Exemplo da Banda 7
Tópico: Describe a successful businessperson you know(e.g. running a family business)
Exemplo
I'd like to talk about a friend of mine who started a successful import-export business. My friend's name is Quynh, and we were classmates together when we were doing our bachelor's degree in business, at a university in Shanghai. To be honest, I mainly went there because my parents wanted me to, but Quynh was really enthusiastic about business from the first day of the course. Even then, she had definitely found her calling in life, and it was inspiring to see her engaging with all of the material and clearly enjoying herself in the process. After class, we would always study together in the library, and I guess a bit of her enthusiasm must have rubbed off on me because I ended up getting pretty good grades. We were in the same class throughout our 3 years at university and graduated together. Once she left university, Quynh started a business importing and exporting groceries. At first, her clients were small local stores, but over time her business grew to include some of the major supermarket chains in our country. I believe that the secret to her success is that she works harder, and still shows more enthusiasm for her work, than anyone else I know. As a result, she has also managed to build connections with companies around the world which help her supply her customers in the best possible way. I think she is amazing, and everyone could learn a thing or two from her.
I'd like to talk about a friend of mine who started a successful import-export business. My friend's name is Quynh, and we were classmates together when we were doing our bachelor's degree in business, at a university in Shanghai. To be honest, I mainly went there because my parents wanted me to, but Quynh was really enthusiastic about business from the first day of the course. Even then, she had definitely found her calling in life, and it was inspiring to see her engaging with all of the material and clearly enjoying herself in the process. After class, we would always study together in the library, and I guess a bit of her enthusiasm must have rubbed off on me because I ended up getting pretty good grades. We were in the same class throughout our 3 years at university and graduated together. Once she left university, Quynh started a business importing and exporting groceries. At first, her clients were small local stores, but over time her business grew to include some of the major supermarket chains in our country. I believe that the secret to her success is that she works harder, and still shows more enthusiasm for her work, than anyone else I know. As a result, she has also managed to build connections with companies around the world which help her supply her customers in the best possible way. I think she is amazing, and everyone could learn a thing or two from her.
Vocabulário
  • import-export business
    import-export business
  • bachelor's degree in business
    bachelor's degree in business
  • enthusiastic
    enthusiastic
  • find her calling
    find her calling
  • engage with the material
    engage with the material
  • rub off on me
    rub off on me
  • groceries
    groceries
  • major supermarket chains
    major supermarket chains
  • secret to her success
    secret to her success
  • build connections
    build connections
Exemplo
One individual that comes to mind when thinking about success is my cousin, Emily. I've known her since childhood as we grew up together. She owns a thriving digital marketing agency that specializes in branding for small businesses. Emily initially dipped her toes in the corporate world after college, working for a renowned tech company. However, she quickly realized that her true calling lay in entrepreneurship. Armed with a head for business and an eye for detail, she ventured into her own startup, enduring various ups and downs. What really sets Emily apart is her uncanny ability to adapt and innovate. When the pandemic hit, she swiftly transitioned her team to remote work and diversified her service offerings. She has a knack for spotting industry trends, thereby positioning her agency at the forefront of digital marketing. To me, her success stems from a combination of resilience, ingenuity, and an insatiable thirst for knowledge. She is a testament to the idea that hard work and smart decisions can indeed pave the way for a flourishing career.
One individual that comes to mind when thinking about success is my cousin, Emily. I've known her since childhood as we grew up together. She owns a thriving digital marketing agency that specializes in branding for small businesses. Emily initially dipped her toes in the corporate world after college, working for a renowned tech company. However, she quickly realized that her true calling lay in entrepreneurship. Armed with a head for business and an eye for detail, she ventured into her own startup, enduring various ups and downs. What really sets Emily apart is her uncanny ability to adapt and innovate. When the pandemic hit, she swiftly transitioned her team to remote work and diversified her service offerings. She has a knack for spotting industry trends, thereby positioning her agency at the forefront of digital marketing. To me, her success stems from a combination of resilience, ingenuity, and an insatiable thirst for knowledge. She is a testament to the idea that hard work and smart decisions can indeed pave the way for a flourishing career.
Análise Gramatical
Combining complex and simple sentences: For example, "What really sets Emily apart is her uncanny ability to adapt and innovate." This sentence uses "is" to connect the subject and predicate, while using "to adapt and innovate" to further explain. Tense usage appropriately: The answer mainly uses the simple present tense and past tense to describe Emily's personal experiences and current situation. Expressing hierarchy: By using "However," "When," and "To me," the answer demonstrates a rich expression of hierarchy and logical transitions. Enhancing descriptions with modifiers: Words like "thriving," "renowned," and "insatiable" appear in the answer, adding vividness to the description. Logical coherence and chronological timeline: By using "However," "When," and "To me," the answer ensures coherence in time and logic. This makes the entire description more smooth and logically sound.
Vocabulário
  • Thriving
    Thriving
  • Dipped her toes
    Dipped her toes
  • Corporate world
    Corporate world
  • Venture
    Venture
  • Uncanny ability
    Uncanny ability
  • Innovate
    Innovate
  • Knack
    Knack
  • Resilience
    Resilience
  • Ingenuity
    Ingenuity
  • Insatiable thirst for knowledge
    Insatiable thirst for knowledge