Gifts— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer shorter and more natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (use present simple and proper word order), avoid repetition, and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, say you know recipients’ preferences and give an example of a recent gift.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy giving gifts. I try to choose presents based on what each person likes, so I often buy books for my brother because he loves reading. For instance, last month I gave my friend a painting set because she paints in her free time.

Sugestão: Answer directly and add a specific routine or example. Use a clear topic sentence, then one supporting detail linked by a word like "usually" or "for example." Avoid unclear phrases (e.g. "in my reality").

Exemplo: I usually give gifts on special occasions. For example, I bring a present when I visit someone for their birthday or when I go to a family gathering.

Sugestão: Start with a direct statement about the main consideration, then give one or two specific criteria and an example. Use linking words like "first" and "for example" and correct verb forms (I analyze, I choose).

Exemplo: The most important thing is the recipient’s interests. First, I consider what they like—hobbies and tastes—and then I choose something useful. For example, because my friend enjoys cooking, I once bought her a high-quality spice set.

Sugestão: Be concise and give a specific example of a handmade gift. Correct grammar (I am good at painting; I paint portraits). Use linking words like "for example" to make the answer clear and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I often give handmade gifts because I am good at painting. For example, I once painted a portrait of my cousin and framed it for her birthday, and she loved it.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion with one supporting reason and an example. Use correct sentence structure and linking words such as "because" or "for example." Avoid repetition and awkward phrasing.

Exemplo: No, I don’t think expensive gifts express feelings better because thoughtfulness matters more. For example, a handmade card with a personal message can be more meaningful than an expensive item bought without much thought.

× Yes, of course I'm a person who is good in giving the gifts to my friends and my family members as I think I usually be a good because I know that everything about my friends and family and what think they are like or don't like.

✓ Yes, of course I'm a person who is good at giving gifts to my friends and family because I usually know everything about them and what they like or dislike.

Use 'good at' not 'good in'; drop the article 'the' before 'gifts' in this context; 'my family members' can be shortened to 'my family'; 'I usually be a good' is incorrect verb use (see subject-verb agreement/present tense) so change to 'I usually know'; simplify 'what think they are like or don't like' to 'what they like or dislike'. Suggestions: learn common collocations (good at), avoid unnecessary articles, and use clear subject-verb structures.

× So it helpful me for to you kids and always whenever I give give gift to.

✓ So it helps me when I give gifts to others.

Missing verb 'helps' and incorrect word order and extra words ('for to you kids', repeated 'give'). Use simple present 'helps' to describe habitual action. Use 'gifts' plural and 'to others' or specify 'to children' if intended. Suggestion: remove redundant words and ensure a verb is present.

× Well whenever I visit their home and they have any party in my reality or in my friends home and that time I usually give gifts to them.

✓ I usually give gifts when I visit their home or when they have a party at my place or at a friend's house.

Sentence has awkward structure and incorrect phrase 'in my reality'. Use present tense 'I usually give' for habitual actions. 'My friends home' should be 'a friend's house' or 'my friend's home'. Reorder clauses for clarity. Suggestion: use clear temporal connectors ('when') and correct locations ('at my place', 'at a friend's house').

× Do I be honest? Firstly I analyse that what type of things they like or don't like or by analyzing this I choose our gift for them they definitely like.

✓ To be honest, I first analyze what types of things they like or dislike, and based on that I choose a gift that they will definitely like.

'Do I be honest?' is incorrect; use 'To be honest'. 'Firstly' can be 'first' or 'firstly'. 'Analyse that what type of things' is ungrammatical—use 'analyze what types of things'. 'Our gift' is wrong pronoun; use 'a gift'. Verb tense and word order corrected for clarity. Suggestion: use set phrases ('To be honest'), correct verb forms, and consistent pronouns.

× Yes, of course I am a good in painting so I portrait number of things like their faces and the scenery.

✓ Yes, of course I am good at painting, so I paint portraits of people and scenes.

Use 'good at' not 'good in'. 'I portrait number of things' is incorrect; 'paint portraits of people and scenes' conveys meaning. 'Their faces' is unclear—use 'people' or 'friends and family' if specific. Suggestion: learn verbs that collocate with nouns (paint portraits) and correct prepositions.

× So this type of gifts I usually give to my friends and my family members.

✓ I usually give these types of gifts to my friends and family.

Word order improved: place 'usually' before main verb. Use 'these types of gifts' or 'this type of gift' consistently; 'my family members' simplified to 'my family'. Suggestion: position adverbs correctly ('usually give') and simplify noun phrases.

× To be honest I think it not depend upon the price tag of the gift, it always depend on the feelings and by which we can give give to another person.

✓ To be honest, I think it does not depend on the price tag of the gift; it always depends on the feelings with which we give it to another person.

Missing auxiliary 'does' for negative in present simple ('does not depend'); use 'depend on' not 'depend upon' (both possible but 'depend on' is more common). Repeated 'give give' and awkward phrase 'by which we can give'—use 'with which we give it'. Ensure subject-verb agreement ('it ... depends'). Suggestion: use correct auxiliary verbs in negative sentences and natural prepositional phrases.

× So I think it cannot be more better than expressing your feeling by giving expensive gift.

✓ So I think an expensive gift cannot express your feelings better than a heartfelt gesture.

Double comparative 'more better' is incorrect; use 'better' alone. Sentence structure awkward; compare 'expensive gift' with 'heartfelt gesture' or 'a sincere expression'. Also add articles 'an expensive gift' and 'a heartfelt gesture'. Suggestion: avoid double comparatives and use clear comparison targets; include appropriate articles.