphere' is more natural. Use 'experience' rather than 'try' for visiting a place.