Exemplo da Banda 7
Tópico: Describe a time when you helped a family member
Exemplo
Helping my sister move When it was I'm going to talk about a time when I helped my sister move to a new apartment. This happened about six months ago, during the summer holidays. What you did My sister had just gotten a new job in a different city and needed to move all her belongings from our hometown to her new place. She was quite stressed about the whole process, so I offered to help her out. We rented a moving truck and spent an entire weekend packing up her things, loading them into the truck, and then driving to her new apartment. Once we arrived, we had to unload everything and help her set up her new home. It was a lot of physical work, and we were both exhausted by the end of it. Who you helped I helped my younger sister, who is very close to me. We've always had a strong bond, and I knew that she needed support during this big transition in her life. She was moving to a new city where she didn't know anyone, and I wanted to make the process as smooth as possible for her. And explain how you felt about it Helping my sister move was tiring but incredibly rewarding. I felt a deep sense of satisfaction knowing that I could be there for her during such an important time. It also gave us a chance to spend quality time together, reminiscing about old memories and talking about her exciting new job. Despite the physical exhaustion, I felt emotionally fulfilled and happy that I could support her. It strengthened our relationship even more, and I felt proud of her for taking such a big step in her career.
Helping my sister move When it was I'm going to talk about a time when I helped my sister move to a new apartment. This happened about six months ago, during the summer holidays. What you did My sister had just gotten a new job in a different city and needed to move all her belongings from our hometown to her new place. She was quite stressed about the whole process, so I offered to help her out. We rented a moving truck and spent an entire weekend packing up her things, loading them into the truck, and then driving to her new apartment. Once we arrived, we had to unload everything and help her set up her new home. It was a lot of physical work, and we were both exhausted by the end of it. Who you helped I helped my younger sister, who is very close to me. We've always had a strong bond, and I knew that she needed support during this big transition in her life. She was moving to a new city where she didn't know anyone, and I wanted to make the process as smooth as possible for her. And explain how you felt about it Helping my sister move was tiring but incredibly rewarding. I felt a deep sense of satisfaction knowing that I could be there for her during such an important time. It also gave us a chance to spend quality time together, reminiscing about old memories and talking about her exciting new job. Despite the physical exhaustion, I felt emotionally fulfilled and happy that I could support her. It strengthened our relationship even more, and I felt proud of her for taking such a big step in her career.
Análise Gramatical
The answer effectively uses a variety of sentence structures, including simple, compound, and complex sentences, which enhances the fluency and coherence of the speech. For example, "We rented a moving truck and spent an entire weekend packing up her things, loading them into the truck, and then driving to her new apartment." This sentence combines multiple actions using conjunctions. The use of past tense is consistent and appropriate for describing a past event, such as "This happened about six months ago" and "I offered to help her out." The answer also includes relative clauses, adding depth to the explanation, as seen in "who is very close to me" and "where she didn't know anyone."
Vocabulário
  • - **moving truck**: A vehicle used for transporting large items, typically during a move.
    - **moving truck**: A vehicle used for transporting large items, typically during a move.
  • - **belongings**: Personal items or possessions.
    - **belongings**: Personal items or possessions.
  • - **stressed**: Feeling anxious or worried.
    - **stressed**: Feeling anxious or worried.
  • - **physical work**: Tasks that require bodily effort.
    - **physical work**: Tasks that require bodily effort.
  • - **exhausted**: Extremely tired.
    - **exhausted**: Extremely tired.
  • - **transition**: A period of change from one state or condition to another.
    - **transition**: A period of change from one state or condition to another.
  • - **satisfaction**: A feeling of contentment or pleasure.
    - **satisfaction**: A feeling of contentment or pleasure.
  • - **reminiscing**: Recalling past experiences or events.
    - **reminiscing**: Recalling past experiences or events.
  • - **emotionally fulfilled**: Feeling complete and satisfied on an emotional level.
    - **emotionally fulfilled**: Feeling complete and satisfied on an emotional level.
  • - **strengthened our relationship**: Made the bond between people stronger.
    - **strengthened our relationship**: Made the bond between people stronger.
  • By using these key vocabulary terms, the answer demonstrates a good range of language and accurately conveys the experience and emotions involved in helping a family member.
    By using these key vocabulary terms, the answer demonstrates a good range of language and accurately conveys the experience and emotions involved in helping a family member.