Exemplo da Banda 7
Tópico: Describe a party that you enjoyed
Exemplo
A surprise party When and where the party was held I'm going to talk about a surprise party I held about six months ago for my best friend. I held it in my apartment, which is quite small. Who attended the party I invited ten close friends from our course at university and we all arrived about an hour before my best friend did so we could set everything up. There was so much to do but we all worked together to decorate the room and prepare the food. What kind of party it was As I said, it was a surprise party so my best friend had no idea about it. She was turning 21 and going to move abroad soon so it was the last chance to celebrate with her for a while. I took a photo of her as she walked in and it's the moment we've just turned the lights on to surprise her. She looks really shocked and it captures the exact moment that everyone shouted 'surprise'. It's such a great photo although she thinks she looks really weird. What you did at the party I had told her she could come for dinner and so we prepared a feast. We had such a good time all together, eating, drinking and dancing. Explain why you enjoyed the party It was the first time I'd thrown a surprise party and it was such a success. She had no idea about it and she was so grateful. It's such a great memory. It was a lot of work though so I don't know if I'd volunteer to do it again, but it was certainly worth the effort.
A surprise party When and where the party was held I'm going to talk about a surprise party I held about six months ago for my best friend. I held it in my apartment, which is quite small. Who attended the party I invited ten close friends from our course at university and we all arrived about an hour before my best friend did so we could set everything up. There was so much to do but we all worked together to decorate the room and prepare the food. What kind of party it was As I said, it was a surprise party so my best friend had no idea about it. She was turning 21 and going to move abroad soon so it was the last chance to celebrate with her for a while. I took a photo of her as she walked in and it's the moment we've just turned the lights on to surprise her. She looks really shocked and it captures the exact moment that everyone shouted 'surprise'. It's such a great photo although she thinks she looks really weird. What you did at the party I had told her she could come for dinner and so we prepared a feast. We had such a good time all together, eating, drinking and dancing. Explain why you enjoyed the party It was the first time I'd thrown a surprise party and it was such a success. She had no idea about it and she was so grateful. It's such a great memory. It was a lot of work though so I don't know if I'd volunteer to do it again, but it was certainly worth the effort.
Vocabulário
  • hosted
    hosted
  • set everything up
    set everything up
  • decorate the room
    decorate the room
  • prepare the food
    prepare the food
  • capture the exact moment
    capture the exact moment
  • last chance to celebrate
    last chance to celebrate
  • prepare a feast
    prepare a feast
  • thrown a surprise party
    thrown a surprise party
  • grateful
    grateful
  • worth the effort
    worth the effort
Exemplo
A couple of years ago, I attended a delightful garden party to celebrate a close friend's engagement. The event took place in her expansive backyard, beautifully adorned with twinkling fairy lights and vibrant flower arrangements. It was a summer evening, and the atmosphere was nothing short of magical. The party was essentially a casual get-together but had an elegant touch to it. The diverse mix of people, from family members to college friends, contributed to a convivial vibe. What made the party stand out was the live acoustic music that added a sense of serenity, counterbalancing the jovial laughter and animated conversations. As for why I enjoyed the party, multiple factors came into play. First and foremost, the ambience was welcoming, making everyone feel instantly at home. Secondly, the host had put meticulous effort into planning, evident from the array of delectable appetizers to the inventive cocktail menu. Last but not least, the evening was brimming with heartwarming moments. The couple exchanged personalized vows, and you could sense the palpable emotion in the air, making the celebration not just fun but profoundly meaningful. In essence, the party was an amalgamation of excellent company, scrumptious food, and an atmosphere imbued with love and happiness. It's an experience that holds a special place in my heart, one I fondly reminisce about.
A couple of years ago, I attended a delightful garden party to celebrate a close friend's engagement. The event took place in her expansive backyard, beautifully adorned with twinkling fairy lights and vibrant flower arrangements. It was a summer evening, and the atmosphere was nothing short of magical. The party was essentially a casual get-together but had an elegant touch to it. The diverse mix of people, from family members to college friends, contributed to a convivial vibe. What made the party stand out was the live acoustic music that added a sense of serenity, counterbalancing the jovial laughter and animated conversations. As for why I enjoyed the party, multiple factors came into play. First and foremost, the ambience was welcoming, making everyone feel instantly at home. Secondly, the host had put meticulous effort into planning, evident from the array of delectable appetizers to the inventive cocktail menu. Last but not least, the evening was brimming with heartwarming moments. The couple exchanged personalized vows, and you could sense the palpable emotion in the air, making the celebration not just fun but profoundly meaningful. In essence, the party was an amalgamation of excellent company, scrumptious food, and an atmosphere imbued with love and happiness. It's an experience that holds a special place in my heart, one I fondly reminisce about.
Análise Gramatical
Non-restrictive relative clause application: For example, in "the event took place in her expansive backyard, beautifully adorned with twinkling fairy lights and vibrant flower arrangements," "beautifully adorned with twinkling fairy lights and vibrant flower arrangements" is a non-restrictive relative clause used to further describe "her expansive backyard," adding richness to the description. Reasonable combination of adjectives and adverbs: Like "essentially a casual get-together but had an elegant touch to it," this sentence uses "essentially" and "elegant touch" to accurately and vividly describe the style of the party. Use of parallel structure: In "the party was an amalgamation of excellent company, scrumptious food, and an atmosphere imbued with love and happiness," "excellent company, scrumptious food, and an atmosphere" form a parallel structure, making the sentence more smooth and powerful. Combination of conditional clause and main clause: For example, "If the weather is fine, I usually head there on weekends," not only uses a conditional clause but also combines naturally with the main clause, adding complexity to the sentence. Combination of advanced vocabulary and complex sentences: "It's an experience that holds a special place in my heart, one I fondly reminisce about" uses "that holds a special place in my heart" as a relative clause and adds "one I fondly reminisce about" afterward, increasing the depth and accuracy of the expression.
Vocabulário
  • Delightful
    Delightful
  • Expansive
    Expansive
  • Adorned
    Adorned
  • Convivial
    Convivial
  • Meticulous
    Meticulous
  • Delectable
    Delectable
  • Palpable
    Palpable
  • Amalgamation
    Amalgamation
  • Scrumptious
    Scrumptious
  • Reminisce
    Reminisce