Gifts— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答は主旨を伝えていますが、文法と語順の誤り、冗長表現、論理のつながりの不足があります。短く明確なテーマ文（I am good at giving gifts because...）を先に述べ、その後に具体例を一つの流れで説明してください。動詞の形（e.g. have → have, make schedule well → plan well）や前置詞の使い方、関係詞・接続詞の使い方を直しましょう。例：詳細に計画を立てたこと、相手の反応を述べるなどを明確に。5文以内に収め、自然な語彙（organizing skills → organizational skills）を使ってください。

Exemplo: I am good at giving gifts because I plan carefully and pay attention to the recipient's preferences. For example, for my wife's birthday I made a detailed plan: I asked her friends about what she liked, compared several options online, and ordered the gift in advance. Because of that preparation, she was very surprised and happy.

Sugestão: 回答は意図が伝わりますが、語法と不完全な文が目立ちます。まず直接に答えてから一文で理由と具体例を続けてください。不要な語（some）を省き、自然な表現（express my gratitude → to show my appreciation）を使い、文を完結させましょう。接続詞（for example, when...）で流れを滑らかにしてください。

Exemplo: I usually give gifts to show my appreciation, especially on special occasions like birthdays or when someone helps me. For example, when my friends gave me presents for my birthday, I returned the favour by choosing thoughtful gifts that matched their hobbies.

Sugestão: 主題文と支持説明の構成はあるものの、不自然な語順と語彙選択（conduct hearing は不適切）があります。まず『I focus on what the person likes』と明確に述べ、その後に方法（I ask them or their friends, observe their hobbies）を具体的に説明してください。接続詞（for example, therefore）で文を繋ぎ、冗長な語を避けてください。

Exemplo: I focus on the recipient's likes and needs when choosing a gift. For example, I usually ask their close friends or family about their hobbies and interests, or I pay attention to things they mention casually so I can pick something useful and meaningful.

Sugestão: 良い具体例がありますが、文の繰り返しと不自然な表現が減点要因です。具体的にいつ、どのように作られたか（自分で作ったのか購入した手作り品か）を明確に述べ、理由を簡潔に説明してください。形容表現は自然な語順で（seems more valuable than it looks）。5文以内にまとめましょう。

Exemplo: Yes. When I was a student I gave a handmade leather wallet to a friend. I chose it because the craftsmanship made it look more valuable than its price, and I thought a handmade item would feel more personal.

Sugestão: 意見ははっきり述べていますが、語彙の誤用・繰り返し・文法ミスが多いです。まず明確な主題文（No, I don't think expensive gifts are necessary）を述べ、その後に理由を2つ程度述べてください。具体例や比較を入れると説得力が増します。冗長な『people』の繰り返しを避け、自然な表現（more important than price → more important than the gift's price）を使いましょう。

Exemplo: No, I don't think expensive gifts are better. I believe thoughtfulness matters more than price; a small, well-chosen present that suits the person's taste often shows more care than an expensive but impersonal item.

× Yes, I'm good at giving gifts because I can have organizing skills and I can make schedule well.

✓ Yes, I'm good at giving gifts because I have organizational skills and I can make schedules well.

The original uses 'can have organizing skills' which is ungrammatical; use 'have' + noun: 'have organizational skills'. 'Organizing' should be the adjective form 'organizational'. 'Make schedule well' is unnatural; use plural 'schedules' or 'a schedule' and the adverb 'well' after the verb is acceptable but 'plan schedules well' is better. Suggestion: use 'I have organizational skills and I can plan schedules well.'

× For example, when I consider to give a birthday gift for my wife, I planned very in detail and my wife really surprised my gift and.

✓ For example, when I considered giving a birthday gift to my wife, I planned it in great detail and my wife was really surprised by the gift.

Use the correct verb pattern: 'consider giving' not 'consider to give' (verb + -ing required). Tense should be past 'considered' to match 'planned'. Use 'to my wife' -> 'to' is correct preposition. 'Planned very in detail' should be 'planned it in great detail'. 'Surprised my gift' is incorrect; use 'was surprised by the gift'. Also remove the trailing 'and'.

× Usually, I give some gifts to other people when I express my gratitude.

✓ Usually, I give gifts to other people when I want to express my gratitude.

The sentence is mostly acceptable but 'give some gifts' is awkward; use 'give gifts' or 'give a gift'. 'When I express my gratitude' is fine but context implies intention, so 'when I want to express my gratitude' is clearer. No change in tense required.

× For example, when my friends gave me some gifts for my birthday, I also chose a gift to my friends.

✓ For example, when my friends gave me gifts for my birthday, I also chose gifts for my friends.

Use plural consistently: 'gifts' rather than 'some gifts' and 'choosed' is wrong (here 'chose' is correct past). Original used 'to my friends' which is better as 'for my friends'. Maintain parallel structure: 'friends gave me gifts... I chose gifts for my friends.'

× As.

✓ (Remove fragment or complete the sentence: 'As a result, I often reciprocate with a gift.')

'As.' is a sentence fragment and meaningless alone. Either remove it or complete the thought. Use full clause to convey the idea.

× When I consider choosing gifts, I mainly put my emphasis on what people like to give my gifts successfully.

✓ When I choose gifts, I mainly focus on what people like so I can give them gifts they will appreciate.

'Consider choosing' is wordy; 'choose gifts' is natural. 'Put my emphasis on' is awkward; use 'focus on'. 'What people like to give my gifts successfully' is ungrammatical and confusing—intended meaning is to match recipients' preferences. Rephrase to 'what people like so I can give them gifts they will appreciate.'

× I conduct hearing for my friends, for example.

✓ For example, I ask my friends about their preferences.

'Conduct hearing' is incorrect in this context; native speakers would say 'ask' or 'ask about their preferences'. Use clear verb and noun phrases.

× Yes, I have given some handmade gifts when I was a student.

✓ Yes, I gave some handmade gifts when I was a student.

Mixing present perfect ('have given') with a past time phrase ('when I was a student') is incorrect. Use simple past 'gave' to match the finished time period in the past.

× I chose a handcrafted leather wallet because it seems more expensive than how that it looks.

✓ I chose a handcrafted leather wallet because it seemed more expensive than it looked.

Tense should be past 'seemed' to match 'chose'. The comparison 'more expensive than how that it looks' is ungrammatical; use 'more expensive than it looked.' Remove unnecessary words 'how that'.

× Therefore, I chose a handmade craft for my gift.

✓ Therefore, I chose a handmade item as my gift.

'Handmade craft' is redundant and awkward. Use 'handmade item' or 'handmade gift'. 'For my gift' is better as 'as my gift'.

× No, I don't think so because the price is not our crucial factor of the gifts.

✓ No, I don't think so because price is not the most important factor when choosing gifts.

'Our crucial factor of the gifts' is incorrect. Use 'price is not the most important factor' or 'price is not crucial'. Also 'when choosing gifts' clarifies context.

× When people choose gifts, people think about the person who is given the gift and the typically people choose a gift to fit them them.

✓ When people choose gifts, they think about the person receiving the gift, and typically they choose a gift to suit them.

Avoid repeating 'people'. Use pronoun 'they'. 'The person who is given the gift' should be 'the person receiving the gift'. 'Typically people choose a gift to fit them them' has duplicated 'them' and wrong preposition 'to fit' is okay but 'suit them' is more natural. Fix pronoun reference and remove duplication.