Exemplo da Banda 7

Pergunta: ls it necessary to give advice to children?

Ideia 1

Yes, it is
Yes, it is
Resposta Modelo
Definitely. Young people need guidance to handle life's challenges. We go through a lot, and when we're young, it's hard to know how to deal with everything. This sometimes leads to bad decisions. Without someone to guide us, it's difficult to make good choices.
Definitely. Young people need guidance to handle life's challenges. We go through a lot, and when we're young, it's hard to know how to deal with everything. This sometimes leads to bad decisions. Without someone to guide us, it's difficult to make good choices.
Absolutley. They need help navigating the challenges that they are going to face in life. We experience so many different things in life and when we are young, we just don’t know how to deal with some of them so sometimes this leads us into making some dodgy decisions. If there’s no one to guide us when we face these problems then it’s hard to make the right choice.
Absolutley. They need help navigating the challenges that they are going to face in life. We experience so many different things in life and when we are young, we just don’t know how to deal with some of them so sometimes this leads us into making some dodgy decisions. If there’s no one to guide us when we face these problems then it’s hard to make the right choice.
Análise Gramatical
Present participle as adverbial: "navigating the challenges" This phrase uses the present participle as an adverbial to describe the action that requires assistance, adding complexity to the sentence. Past participle as object complement: "leads us into making some dodgy decisions" This expression uses the past participle as an object complement to explain the consequences of poor decisions, showcasing the accuracy and complexity of language. Conditional sentence: "If there’s no one to guide us" Using a conditional sentence to express the potential consequences of lacking guidance, adding logical consistency and complexity to the sentence.
Vocabulário
  • navigating
    navigating
  • challenge
    challenge
  • face
    face
  • deal with
    deal with
  • dodgy
    dodgy
  • guide
    guide

Ideia 2

No, not always
No, not always
Resposta Modelo
No, not always. I believe children should sometimes make their own mistakes to learn from them. It helps them become more independent and self-reliant. If someone is always advising them and telling them what to do, they might become indecisive and unable to function without others' support when that person is no longer there.
No, not always. I believe children should sometimes make their own mistakes to learn from them. It helps them become more independent and self-reliant. If someone is always advising them and telling them what to do, they might become indecisive and unable to function without others' support when that person is no longer there.
No, not always. I think children sometimes need to make their own mistakes so they can learn from them. This makes them more independent and self-reliant. If there is someone to advise them all the time and tell them what to do, then they are going to be indecisive when that person isn’t around anymore and unable to function without the support of other people.
No, not always. I think children sometimes need to make their own mistakes so they can learn from them. This makes them more independent and self-reliant. If there is someone to advise them all the time and tell them what to do, then they are going to be indecisive when that person isn’t around anymore and unable to function without the support of other people.
Análise Gramatical
Conditional clause: "If there is someone to advise them all the time" The conditional clause describes a situation where there is always someone to guide, and the dependency that it might lead to, adding logical complexity and depth to the sentence. Reflexive pronouns: "make their own mistakes" Using the reflexive pronoun "their own" emphasizes the need for children to make their own mistakes, highlighting personal responsibility and autonomy. Present participles as subjects: "being indecisive" and "unable to function" These two present participles used as subjects describe the states that may arise when there is no guidance, adding complexity and depth to the sentence.
Vocabulário
  • make their own mistake
    make their own mistake
  • independent
    independent
  • self-reliant
    self-reliant
  • advise
    advise
  • indecisive
    indecisive
  • function
    function
  • support
    support