Exemplo da Banda 7
Tópico: Describe an occasion when you waited a long time for a nice thing
Exemplo
A meal for the family When it happened I'm going to talk about the time I cooked a huge meal for all my family at my house about one month ago. What the nice thing was It was my mum's 50th birthday and we'd been planning it for quite a while. How long you waited We had toyed with the idea a few months prior to her birthday and only really decided to do it a month before her actual birthday. Once I had made the menu, it was just a case of waiting for it to come. At that time, my uncle, who is a chef, changed the menu a number of times. Why you waited for a long time Because it was my mum's 50th, we wanted to make it special and so I, my sister and my uncle had got together months before to discuss ideas about what we could do to celebrate it. We had been thinking about restaurants, or trips to the countryside together but they all proved quite expensive. So finally, we decided to hold the party in my house. And then, we just had to wait for the big day to arrive. Explain how you felt about the experience I was so tired by the end because the menu I had worked on with my uncle included so many dishes. It took most of the day to make everything but the food he made was amazing and everyone commented on how great it was, which was a relief. It was good that we had planned it in advance, even though it meant waiting for the day to come, which was a little nerve-wracking.
A meal for the family When it happened I'm going to talk about the time I cooked a huge meal for all my family at my house about one month ago. What the nice thing was It was my mum's 50th birthday and we'd been planning it for quite a while. How long you waited We had toyed with the idea a few months prior to her birthday and only really decided to do it a month before her actual birthday. Once I had made the menu, it was just a case of waiting for it to come. At that time, my uncle, who is a chef, changed the menu a number of times. Why you waited for a long time Because it was my mum's 50th, we wanted to make it special and so I, my sister and my uncle had got together months before to discuss ideas about what we could do to celebrate it. We had been thinking about restaurants, or trips to the countryside together but they all proved quite expensive. So finally, we decided to hold the party in my house. And then, we just had to wait for the big day to arrive. Explain how you felt about the experience I was so tired by the end because the menu I had worked on with my uncle included so many dishes. It took most of the day to make everything but the food he made was amazing and everyone commented on how great it was, which was a relief. It was good that we had planned it in advance, even though it meant waiting for the day to come, which was a little nerve-wracking.
Vocabulário
  • cook a huge meal
    cook a huge meal
  • toy with the idea
    toy with the idea
  • prior to
    prior to
  • a number of times
    a number of times
  • amazing
    amazing
  • include so many dishes
    include so many dishes
  • prove
    prove
  • plan in advance
    plan in advance
  • big day to arrive
    big day to arrive
  • nerve-wracking
    nerve-wracking
Exemplo
I remember the anticipation vividly; it was in my freshman year of college when I found myself waiting for something truly special - my first-ever DSLR camera. I had been enamored with photography for years and had always dreamt of owning a professional-grade camera. The catch, however, was the hefty price tag. As a student on a tight budget, I had to save money diligently for several months. During that time, I worked part-time jobs, avoided frivolous expenses, and even sold some items online. It was a prolonged period of scrimping and saving, which, at times, felt quite laborious. When the day finally arrived to make the purchase, my heart was pounding with excitement and a tinge of anxiety. The moment I held the camera in my hands, a rush of euphoria washed over me. It felt as though all the waiting and sacrifice had culminated in this singular moment. Looking back, the experience was a blend of anticipation and satisfaction, tinged with the valuable lesson of patience. The wait taught me the worth of delayed gratification, and that sometimes, the best things in life are those for which we have waited patiently. In this case, the protracted wait made the eventual acquisition feel all the more rewarding.
I remember the anticipation vividly; it was in my freshman year of college when I found myself waiting for something truly special - my first-ever DSLR camera. I had been enamored with photography for years and had always dreamt of owning a professional-grade camera. The catch, however, was the hefty price tag. As a student on a tight budget, I had to save money diligently for several months. During that time, I worked part-time jobs, avoided frivolous expenses, and even sold some items online. It was a prolonged period of scrimping and saving, which, at times, felt quite laborious. When the day finally arrived to make the purchase, my heart was pounding with excitement and a tinge of anxiety. The moment I held the camera in my hands, a rush of euphoria washed over me. It felt as though all the waiting and sacrifice had culminated in this singular moment. Looking back, the experience was a blend of anticipation and satisfaction, tinged with the valuable lesson of patience. The wait taught me the worth of delayed gratification, and that sometimes, the best things in life are those for which we have waited patiently. In this case, the protracted wait made the eventual acquisition feel all the more rewarding.
Análise Gramatical
- Combination of complex and simple sentences: For example, "When the day finally arrived to make the purchase, my heart was pounding with excitement and a tinge of anxiety," this sentence uses "when" to introduce a time adverbial clause. - Proper use of tenses: The answer uses the simple past tense to describe past events, such as "I had been enamored with photography for years." - Expression of levels: Phrases like "however," "during that time," and "looking back" are used to express levels and depth. - Logical coherence and timeline: By using "when," "finally," and "therefore," the answer ensures the coherence of time and logic. - Advanced vocabulary and accuracy: Words like "culminated," "protracted," and "acquisition" are used to show advanced and accurate vocabulary.
Vocabulário
  • Anticipation
    Anticipation
  • Enamored
    Enamored
  • Hefty price tag
    Hefty price tag
  • Diligently
    Diligently
  • Frivolous expenses
    Frivolous expenses
  • Prolonged
    Prolonged
  • Culminated
    Culminated
  • Delayed gratification
    Delayed gratification
  • Protracted
    Protracted
  • Acquisition
    Acquisition