Shopping— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more direct and natural: start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I enjoy shopping), then give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g. “pessimistic in terms of clothing line”) and reduce repetition. Focus on correct grammar and concise phrasing.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy shopping. I usually go with my boyfriend when we need groceries, because we can split the shopping list and save time. I also like shopping with my friends, especially when we try on clothes and give each other honest opinions.

Sugestão: Structure the answer: give a clear topic sentence (Yes, I compare prices) and one or two concise reasons using linking words. Avoid redundant phrasing and improve grammar (e.g. “I can less the cost”). Use specific examples such as comparing brands or checking apps to illustrate your point.

Exemplo: Yes, I compare prices because I budget carefully. For example, I check supermarket apps and compare brand prices so I can choose the best value, which helps me save money for other expenses.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly: start with a topic sentence (No, it is not difficult) and explain briefly why, using correct grammar and clear linking words. Avoid vague phrases like “have the less that important.” Give a specific strategy you use to decide, such as making a shopping list or setting a budget.

Exemplo: No, it's not difficult because I always make a shopping list and set a budget before I go. That way I buy what I need first and only add extras if I still have money left.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion with one or two specific reasons and examples. Use correct grammar ("it depends on the product") and coherent linking words (e.g. "however", "for example"). Mention criteria you use to judge quality (brand reputation, materials, reviews) rather than vague advice like "read the ingredients" unless relevant to the product type.

Exemplo: No, I don't think expensive items are always better. It depends on the product: for electronics I check reviews and specifications, while for food I read the ingredients. Sometimes cheaper brands offer similar quality at a lower price.

× Most of the time we do shopping when we need to go to supermarket to purchase the things that we need.

✓ Most of the time we go shopping when we need to go to the supermarket to buy the things we need.

The phrase 'do shopping' is unnatural in this context; use 'go shopping'. The noun 'supermarket' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Purchase' is formal but acceptable; 'buy' is more natural. Also omit the redundant second 'that' after 'things'. Suggestion: use 'go shopping', include 'the' before 'supermarket', and use 'buy' or remove redundant words.

× And also I like the idea with my friends who is a pessimistic in terms of clothing line and I can sure that I enjoy it.

✓ I also like going with my friend who is pessimistic about clothing, and I can be sure that I enjoy it.

'Friends' (plural) conflicts with 'who is' (singular) so change to 'friend' or make verb plural. 'Pessimistic in terms of clothing line' is awkward; use 'pessimistic about clothing'. 'I can sure' is incorrect; use 'I can be sure' or 'I'm sure'. Suggestion: match noun and verb number, use correct preposition 'about', and use 'be sure' or 'sure' properly.

× Yes, as someone like the idea of budgeting, I will make sure that I can get the best deal and a big sale because I can know myself that I can get a big sale for it and I can less the cost of the item that I get and I will make sure that I purchase what I wanted.

✓ Yes, as someone who likes the idea of budgeting, I make sure I get the best deals and big discounts because I know I can reduce the cost of an item and I will make sure I buy what I want.

'Someone like' should be 'someone who likes' to match subject and verb. Tense and modality: use present simple for habits ('make sure I get'). 'Big sale' is incorrect; use 'big discounts' or 'sales'. 'I can less the cost' is ungrammatical; use 'reduce the cost'. 'Purchase what I wanted' mixes past; use 'buy what I want'. Suggestions: use 'who likes', present simple for habitual actions, and correct nouns 'discounts' and verb 'reduce'.

× No, because if I will go to shopping, I will make sure that I have the less that important.

✓ No, because if I go shopping, I make sure I leave less important items behind.

In conditional sentences of type 1, use present simple in the 'if' clause, not 'will'. 'Go to shopping' is incorrect; use 'go shopping'. 'Have the less that important' is ungrammatical; likely means 'leave less important items'. Suggestion: use 'if I go shopping' and a clear verb like 'leave' or 'exclude'.

× And so if I in that place, I will make sure that I already purchased the things that I need and I can make sure that I can add additional things I can and also to make sure that my money is enough for that things.

✓ And if I am in the store, I will make sure I have already bought the things I need, and I may add additional items only if I have enough money for them.

'If I in that place' needs verb 'am' and 'that place' is better as 'the store'. 'Already purchased' should be 'have already bought' for present perfect. 'Add additional things I can' is awkward; clarify with 'may add additional items only if I have enough money'. 'That things' should be 'those things' or 'them'. Suggestion: use correct verb 'am', present perfect for completed actions, and proper pronouns 'them'.

× No because it's depends of what product you will purchase and there's a lot of store that they can offer the best deal or big sale that they have.

✓ No, because it depends on which product you buy, and there are many stores that can offer great deals or big sales.

'It's depends' is wrong; use 'it depends'. Preposition should be 'depends on'. 'What product you will purchase' is awkward in this context; use 'which product you buy'. 'There's a lot of store' should be 'there are many stores' for plural agreement. 'That they can offer' is redundant; 'that can offer' or 'which offer' is better. Suggestion: use 'it depends on', correct plural agreement, and simpler verb forms.

× You can make sure that you will check every store so that you can get the OR you can get the smallest amount of you have.

✓ Make sure you check every store so that you can get the best price or the lowest possible amount.

Sentence is fragmented and contains 'OR' and unclear phrase 'smallest amount of you have'. Use imperative 'Make sure you check' or 'You should check', and clarify outcome 'best price' or 'lowest possible amount'. Suggestion: remove placeholders like 'OR' and express the intended comparison clearly.

× The important thing is to read the ingredients.

✓ The important thing is to read the ingredients.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. Suggestion: none.