Shopping— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer first, then add 1–2 specific supporting details. Use correct sentence structure and simple linking words. Avoid repetition and unrelated fragments. Focus on frequency, reasons, and an example. Pay attention to grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles, prepositions) and word choice (e.g., “go shopping”, “once a month”, “festivals”).

Exemplo: Yes, I like shopping. I usually go shopping once a month with a list because it helps me buy what I need. For example, before big festivals I shop for new clothes, but at other times I focus on essentials like groceries and toiletries.

Sugestão: Start with a direct answer (Yes/No) and provide a clear reason using proper grammar. If you do compare prices sometimes, explain when and how (online, using apps). Use linking words like “because” or “however.”

Exemplo: No, I don't always compare prices, because I usually buy familiar brands. However, when I buy expensive items or shop online, I check prices and reviews to make sure I get good value.

Sugestão: Answer directly and then explain briefly how you decide. Use clearer timeline and cause-effect linking words (e.g., “because”, “so”, “therefore”). Be specific about the role of social media or research and keep sentences short and grammatically correct.

Exemplo: No, I don't find it difficult to choose what to buy because I usually research products on social media and make my decision at home. Therefore, when I go to the store I only check the quality and then buy the item.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion (agree/disagree/partly) and support it with specific reasons and an example. Use comparative language correctly (e.g., “generally”, “often”, “sometimes”) and avoid absolute statements. Correct grammar: plural agreement and proper adjectives (e.g., “longer lifespan”).

Exemplo: I don't think expensive products are always better. Generally, more expensive items use higher-quality materials and last longer, but some affordable brands offer good quality too. For instance, I bought a mid-range phone that performs as well as a high-end model for my needs.

× Is I like shopping I use the list go for shopping one once a month got shopping is a one of the best part I in my life as well.

✓ I like shopping. I use a list when I go shopping. I go once a month. Shopping is one of the best parts of my life.

The original contains multiple pronoun and sentence structure errors. 'Is I like' uses incorrect word order and the pronoun 'I' is fine but the auxiliary 'Is' is wrong; correct simple statement is 'I like shopping' (Sentence structure error, ID 26 also applies but primary is pronoun/misordering). 'I use the list go for shopping' misuses articles and omits prepositions; use 'I use a list when I go shopping' (preposition 'when' and article 'a' needed). 'one once a month' is redundant and unclear; correct to 'I go once a month' (singular/plural not the issue). 'got shopping is a one of the best part I in my life' has wrong verb and article and word order; correct to 'Shopping is one of the best parts of my life' (use plural 'parts' and 'of my life'). Suggestions: split into short sentences, use 'a' before singular 'list', use 'when' before a clause, and use 'one of the best parts' with plural 'parts'.

× No, I didn't come compare the prize winner.

✓ No, I didn't compare prices.

The original mixes incorrect verb forms and words. 'Didn't come compare' wrongly inserts 'come'; the correct negative past tense is 'didn't compare'. 'Prize winner' is incorrect word choice for shopping context; the correct noun is 'prices'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary verbs, use 'didn't compare prices' to express past negative action. (ID 5: past tense issue)

× No, there is not difficulty for so because whenever I go for the shopping, I usually see the social media platform and I have already choice in from my home and I go and have a see good quality and I will purchase that closer.

✓ No, there is no difficulty for me because whenever I go shopping, I usually check social media and I already choose items from home. Then I go to see the quality and I buy the item that is closer or more convenient.

Multiple preposition and article errors: 'there is not difficulty for so' should be 'there is no difficulty for me' (use 'no' not 'not' after 'there is' and correct pronoun 'me'). 'go for the shopping' should be 'go shopping' (omit 'for' and article). 'see the social media platform' -> 'check social media' (no article, use 'check' or 'look at'). 'have already choice in from my home' -> 'already choose items from home' (use verb 'choose' and preposition 'from'). 'have a see good quality' -> 'go to see the quality' (use infinitive). Suggestions: use 'no' with 'there is', prefer 'go shopping', 'check social media', and place prepositions 'from' and 'to' correctly.

× Is expensive products are have a good quality products and cheaper ones have bad quality.

✓ Expensive products have good quality, and cheaper ones have worse quality.

'Is expensive products are have' contains incorrect auxiliary 'Is' and extra verbs; a simple present statement is 'Expensive products have good quality'. Use plural subject 'products' with plural verb 'have' (subject-verb agreement). 'Cheaper ones have bad quality' is grammatically possible but stylistically better as 'worse quality' to compare levels. Suggestion: remove unnecessary auxiliary words and use comparative adjective 'worse' for clearer comparison.

× The expensive products add for many years but cheaper are very lower part time.

✓ Expensive products last for many years, but cheaper ones last for a much shorter time.

'Add for many years' misuses verb 'add'; the intended verb is 'last'. 'Cheaper are very lower part time' incorrectly uses 'lower' and 'part time'; use 'a much shorter time' or 'a shorter lifespan'. Also add the pronoun 'ones' after 'cheaper' to refer to 'cheaper products'. Suggestions: use 'last' for longevity, 'a much shorter time' for contrast, and include 'ones' after comparatives when the noun is omitted.