Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct minor grammar (e.g., "buy from the market" → "buy them at the market"). Use one clear topic sentence then one or two supporting details with a linking word. Avoid redundancy ("make me feel relaxed and cheerful" and "make the space feel warm and cozy" are similar).

Ví dụ: Yes — I love flowers. I often buy them at the market to decorate my room because their colour and scent make the space feel warm and lift my mood.

Gợi ý: Correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., "fleshed flowers" → "fresh flowers", "decorate room" → "decorate the room", "it's lighting up" → "it lights up"). Use linking words (for example, "For instance") and be more specific about types of plants or how they arrange them.

Ví dụ: Yes, for instance my mother and sister both love flowers. They buy fresh flowers at the market, plant shrubs and roses in our garden, and arrange bouquets in vases to brighten the living room.

Gợi ý: Fix sentence structure and vocabulary ("they aren't many" → "there aren't many"). Clarify ideas with linking words ("because", "however") and explain why expense and permanent home affect buying decisions. Keep it concise and direct.

Ví dụ: Not really. There aren't many flowers where I live in Taiwan because plants are quite expensive, so I don't buy them often, especially since my permanent home is in Thailand.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and word choice ("along the stage" unclear — use "on the way"; "blinding my day" → "brighten my day"). Use linking words ("also") correctly and give one specific example of where or which flowers you photograph.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. On my way to university I often stop to photograph flowers because they brighten my day. I also visit the national park most weekends to practise photography and capture wild orchids and tropical blooms.

Gợi ý: Correct factual phrasing and vocabulary ("Mother Days" → "Mother's Day", "New Years" → "New Year"). Remove unclear fragments ("BA boutique or throw"). Provide specific examples of occasions and typical flowers, and explain briefly why people choose gifts like flowers or alternatives.

Ví dụ: Yes. People often give flowers for birthdays, New Year and Mother's Day. Common local choices include jasmine and orchids, although some people prefer practical gifts like clothing instead.

× Yes, I do love flowers.

✓ Yes, I love flowers.

Use simple present 'I love' for general statements/habits. 'Do' is only used for emphasis; unnecessary here. Suggestion: Use 'I love' for natural response.

× and I often buy from the market to decorate my room with them because they make the space feel warm and cozy.

✓ and I often buy them from the market to decorate my room because they make the space feel warm and cozy.

Missing object pronoun after 'buy'. The verb 'buy' requires a direct object: 'buy them'. Also move 'from the market' after 'buy' for natural word order.

× They often buy flowers at the market and plant them around our home, especially in the garden.

✓ They often buy flowers at the market and plant them around our home, especially in the garden.

Sentence is correct; no article change needed. Included to indicate checked: no correction required.

× And they also arrange fleshed flowers in vases to decorate room because it's lighting up the house.

✓ They also arrange fresh flowers in vases to decorate the room because they light up the house.

Wrong word 'fleshed' should be 'fresh' (adjective). 'Decorate room' needs definite article 'the room'. 'It's lighting up' is awkward present continuous; use simple present 'they light up' for general fact.

× No, they aren't many flowers where I live.

✓ No, there aren't many flowers where I live.

Incorrect subject form: use 'there aren't' for existence of plural nouns. 'They aren't many flowers' is ungrammatical; 'there aren't many' is correct 'there be' construction.

× I live in Taiwan and flash flowers and plants are quite expensive here so I don't usually buy them to decorate my home, especially since my permanent home is in Thailand.

✓ I live in Taiwan and fresh flowers and plants are quite expensive here, so I don't usually buy them to decorate my home, especially since my permanent home is in Thailand.

'Flash flowers' is incorrect word choice; should be 'fresh flowers'. Also add a comma before 'so' joining clauses. Otherwise tense and meaning fit.

× When I walk to university along the stage I often stop to take photos of flowers because they look beautiful and blinding my day.

✓ When I walk to university along the street, I often stop to take photos of flowers because they look beautiful and brighten my day.

'Along the stage' is wrong preposition; likely 'along the street' or 'on the way' fits. 'Blinding my day' is incorrect collocation; use 'brighten my day' (phrasal verb) meaning improve mood. Add comma after introductory clause.

× I also visit like National Park most weekend to take more photo and practice my photography.

✓ I also visit national parks most weekends to take more photos and practice my photography.

Incorrect quantifiers and forms: 'like National Park' should be 'national parks' (plural) or 'a national park'. 'Most weekend' should be 'most weekends'. 'Photo' needs plural 'photos'.

× Yes, people in my country often give flowers on special occasions such as birthday, New Years and Mother Days.

✓ Yes, people in my country often give flowers on special occasions such as birthdays, New Year and Mother's Day.

Pluralize 'birthday' to 'birthdays'. Use 'New Year' (or 'New Year's Day') and 'Mother's Day' with possessive. These are standard event names.

× We sure usually send popular local flower like Jasmine or BA boutique or throw.

✓ We usually send popular local flowers like jasmine or orchids.

Original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words. 'We sure usually' is awkward; 'we usually' suffices. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'BA boutique or throw' seems garbled; likely intended examples like 'jasmine or orchids'—use clear common local flowers.

× Some prefer people prefer to keep like clothes or the others instead.

✓ Some people prefer to give items like clothes or other gifts instead.

Original repeats 'prefer' and has wrong word order. Reorder to 'Some people prefer to give items like clothes or other gifts instead.' This clarifies subject and verb and corrects noun phrases.