Shopping— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be careful with grammar (subject-verb agreement and verb forms) and avoid run-on sentences. Make your answer slightly more concise and use a clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details linked with a connector.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially at the weekend. It helps me relax and recharge, and I particularly like browsing busy markets to find unique clothes and gadgets.

Sugestão: Fix small grammar and number expressions (plural forms and articles) and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use linking words to connect reason and example more smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I always compare prices because I often browse several online shopping apps and they are usually cheaper than local shops. For example, I recently saved money by comparing prices on two apps before buying clothes online.

Sugestão: Work on grammar (verb forms, plural forms, articles) and coherence. Keep sentences shorter and more logical: state your main idea, then give one clear specific example with concise result. Avoid vague phrases like "applauded by a lot and everybody thought that."

Exemplo: No, I find it easy to choose clothes because it feels fun and makes me feel independent. For example, I recently combined 1920s-style pieces with modern items, and many people complimented my outfit.

Sugestão: Correct plural and article mistakes and avoid repeating words. Structure your response: give a clear opinion, explain reasons with linking words, then give one concise specific example including a clear outcome.

Exemplo: No, I don't think expensive products are always better because quality depends on the brand and category. For example, premium brands often charge more for design and marketing, whereas mid-range brands can offer similar quality; last year I bought two pairs of shoes and the local, cheaper pair was more comfortable.

× I find it help me relax and mentally recharge and I enjoy browsing through busy markets to pick out clothes and gadgets.

✓ I find it helps me relax and mentally recharge, and I enjoy browsing through busy markets to pick out clothes and gadgets.

Subject 'it' requires a third-person singular verb 'helps'. This is a subject-verb agreement in the present tense; add 's' to 'help'. Also add a comma before 'and' to join two independent clauses.

× I often browse several online shopping app and find they are cheaper than the shops in my local area.

✓ I often browse several online shopping apps and find they are cheaper than the shops in my local area.

The noun 'app' must be plural to match 'several'. Use 'apps' to reflect plurality.

× it's fun and make me feel more independent.

✓ it's fun and makes me feel more independent.

The subject 'it' is third-person singular, so the verb must be 'makes' not 'make'. This fixes subject-verb agreement in present tense.

× I don't usually worry about other people's opinions and I like to experiment with different style.

✓ I don't usually worry about other people's opinions and I like to experiment with different styles.

The noun 'style' should be plural 'styles' because 'different' implies more than one kind. Use plural to match meaning.

× Most of time they work out well, like when I mixed 20s and modern pieces for a recent outfit, I was applauded by a lot and everybody thought that.

✓ Most of the time they work out well. For example, when I mixed 1920s and modern pieces for a recent outfit, a lot of people applauded, and everybody liked it.

Multiple issues: add missing article 'the' in 'Most of the time'. Split into clearer sentences and fix awkward phrasing. '20s' should be '1920s' or '20s styles' for clarity; use 'a lot of people applauded' instead of 'I was applauded by a lot', and replace 'everybody thought that' with 'everybody liked it' for grammatical and idiomatic clarity.

× I don't think expensive product are always better because it depends on the brand's reputation and product category.

✓ I don't think expensive products are always better because it depends on the brand's reputation and the product category.

Use plural 'products' to match 'expensive' in general. Also add article 'the' before 'product category' for specificity.

× For example some premium brand charge more for design and marketing while mid range brand brand can offer comparable quality at a lower price.

✓ For example, some premium brands charge more for design and marketing, while mid-range brands can offer comparable quality at a lower price.

Pluralize 'brand' to 'brands' to match 'some' and 'mid-range'. Add hyphen in 'mid-range' and commas for clarity. 'Charge' should be 'charge' with plural subject 'brands' (correct form). Removed duplicate 'brand'.

× Last year I bought 2 pair of shoes, one from a premium brand and one from a local brand and the local pair was just comfortable.

✓ Last year I bought two pairs of shoes, one from a premium brand and one from a local brand, and the local pair was just comfortable.

Use plural 'pairs' to match '2' and write numbers in words in formal speech. Add a comma before 'and' to separate clauses. 'Pair' must be plural when more than one pair was bought.