Exemplo da Banda 7
Tópico: Describe a time when you were teaching a friend or a relative to do something
Exemplo
Teaching my cousin to cook Who you taught I'm going to talk about the time I taught my younger cousin, Sarah, how to cook. She's always been interested in cooking but never really knew where to start. What you taught him/her to do I decided to teach her how to make a simple yet delicious dish—spaghetti carbonara. It's one of my favorites because it's quick, requires few ingredients, and is incredibly tasty. How easy it was to teach him/her Teaching Sarah was surprisingly easy. She was very eager to learn and listened attentively to all the instructions I gave her. She was particularly good at following the recipe and timing everything perfectly, which is crucial for a dish like carbonara where the pasta needs to be just right. Explain how you felt about teaching this friend/relative I felt really proud and happy about teaching her. It was a wonderful experience to share something I'm passionate about with someone I care about. Seeing her excitement as she cooked and her satisfaction with the final dish was incredibly rewarding. It reminded me of the joy that cooking can bring, not just through the food itself but also through the shared experience of making it.
Teaching my cousin to cook Who you taught I'm going to talk about the time I taught my younger cousin, Sarah, how to cook. She's always been interested in cooking but never really knew where to start. What you taught him/her to do I decided to teach her how to make a simple yet delicious dish—spaghetti carbonara. It's one of my favorites because it's quick, requires few ingredients, and is incredibly tasty. How easy it was to teach him/her Teaching Sarah was surprisingly easy. She was very eager to learn and listened attentively to all the instructions I gave her. She was particularly good at following the recipe and timing everything perfectly, which is crucial for a dish like carbonara where the pasta needs to be just right. Explain how you felt about teaching this friend/relative I felt really proud and happy about teaching her. It was a wonderful experience to share something I'm passionate about with someone I care about. Seeing her excitement as she cooked and her satisfaction with the final dish was incredibly rewarding. It reminded me of the joy that cooking can bring, not just through the food itself but also through the shared experience of making it.
Análise Gramatical
The answer effectively uses a variety of sentence structures, enhancing the narrative's clarity and engagement. For example, "I'm going to talk about the time I taught my younger cousin, Sarah, how to cook," sets the stage with a simple future tense, while "She was particularly good at following the recipe and timing everything perfectly," uses past continuous tense to describe ongoing actions in the past. The use of modal verbs like "was" and "is" helps in expressing abilities and characteristics smoothly. The response is well-organized, with clear transitions between different sections of the prompt, which helps maintain a logical flow.
Vocabulário
  • - **younger cousin**: Indicates the relationship and age, adding a personal touch.
    - **younger cousin**: Indicates the relationship and age, adding a personal touch.
  • - **simple yet delicious dish**: Combines simplicity and appeal, enhancing the description of the dish.
    - **simple yet delicious dish**: Combines simplicity and appeal, enhancing the description of the dish.
  • - **spaghetti carbonara**: Specific dish choice adds authenticity and detail.
    - **spaghetti carbonara**: Specific dish choice adds authenticity and detail.
  • - **eager to learn**: Describes the cousin's attitude, adding depth to her character.
    - **eager to learn**: Describes the cousin's attitude, adding depth to her character.
  • - **listened attentively**: Emphasizes the cousin's dedication and focus.
    - **listened attentively**: Emphasizes the cousin's dedication and focus.
  • - **timing everything perfectly**: Highlights skill and precision, important in cooking.
    - **timing everything perfectly**: Highlights skill and precision, important in cooking.
  • - **wonderful experience**: Conveys positive emotions associated with the teaching experience.
    - **wonderful experience**: Conveys positive emotions associated with the teaching experience.
  • - **passionate about**: Shows a deep interest, making the narrative more engaging.
    - **passionate about**: Shows a deep interest, making the narrative more engaging.
  • - **satisfaction with the final dish**: Reflects the successful outcome and emotional reward.
    - **satisfaction with the final dish**: Reflects the successful outcome and emotional reward.
  • - **shared experience**: Emphasizes the communal and relational aspect of the activity.
    - **shared experience**: Emphasizes the communal and relational aspect of the activity.
  • These vocabulary choices enrich the narrative by providing specific details and expressing nuanced emotions, making the story more vivid and relatable.
    These vocabulary choices enrich the narrative by providing specific details and expressing nuanced emotions, making the story more vivid and relatable.