Gifts— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, explain briefly why, and add one specific example with a linking word. Avoid repetition and grammar errors (use correct tense and articles).

Exemplo: Not really. I find it difficult because I don’t always know what someone wants, so I often play it safe. For example, yesterday was my sister’s birthday and, unsure of her preferences, I bought a simple gift rather than something personal.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer, correct grammar, and add one specific detail using a linking word. Use natural phrasing like “on birthdays” or “at weddings.”

Exemplo: I usually give gifts on special occasions, such as birthdays and weddings. For instance, I always prepare a small present for close friends’ birthdays and a more formal gift for weddings.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly (what you consider), then support with specific factors and linking words. Fix grammar and clarity—mention preferences, budget, and the recipient’s interests.

Exemplo: I consider the recipient’s interests, my budget, and how practical the gift is. For example, if they love cooking, I might choose a useful kitchen gadget; otherwise I would ask a close friend for advice.

Sugestão: Good specific example—improve grammar and cohesion. Use past tense correctly and link actions briefly to explain why it mattered to the recipient.

Exemplo: Yes. Once I gave my niece a handmade portrait: I drew her face, framed the picture, and gave it to her on her birthday. She loved it because it felt personal and thoughtful.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion with reasons and an example. Correct grammar (use modal/correct verb forms) and avoid contradicting earlier statements. Use linking words to justify your view.

Exemplo: I don’t think price always matters. Although expensive gifts can show effort, what matters more is how thoughtful the gift is; for example, a meaningful handwritten letter can express feelings better than an expensive item.

× No I'm not good at giving gifts because I don't know what people want in gift.

✓ No, I'm not good at giving gifts because I don't know what people want as a gift.

Use 'as a gift' not 'in gift'. The correct preposition for expressing the role or function of something is 'as'. Also add a comma after 'No' for clarity.

× Like example yesterday my sister's birthday and I don't know what she likes most then I buy a basic things for her gift.

✓ For example, yesterday was my sister's birthday and I didn't know what she liked most, so I bought some basic things as her gift.

Multiple issues: missing connector 'For example', incorrect tense ('didn't know' past), incorrect verb form 'buy' -> 'bought', singular/plural 'a basic things' -> 'some basic things', and awkward order. Revise to correct tense, plurality and sentence structure.

× I mainly give gifts to others when if it's someone birthday or someone's marriage.

✓ I mainly give gifts to others when it's someone's birthday or when someone gets married.

Remove redundant 'if' after 'when'. Use possessive 'someone's birthday'. For 'marriage' use the verb phrase 'gets married' or 'someone's wedding' to sound natural.

× Do you like if someone don't know what they wanna give as a gift then they can take advice from that person which has a good knowledge at giving gifts.

✓ If someone doesn't know what they want to give as a gift, they can ask advice from a person who has good knowledge about giving gifts.

Change question-like start to conditional clause. Use 'doesn't' for third-person singular agreement, 'want' not 'wanna', and 'ask advice' is idiomatic. Use 'who' not 'which' for people and 'about' not 'at' after 'knowledge'.

× Yeah, one time I given a handwritten gift to my brother's daughter.

✓ Yeah, one time I gave a handwritten gift to my brother's daughter.

Use simple past 'gave' instead of incorrect past participle 'given' when forming a simple past sentence without auxiliary.

× I drawed her face on a sheet and framed it.

✓ I drew her face on a sheet and framed it.

The past tense of 'draw' is 'drew', not 'drawed'. Use correct irregular past form.

× Like I said, I don't know how to choose a thing for a gift. So yeah, expensive gifts are better express my feelings.

✓ Like I said, I don't know how to choose a gift. So, yes, expensive gifts better express my feelings.

Remove 'a thing' and use 'a gift' for natural phrasing. Also use 'better express' without 'are' because the intended structure is comparative: 'expensive gifts better express my feelings.' Alternatively, 'are better at expressing my feelings.' Also 'yeah' -> 'yes' for formality and add comma after 'So'.