Shopping— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and more natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers like 'uh', correct grammar (e.g. 'doing shopping' → 'shopping'), and limit to up to 3–4 short sentences. Add a specific detail to support your reason (what you buy, where).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially with friends or family. I like browsing online for new clothes and trying different styles in stores. For example, last weekend I went with a friend and bought a casual jacket because I liked its colour and fit.

Sugestão: Make your answer direct and correct grammar: use a topic sentence stating whether you compare prices, then give a clear reason with linking words (because/so). Remove repetition and filler words. Provide a specific example of how you compare prices (e.g. online vs in-store).

Exemplo: Yes, I always compare prices because clothing costs vary a lot between shops. For instance, I often check three online stores and one local shop before buying so I can find the best price and save money.

Sugestão: Structure the answer: start with a clear yes/no, explain why using linking words, and give a concise example of what you do to decide (research, read reviews). Correct grammar and avoid repetition. Be specific about the research method (reviews, comparisons).

Exemplo: Yes, I often find it hard to choose because there are many attractive options. Therefore I research online and read customer reviews before buying. For example, when choosing a phone case I compare materials and read ratings to pick the best one.

Sugestão: Give a clear position (no or it depends), then explain reasons with specific examples. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words (however, for example) and mention criteria for judging quality (materials, warranty, reviews).

Exemplo: I don't think expensive items are always better; it depends on the product and brand. For example, some non-branded kitchen tools work well and cost less, while high-end electronics may offer better durability and support. So I look at reviews, materials and warranty before deciding.

× Yes, I enjoy doing shopping with my friends or family because, uh, I like to buy the things which I like in the Internet and I love to try different varieties of clothes.

✓ Yes, I enjoy shopping with my friends or family because I like to buy things on the Internet and I love trying different styles of clothes.

'Enjoy doing shopping' is incorrect; after 'enjoy' use the -ing form of the verb without 'do' (enjoy shopping). 'Buy the things which I like in the Internet' has preposition and article issues; use 'buy things on the Internet'. 'Try different varieties of clothes' is awkward; use 'try different styles of clothes' or 'try on different clothes'. Improve by using correct -ing forms and proper prepositions.

× So I enjoy shopping with my friends and families.

✓ So I enjoy shopping with my friends and family.

'Friends' is plural and 'families' is plural; saying both is redundant and 'families' is unnatural here. Use 'friends and family' to refer to both groups collectively. Ensure number agreement and natural collocations.

× As I do shop more, I will obviously compare the prices from the various different shop because because the the price of clothes varies from one shop to another shop.

✓ As I shop more, I obviously compare prices from various shops because the price of clothes varies from one shop to another.

'Do shop' is unnecessary; simple present 'shop' is preferred. 'Will obviously compare' conflicts with general habit, so use simple present 'compare'. 'Various different shop' has number and determiners wrong; use 'various shops'. Remove duplicated words 'because because' and 'the the'. Also avoid repeating 'shop' at the end. Maintain subject-verb agreement and correct plurality.

× So when comparing price I can get clothes as affordable and budget friendly.

✓ So when comparing prices I can find clothes that are affordable and budget-friendly.

Use plural 'prices' when comparing. Use 'find' instead of 'get' for better collocation. 'As affordable' is incorrect; use 'that are affordable'. 'Budget friendly' should be hyphenated as 'budget-friendly' when used as a compound adjective. Prepositions and collocations were corrected.

× Yes, because whenever I go on shopping then I find different varieties of products which I like then I have to buy one new one.

✓ Yes, because whenever I go shopping I find many different products I like, so I feel I have to buy something new.

'Go on shopping' is incorrect; use 'go shopping'. The sentence used redundant conjunctions 'then' and 'so' awkwardly; streamline to 'I find... so I feel...' 'Different varieties of products' is wordy; use 'many different products'. 'Buy one new one' is repetitive; use 'buy something new'. Improve conjunction use and eliminate redundancy.

× So it will be difficult for me to choose the right one and the good quality 1.

✓ So it is difficult for me to choose the right one and one of good quality.

'The good quality 1' is ungrammatical and contains a stray '1'. Use 'one of good quality' to indicate selecting an item with good quality. Keep tense consistent and use correct noun phrase structure.

× So I do research on the online and by the correct and useful one products.

✓ So I research online and buy the correct and useful products.

'Do research on the online' is incorrect; use 'research online'. 'By the correct and useful one products' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'buy the correct and useful products'. Correct verb choice and prepositions.

× Well, it depends on person a perceptive because expensive one.

✓ Well, it depends on a person's perspective; expensive items are not always better.

Word order and article use are incorrect: 'on person a perceptive' should be 'on a person's perspective'. 'Because expensive one' is a fragment; combine into a full sentence. Fix sentence structure and use possessive form.

× Some expensive expensive products are not worth it of money and some cheap products are really good.

✓ Some expensive products are not worth the money, and some cheap products are really good.

Duplicated 'expensive' should be single. 'Not worth it of money' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'not worth the money'. Ensure natural comparative phrasing and remove repetition.

× So it depends on their quality and brands because branded products are really expensive not because of their quality but of.

✓ So it depends on the quality and the brand, because branded products are often expensive not only because of their quality but also because of the brand name.

Pronoun and noun choice is unclear: 'their quality and brands' should be 'the quality and the brand'. The final phrase was incomplete 'but of.' Complete the comparison with 'not only... but also...' and clarify that branding contributes to price. Improve pronoun reference and complete the sentence.