Gifts— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence about your ability, then give one specific supporting detail using correct grammar. Avoid unclear phrases like “my parents always send some significant gift to me.”

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy giving gifts and I think I'm quite good at it. For example, my girlfriend often tells me she loves the presents I choose because I pay attention to what she likes.

Sugestão: Use a clear topic sentence and correct tense; give one or two specific occasions and a linking word for coherence. Correct vocabulary (e.g., 'anniversary' not 'Ave. memory day').

Exemplo: I usually give gifts on special occasions. For instance, I give my girlfriend a present on our anniversary, and I often give my teacher a small gift at New Year.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence like 'I consider the recipient's interests and needs.' Then give one concrete example and use linking words to make it logical. Correct word choice and grammar are needed.

Exemplo: I consider the recipient's interests and needs when choosing a gift. For example, if someone loves reading, I might buy a book like The Hobbit, and if they mentioned wanting something but couldn't afford it, I would choose that item.

Sugestão: Answer directly then give a specific past example with good tense and concise sentences. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast present and past.

Exemplo: No, I don't make handmade gifts much now because I'm very busy. However, I used to make several handmade gifts for my mother's birthday, such as cards and paper flowers, and she still displays them in her bedroom.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion in one sentence, then support it with a concise reason and a brief example. Avoid hesitations and finish your thought. Use correct grammar: 'there is no connection between price and feelings.'

Exemplo: No, I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better. In my view, a thoughtful inexpensive gift can mean more—for example, a handwritten letter or a small handmade item often feels more personal than an expensive but impersonal present.

× Yes, I think I'm talented because my parents always send some significant gift to me and every time I send a gift to my girlfriend, she is very pleased.

✓ Yes, I think I'm good at it because my parents always send me meaningful gifts and every time I give a gift to my girlfriend, she is very pleased.

Incorrect use of prepositions and word choice: 'send ... to me' is grammatically acceptable but 'send me gifts' is more natural; 'significant gift' is awkward for everyday giving, use 'meaningful gifts'; 'send a gift' sounds like dispatching, use 'give a gift' for personal gifting. Also plural agreement: 'gifts' fits 'always'. Suggestion: use natural collocations 'send me gifts' or 'give a gift'.

× I always will give gifting the special occasion or festival, just like I will send gifts to my girlfriend in Ave. memory day and I'll send gifts to my teacher in New Year's.

✓ I always give gifts on special occasions or festivals; for example, I give gifts to my girlfriend on our anniversary and I give gifts to my teacher at New Year.

Incorrect future tense and word form: 'I always will give' mixes habitual adverb 'always' with simple future; use simple present for habitual actions. 'Give gifting' is wrong; use 'give gifts'. 'Ave. memory day' is unclear — likely 'anniversary' or 'our anniversary'. 'New Year's' should be 'New Year' or 'New Year's Day'. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and correct event names.

× I consider The Hobbit or what things you want to have but they can't afford it or they are they have other concern now is I will remember it when I noticed that and I will choose a gift that may be interested on it.

✓ I think about the person's interests or things they want but cannot afford, or other concerns they have. When I notice this, I remember it and choose a gift they might be interested in.

Multiple sentence-structure and pronoun errors: run-on sentence, unclear subjects, incorrect pronoun use ('they are they have other concern now'), tense and verb forms. 'May be interested on it' is wrong; use 'might be interested in it' or 'they might be interested in'. Suggestion: split into shorter sentences, keep subject consistent ('they' refers to the person), use 'cannot afford', and correct preposition 'interested in'.

× No, because I'm more and more busy nowadays but I made amount of handmade gifts to my mother in her in her birthday I did some card or handmade flowers by myself and I my mother really cherished and put them in her bedroom.

✓ No, because I'm getting busier nowadays, but I made several handmade gifts for my mother on her birthday. I made some cards and paper flowers myself, and my mother really cherished them and put them in her bedroom.

Tense and word choice errors: 'more and more busy' is colloquial; use 'getting busier'. 'Made amount of handmade gifts' is incorrect; use 'made several handmade gifts' or 'a number of handmade gifts'. 'In her in her birthday' should be 'on her birthday'. 'I did some card' should be 'I made some cards'. Pronoun/order errors: 'I my mother really cherished' is jumbled. Suggestion: use clearer sequence of actions, correct prepositions ('on her birthday') and appropriate quantifiers ('several').

× No, I, I think there are no connection between prices of gifts with, uh, feelings because sometimes I kind of further expensive gifts, but I really appreciate your help. So I, I'll send the cheap gift to express my.

✓ No, I think there is no connection between the price of a gift and feelings, because sometimes I receive very expensive gifts but I value the thought behind them. So I often give inexpensive gifts to express my feelings.

Multiple grammar issues: subject-verb agreement 'there are no connection' should be 'there is no connection'. 'Prices of gifts with feelings' incorrect preposition; use 'between the price of a gift and feelings'. 'I kind of further expensive gifts' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'I receive very expensive gifts'. 'I'll send the cheap gift to express my.' is incomplete and wrong article use; use 'inexpensive gifts' and complete 'express my feelings'. Suggestion: correct subject-verb agreement, use singular form for a general noun ('the price of a gift'), choose correct prepositions ('between ... and'), and complete the clause.