Shopping— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetitions, filler words and unclear phrases. Use correct grammar for possession and plurals (e.g., 'unnecessary things', 'not my necessity'). Keep the answer within 3–4 sentences and use a linking word when adding a reason.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy shopping. I often buy items even if they are not necessary because I like collecting things that interest me. However, I usually only make impulse purchases when I have enough money.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give a concise reason with specific detail. Reduce hesitations and filler sounds. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly, and correct collocations (e.g., 'lower cost', 'more expensive', 'on sale'). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I always compare prices when I shop because I want to get the best value for my money. For example, if I find the same product at a lower cost or on sale, I will choose that option.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and one or two specific reasons or examples. Improve grammar (e.g., 'it becomes difficult', 'there are many choices', 'authentic goods') and avoid repetition. Use a linking word such as 'because' or 'for example' when giving reasons. Keep sentences short and coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I find it difficult to make choices because there are so many options in shops. For example, when buying electronics or accessories I spend a lot of time comparing brands and quality before deciding.

Sugestão: Give a direct opinion in the first sentence and then support it with a specific reason or brief example. Remove hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., 'expensive products', 'lower-priced products', 'offer the same quality'). Use linking words such as 'because' or 'for example' to make the argument coherent and end with a concluding phrase.

Exemplo: No, I don't think expensive products are always better because lower-priced items can offer the same quality. For example, I have bought affordable kitchenware that performed as well as branded versions, so I judge products by quality rather than price.

× I really love to go to shop or to go to buy an unnecessary things and my and anything.

✓ I really love going shopping or buying unnecessary things and anything I like.

The verb 'love' is typically followed by a gerund (verb + -ing) when expressing enjoyment of an activity. Also 'go to shop' is unnatural; 'going shopping' is correct. 'an unnecessary things' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'an' and use 'things'. Reorganize phrase to be coherent: 'anything I like'. Suggestion: use gerunds after verbs of liking and ensure article-noun agreement.

× If I like it I will.

✓ If I like it, I will buy it.

The original sentence is grammatically short and unclear; adding the verb 'buy' completes the clause. Ensure the subject and verb agree; here 'I will buy' is appropriate. Also add a comma after the conditional clause for clarity.

× If I like it and I have money I will.

✓ If I like it and I have the money, I will buy it.

The conditional needs a main verb 'buy' to complete the thought. Include the definite article 'the' before 'money' to sound natural. Maintain present simple in the if-clause and future 'will' in the result clause.

× I will buy it even though it's not my nieces.

✓ I will buy it even though it's not mine.

'Not my nieces' is incorrect pronoun use and plural noun where possessive pronoun 'mine' is needed. Use 'mine' to show possession of the object. If intending 'niece's', that would require an apostrophe and singular possession, but context indicates 'not mine'.

× Yes, I always uh do oh compare uh prices uh uh when I shop because umm if I find it something uh much uh at uh lower Co cost.

✓ Yes, I always compare prices when I shop because if I find something at a much lower cost, ...

Remove filler words and reorder: 'compare prices when I shop' is correct. 'Find it something' is wrong word order; use 'find something'. Use the article 'a' with 'much lower cost' becomes 'a much lower cost' or better 'at a much lower cost'. Also 'Co' is irrelevant. Keep sentences concise and idiomatic.

× So rather than buying uh uh much more expense uh, since I love to buy things which are on.

✓ So rather than buying much more expensive items, since I love to buy things that are on sale.

Use the adjective 'expensive' in comparative/adjective form 'more expensive' or 'much more expensive' to modify 'items'. 'Buying much more expense' is incorrect. 'Which are on' is incomplete; likely 'on sale' is intended. Use correct nouns 'items' and complete the phrase.

× Yes, it really become difficult for me to make choices whenever I try to shop or buy things because on a shopping set as there are many, there are more choices.

✓ Yes, it really becomes difficult for me to make choices whenever I try to shop or buy things because in a shopping set there are many options.

Use third-person singular present 'becomes' to agree with 'it'. 'On a shopping set' is unnatural; use 'in a shopping setting' or 'in stores' and 'many options' instead of 'many, there are more choices'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and clearer vocabulary.

× And getting a good and authentic cheese for myself or or any other accessory or electronics, it really take a lot of thinking for me.

✓ And getting a good, authentic choice for myself, whether it's an accessory or electronics, really takes a lot of thought for me.

Use gerund 'getting' is acceptable but restructure sentence. 'Cheese' is likely misheard; replace with 'choice'. 'It really take' should be 'really takes' to match singular subject. Use 'a lot of thought' rather than 'a lot of thinking'. Avoid redundant 'or or'.

× No, I really don't think so that umm only expenses are better.

✓ No, I really don't think that only expensive products are better.

Replace 'expenses' (noun) with 'expensive' (adjective) to modify 'products'. 'Don't think so that' is ungrammatical; use 'don't think that'. Clarify noun 'products' for completeness.

× Sometimes uh that uh products which are at lesser prices, umm uh offers same quality and uh qu uh quantity as expensive ones.

✓ Sometimes products that are at lower prices offer the same quality and quantity as expensive ones.

Use 'lower prices' not 'lesser prices'. 'Products which are at' -> 'products that are at' is acceptable. 'Offers' must agree with plural subject 'products' so use 'offer'. Include 'the same' and remove filler. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct comparative vocabulary.

× Even uh it's just because it's just the price and the branding, which makes them expensive.

✓ Often it's just the price and branding that make them expensive.

Remove redundant 'just'. Use relative clause 'that make them expensive' with plural verb 'make' to agree with compound subject 'price and branding'. Keep sentence concise and natural.

× So uh, if I uh like think and uh.

✓ So, if I like something, I'll consider buying it.

Original fragment is incomplete. Provide a complete conditional result clause. Use clear structure: if-clause + result clause. Avoid filler words and ensure sentence finishes with a main verb.