Exemplo da Banda 7
Tópico: Describe a person who inspired you to do something interesting
Exemplo
An inspiring teacher Who he/she is I'm going to talk about my high school art teacher, Mr. Thompson. He was a truly inspiring individual who had a profound impact on my life during my formative years. How you knew him/her I first met Mr. Thompson when I was in the ninth grade. He was my art teacher, and from the very first class, I could tell that he was different from any other teacher I had encountered. His passion for art was contagious, and he had a unique way of encouraging students to explore their creativity. What interesting thing you did One of the most interesting things I did, thanks to Mr. Thompson, was participate in a community mural project. He organized this initiative to beautify a neglected wall in our neighborhood. It was a massive undertaking, involving students, local artists, and community members. We spent weeks planning, sketching, and finally painting the mural, which depicted scenes from our town's history and culture. And explain how he/she inspired you to do it Mr. Thompson inspired me to take part in this project by showing me the power of art to bring people together and make a positive impact on the community. He often spoke about how art could be a force for change and how it could transform ordinary spaces into something extraordinary. His enthusiasm and dedication were infectious, and he made me believe that I could contribute to something meaningful, even as a high school student. Through his guidance, I learned not only about art techniques but also about teamwork, perseverance, and the importance of giving back to the community. The mural project was a turning point for me, as it opened my eyes to the potential of art as a tool for social change. Mr. Thompson's encouragement and belief in my abilities gave me the confidence to pursue my passion for art further, and I will always be grateful for the inspiration he provided.
An inspiring teacher Who he/she is I'm going to talk about my high school art teacher, Mr. Thompson. He was a truly inspiring individual who had a profound impact on my life during my formative years. How you knew him/her I first met Mr. Thompson when I was in the ninth grade. He was my art teacher, and from the very first class, I could tell that he was different from any other teacher I had encountered. His passion for art was contagious, and he had a unique way of encouraging students to explore their creativity. What interesting thing you did One of the most interesting things I did, thanks to Mr. Thompson, was participate in a community mural project. He organized this initiative to beautify a neglected wall in our neighborhood. It was a massive undertaking, involving students, local artists, and community members. We spent weeks planning, sketching, and finally painting the mural, which depicted scenes from our town's history and culture. And explain how he/she inspired you to do it Mr. Thompson inspired me to take part in this project by showing me the power of art to bring people together and make a positive impact on the community. He often spoke about how art could be a force for change and how it could transform ordinary spaces into something extraordinary. His enthusiasm and dedication were infectious, and he made me believe that I could contribute to something meaningful, even as a high school student. Through his guidance, I learned not only about art techniques but also about teamwork, perseverance, and the importance of giving back to the community. The mural project was a turning point for me, as it opened my eyes to the potential of art as a tool for social change. Mr. Thompson's encouragement and belief in my abilities gave me the confidence to pursue my passion for art further, and I will always be grateful for the inspiration he provided.
Análise Gramatical
The answer effectively uses a variety of sentence structures, including complex sentences, to convey detailed information. For example, "He was a truly inspiring individual who had a profound impact on my life during my formative years." This sentence uses a relative clause to add depth. The use of past tense is consistent and appropriate for recounting past events, such as "I first met Mr. Thompson when I was in the ninth grade." The answer also includes the use of modal verbs to express possibility and ability, as seen in "He made me believe that I could contribute to something meaningful."
Vocabulário
  • profound impact
    profound impact
  • formative years
    formative years
  • contagious passion
    contagious passion
  • explore creativity
    explore creativity
  • community mural project
    community mural project
  • beautify
    beautify
  • massive undertaking
    massive undertaking
  • local artists
    local artists
  • positive impact
    positive impact
  • force for change
    force for change
  • transform ordinary spaces
    transform ordinary spaces
  • enthusiasm and dedication
    enthusiasm and dedication
  • teamwork
    teamwork
  • perseverance
    perseverance
  • giving back to the community
    giving back to the community
  • turning point
    turning point
  • tool for social change
    tool for social change
  • pursue passion
    pursue passion