Gifts— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and reduce hesitation. Use one or two supporting details with linking words. Avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I'm good at giving gifts. I enjoy choosing presents for my family and close friends because it makes them happy. For example, I often pick items based on their hobbies, such as a cookbook for someone who likes cooking.

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct minor grammar issues. Use a clear topic sentence and connect a specific example with linking words like “for example” or “last month”.

Exemplo: I usually give gifts on special occasions such as birthdays, holidays, and ceremonies. For example, last month I gave a present to a friend who graduated from college.

Sugestão: Clarify your main point and correct word order and articles. Use linking words to contrast ideas (e.g., “rather than”). Provide a specific reason or example to support your view.

Exemplo: When choosing a gift, I consider its meaning and thoughtfulness rather than the price or brand. For instance, I prefer a handwritten letter or a handmade item that shows I thought about the recipient.

Sugestão: Make the sentence structure natural and concise. Start with a direct answer, then add a brief reason and an example. Correct comparative forms and article usage.

Exemplo: Yes, I have. I often make homemade gifts because they feel more personal and meaningful than expensive store-bought items. For example, I once knitted a scarf for my sister which she loved.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and a brief explanation with correct grammar. Use linking words like “because” and give a concrete example to support your opinion.

Exemplo: No, I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better because thoughtfulness matters more. For example, a carefully chosen photo album can mean more than an expensive gadget because it shows effort and memories.

× Yes, I such a kind of person who go back giving gifts.

✓ Yes, I'm the kind of person who likes giving gifts.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing auxiliary verb; 'such a kind of person' is unnatural. Use contraction 'I'm' or 'I am', 'the kind of person who' is correct structure, and 'likes' is needed for third-person singular agreement with 'person'. Improve by using natural collocation: 'the kind of person who likes...'.

× I really love to give my family or friends or who I have umm.

✓ I really love to give to my family or friends or to people I care about.

Missing preposition 'to' after 'give' and awkward phrase 'who I have'. Use 'people I care about' for clarity. Also include 'to' before recipients: 'give to my family'.

× Sometimes I just pick up something they enjoy.

✓ Sometimes I just pick something I know they will enjoy.

Use correct verb 'pick' without 'up' in this context and add a clause 'I know they will enjoy' to express intention and future enjoyment. This clarifies meaning and matches typical English phrasing.

× I probably give presents to others on the occasions like birthdays or holidays or ceremonies like a graduation ceremony.

✓ I usually give presents on occasions like birthdays, holidays, or ceremonies such as graduations.

Use 'usually' instead of 'probably' for habitual action and remove unnecessary 'to others'; simplify 'ceremonies like a graduation ceremony' to 'ceremonies such as graduations'. Also pluralize 'graduations' for generality.

× I remember last month I gave my friend who graduated from the college.

✓ I remember last month I gave a gift to my friend who graduated from college.

Add 'a gift to' for clarity and remove the definite article 'the' before 'college' which is unnecessary here. The past tense 'gave' is correct; include the object of the verb.

× In my perspective for choosing a gift, what is kind of give?

✓ From my perspective when choosing a gift, what kind of gift to give?

Original word order is incorrect. Use 'From my perspective when choosing a gift' to set context and 'what kind of gift to give' as the question clause. This creates a clear, grammatical sentence.

× It doesn't matter the quality of gift and how much of price I'll give, and what matter is meaningfulness and thoughtfulness.

✓ The quality or price of the gift doesn't matter; what matters is its meaningfulness and thoughtfulness.

Correct subject-verb agreement ('what matters'), reorder for natural English, and use 'quality or price' rather than 'how much of price'. Use possessive 'its' to refer to the gift.

× Example instead the expensive give a meaningful.

✓ For example, instead of an expensive gift, a meaningful one is better.

The original is fragmented and ungrammatical. Use 'instead of an expensive gift' and 'a meaningful one' to contrast. This provides a complete sentence and correct noun phrases.

× Yes I have because I, such a person, really love to make homemade give and give to other friends or people I love, and because handmade gives a far more meaningful than expensive gift or brand.

✓ Yes, I have, because I am the kind of person who loves to make homemade gifts and give them to friends or people I love; handmade gifts are far more meaningful than expensive or branded ones.

Multiple errors: use 'am' instead of comma-fragment, 'homemade gifts' plural noun, 'give them' to clarify object, and subject-verb agreement 'handmade gifts are'. Compare 'more meaningful than expensive or branded ones' for parallel structure. This corrects third-person agreement and noun forms.

× No, I don't agree with that and I don't believe that expensive gives better express our feelings because.

✓ No, I don't agree with that; I don't believe that expensive gifts better express our feelings.

Add the noun 'gifts' after 'expensive', remove the trailing 'because' or complete the clause. Use semicolon or conjunction to connect clauses. Place 'better' before 'express' for correct adverb placement.

× Better express our feeling is thoughtfulness of the kids and meanings of the gift.

✓ What better expresses our feelings is the thoughtfulness behind the gift and its meaning.

Original sentence has wrong word order and incorrect pronouns ('kids' likely intended 'acts' or 'intentions'); clarify meaning: 'the thoughtfulness behind the gift and its meaning'. Use plural 'feelings' and correct relative clause 'what better expresses'.