Shopping— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Reduce fillers (uh, um) and repetitive words. Use correct grammar (e.g., plural/singular, verb forms) and natural collocations (e.g., "casual wear", "smart-casual").

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy shopping for clothes. I like finding casual and smart-casual pieces that match my style, because choosing outfits makes me feel happy. Also, shopping is a relaxing way to spend my free time.

Sugestão: Provide a direct answer first, then give a clear reason with one specific example. Avoid repetition and finish your thought. Use linking words (because, so) to connect ideas and correct grammar ("I concentrate on quality").

Exemplo: Not usually. I focus more on the quality of clothes because I prefer items that last longer, so I often check the fabric and stitching instead of looking for the lowest price.

Sugestão: Answer directly and explain one clear reason with a specific detail. Avoid hesitations and repetition. Use linking words (for example, because) and correct sentence structure ("I find it hard to choose").

Exemplo: Yes, I often find it difficult to choose. For example, when there are many similar items I can't tell which is better, so I get confused and take a long time deciding.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with a specific reason or example. Remove repetitions and filler words. Use phrases like "not necessarily" and explain when price may reflect quality (brand, materials) and when it may not (markup).

Exemplo: Not necessarily. While some expensive products use better materials or design, often a high price reflects branding rather than quality. For instance, I bought an affordable jacket that lasted longer than a costly designer one.

× I do like shopping especially for clothes, finding outfit that suit my funny outfits like uh casual sweet St. wear or smart smart smart uh casual pieces uh, the suits must still makes me happy. It's also fun way to relax my free time.

✓ I do like shopping, especially for clothes, finding outfits that suit my style, like casual sweet streetwear or smart casual pieces; the outfits must still make me happy. It's also a fun way to relax in my free time.

Multiple errors: plural and singular forms (outfit -> outfits; the suits -> the outfits) and subject-verb agreement (suits -> suit; makes -> make) and articles and prepositions (fun way -> a fun way; relax my free time -> relax in my free time). Improve by ensuring nouns agree in number with verbs, use correct articles before countable nouns, and use the preposition 'in' with 'free time'. Suggested focus: check singular/plural nouns and match verb forms, add 'a' before 'fun way', use 'in' with 'free time'.

× I hardly compare prices when I buy, when I buy the clothes, when when I go to the shop because I I really concentrated on on the quality of the item such as the.

✓ I hardly compare prices when I buy clothes or when I go to the shop because I really concentrate on the quality of the items.

Tense and verb form errors: concentrated (past) should be present 'concentrate' to match habitual action; redundancy and article issues (the clothes -> clothes; the item -> the items). Improve by using present simple for habits, avoid repetition, and use plural 'items' when speaking generally.

× Oh yes, uh, definitely. I I, I really hard to choose, uh, to choose the item overnight shop, umm, because I think I, I really don't know what's different between umm, uh, between, between so, so many.

✓ Oh yes, definitely. I find it really hard to choose when shopping because I don't know the differences between so many items.

Missing verb: 'I really hard to choose' lacks a verb; correct form is 'I find it hard' or 'It's really hard for me to choose.' Also 'overnight shop' is unclear and unnecessary; use 'when shopping.' Improve by using an appropriate main verb ('find') and concise phrasing for clarity.

× Not really umm, because sometimes the, the item, the, the, the price is so high. Uh, it, it just, it's just umm, about the, the, the the company want to earn some money. Uh, it's not related to the quality.

✓ Not really, because sometimes the price of an item is very high. It's often just that the company wants to earn money; it's not related to the quality.

Issues: article use ('the item, the price' should be 'the price of an item' or 'an item's price'), verb form (company want -> company wants), and repetition. Use singular/plural and subject-verb agreement: 'company' is singular so use 'wants.' Improve by restructuring the sentence to 'the price of an item' and using correct verb agreement.