Party— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 全体として意味は伝わりますが、文法ミスや不自然な表現、冗長さが目立ちます。改善ポイントは以下の通りです： 1) 文法と語形の一致（例："parties offers" → "parties offer"）。 2) 自然な語順と簡潔さ（"Of course I like parties" は繰り返しなので一度で十分）。 3) 明確なトピック文を最初に置き、続けて具体的な理由や例を1〜2文で述べる。接続詞（because, and, so）を使って文をつなぐと流れが良くなります。 4) 不要な語や断片（"with very"）を削除し、具体的な活動を追加する（例：dancing, chatting, eating）。 改善例を練習して、1文目で結論、2〜3文目で具体例と感情を述べる練習をしてください。

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy parties because they allow me to relax and socialize with friends. For example, I like chatting with people I don’t see often and trying different foods, which makes the event lively. Overall, parties are a fun way to celebrate and catch up with others.

Sugestão: 内容が不明瞭で時制の使い方や語順が不自然です。改善ポイント： 1) 過去について尋ねられているので過去形や過去頻度の表現を使う（"when I was a kid"→"I had..."）。 2) 頻度表現は明確に（"twice a year"など）。 3) 理由を述べる際は簡潔に具体的に（"because my parents were busy"など）接続詞でつなぐ。冗長な表現（"there are less time"）は避ける。 4) 1〜2文で答え、必要なら具体例を1つ入れる。

Exemplo: When I was a child, we usually had parties about twice a year, mostly for birthdays and holidays. My family was quite busy, so we didn’t celebrate often, but those occasions were always special.

Sugestão: 答えはある程度伝わりますが、文法ミス、語彙の使い方の誤り、不完全な文があります。改善ポイント： 1) 一貫した時制を使う（過去の出来事なら過去形で）。 2) 不要な語の重複を避ける（"cost cost"→"cost"）。 3) 細かい説明を加える（どんな準備をしたか、何が嬉しかったか、費用がかかった理由）で内容を具体化する。 4) 文を完結させる。接続詞（but, so, because）で理由と結果をつなぐ。

Exemplo: Yes, I organised a party for my friends last year. I planned the food and decorations, and everyone had a great time, which made me very happy. However, it was quite expensive because we rented a venue and bought lots of food.

× It's because parties offers me a pleasant enjoyable time having a conversation and celebration with others.

✓ It's because parties offer me a pleasant, enjoyable time having conversations and celebrations with others.

The subject 'parties' is plural, so the verb should be 'offer' (not 'offers') to match plural subject. Also 'conversation' and 'celebration' should be plural when speaking generally about multiple instances; add a comma between adjectives 'pleasant' and 'enjoyable'. Suggestions: use plural verbs for plural subjects and plural nouns for general repeated events; separate coordinate adjectives with a comma.

× I like gathering friends and talking each other with very.

✓ I like gathering with friends and talking to each other a lot.

The phrase 'talking each other' is incorrect; correct form is 'talking to each other'. 'With very' is not grammatical; use 'a lot' or 'very much' after the verb. Also 'gathering friends' can be clearer as 'gathering with friends'. Suggestions: use 'talk to each other' for reciprocal actions and place intensity adverbs like 'a lot' after the verb phrase.

× I'd say I'll have a party twice a year around.

✓ I'd say I used to have a party about twice a year.

Question asked about childhood frequency (past). Using 'I'll' (future) is incorrect. 'I'd say' is fine as a hedge but should be followed by a past tense 'used to have' or 'had' for past habits. 'Around' should be placed after the number as 'about twice a year'. Suggestions: match tense to time reference; for past habits use 'used to' or simple past.

× Although party is very present time, I less time there are less time to have a party time.

✓ Although parties are common now, I had less time to have parties then.

'Party is very present time' is ungrammatical—use 'parties are common now' or 'parties are more common now'. Subject-verb agreement: 'parties are'. The clause refers to past lack of time so use past tense 'I had less time'. 'There are less time to have a party time' is ungrammatical and redundant; simplify to 'I had less time to have parties'. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement, choose correct tense for time reference, and avoid redundancy.

× It is because party offers me a lot of tasks.

✓ It's because parties involve a lot of work.

'Party offers me a lot of tasks' is awkward; 'involve a lot of work' is a natural collocation. Also use plural 'parties' to refer generally, so 'involve' matches plural. Suggestions: use natural verb-noun combinations like 'involve work' instead of 'offer tasks'.

× Yes, I have. I've organized a party with my friends.

✓ Yes, I have. I've organized parties with my friends.

If the speaker refers to one or multiple events, context later mentions cost and morning; plural 'parties' may be more natural, but if one specific party, keep singular. If keeping present perfect to indicate experience, 'I've organized parties' indicates multiple events. Ensure number matches intended meaning. Suggestions: decide whether referring to one event (singular) or general experience (plural) and make subject and verbs consistent.

× It was very pleasing and the morning because I become really joyful gathering friends.

✓ It was very pleasant in the morning because I became really joyful gathering with friends.

Use 'pleasant' rather than 'pleasing' for describing an event. 'The morning' needs a preposition 'in the morning'. Past narrative requires past tense 'became' rather than 'become'. 'Gathering friends' should be 'gathering with friends' for natural phrasing. Suggestions: match adjective choice, use correct prepositions, and keep past tense consistent in narratives.

× But it cost cost a lot and.

✓ But it cost a lot.

The sentence repeats 'cost' and ends with an unfinished conjunction 'and'. Use single 'cost' and complete the thought or end the sentence. If adding a consequence, finish with 'and we had to...'. Suggestions: avoid repeated words and complete sentences; if adding conjunctions, add the clause that follows.