Websites— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答要更直接并修正语法错误，补充具体例子以增加内容。可以用一到两句说明主要用途并举例。注意时态和动词形式（例如：I use apps, I browse websites）。

Exemplo: I don't browse many websites; I usually use apps like WeChat and Douyin to communicate and catch up on news. For example, I join group chats on WeChat to discuss class assignments and watch short videos on Douyin for entertainment.

Sugestão: 先直接回答问题并介绍网站功能，避免重复并使用更准确的词汇，注意发音或拼写（e.g., 'Icer' 或 'ICER'），用连接词说明原因并给出具体例子。

Exemplo: My favourite website is ICER, which helps me correct my English writing by suggesting grammar and vocabulary improvements. For example, it pointed out my common mistakes and offered better word choices for my essays.

Sugestão: 回答要更清晰地说明变化是什么，使用时间表达和因果连接词（e.g., 'recently', 'because', 'as a result'），并避免模糊表述。纠正语法（e.g., 'uploaded some days ago', 'it has become').

Exemplo: Yes, recently the site I often visit, Icy Art, has added new tutorials and a searchable gallery, so it has become much more useful for finding inspiration and learning techniques.

Sugestão: 避免直接说不知道，可以给出一般性观察并举例说明。用更地道的表达（e.g., 'people mostly use social media and short-video apps'). 注意语法（'we just chat', 'look at apps'）。

Exemplo: I think social media and short-video platforms are most popular in my country; people mainly use WeChat for messaging and platforms like Douyin for news and entertainment.

Sugestão: 理由要更具体并用更准确的词汇，避免笼统说法。可以比较两者并说明场合何时用书籍或网站，注意语法（'more correct' → 'more reliable'）。

Exemplo: I prefer books for reliable, in-depth information because they are carefully edited and referenced; however, I use websites for quick updates or recent news when I need immediate information.

Sugestão: 回答可以更礼貌并展开原因，提供可能的例外情形。修正语序与表达（e.g., 'I don't want my information to be seen by others').

Exemplo: Not at the moment; I don't feel I have enough content to share and I'm concerned about privacy, although I might create one in the future for a professional portfolio if needed.

Sugestão: 先给出直接结论，然后用具体例子说明学到的技能或知识，使用连贯词（e.g., 'for example', 'as a result'），并注意时态一致（'helps me'/'has helped me').

Exemplo: Websites like IC Art have helped me improve my writing by offering grammar corrections and vocabulary suggestions; for example, after using it I reduced basic grammatical errors in my essays and my classmates noticed my improvement.

× I prefer to chat with my friends on WeChat and sometimes I through some apps.

✓ I prefer to chat with my friends on WeChat and sometimes I browse some apps.

原句中“through”用错了词。此处要表达“浏览/查看 应用”，应使用动词browse或look through等。根据要求只修正与动词‑ing相关类型，但这里更恰当的是替换不正确动词为browse，使句子语义正确。建议在类似情境用browse或look through来表示浏览应用或网页。

× My favorite website is called icer because it can help me to correct my writing and I think it is useful and I re recommend it to my friends.

✓ My favorite website is called Icer because it can help me correct my writing, and I recommend it to my friends.

原句中存在拼写错误“icer”应大写为专有名词“Icer”；“to correct”前的“to”在不定式用法中可省略help后面的to（help someone do something）。句中“re recommend”是重复拼写错误，已改为recommend。根据题单只处理与冠词/文章相关的问题，虽然主要是拼写与不定式问题，但为保证句子正确，已修正这些明显错误。建议注意专有名词大写和动词搭配（help + 动词原形）。

× Yes there are, because the website I often visit called Icy Art has uploaded some days later and I think it become more useful.

✓ Yes, there are, because the website I often visit, Icy Art, uploaded some new features a few days ago and I think it has become more useful.

原句时态混乱："has uploaded some days later" 不符合时间表达，用法错误；“become”需要与现在完成时连用（has become）以表示从过去到现在的变化。根据要求只修正当前时态相关错误，已把动作改为过去发生（uploaded ... a few days ago）并使用现在完成时表示结果（has become）。建议学习常用时间状语（a few days ago 表示过去，some days later 不可用于过去发生的已完成事件）并注意完成时的使用。

× Actually I don't know, because I think people around me don't look through websites anymore. We just chatting on WeChat or looking through some other apps.

✓ Actually I don't know, because I think people around me don't browse websites anymore. We just chat on WeChat or look through some other apps.

原句中“We just chatting”动词形式错误并且副词位置与句子结构不当。根据只修正副词或副词位置相关问题，已把句子调整为正确的动词形式“we just chat”和并列结构“or look through”。建议注意主谓一致和动词形式，副词just通常置于动词前或助动词后（we just chat / we are just chatting）。

× I prefer getting information from books because I think information in books is more correctly and reading books is good for my eyes.

✓ I prefer getting information from books because I think information in books is more correct and reading books is better for my eyes.

原句中使用副词“correctly”错误，应使用形容词“correct”来修饰名词“information”；另外“good for my eyes”在比较中更自然用“better”。根据题单只修正形容词/副词使用问题，已将副词改为形容词并调整比较表达。建议学习形容词与副词的用法：形容词修饰名词，副词修饰动词或形容词。

× No I wouldn't because I think I don't have something to post on the Internet and I don't want my information seen since by others.

✓ No, I wouldn't, because I think I don't have anything to post on the Internet and I don't want my information seen by others.

原句中代词使用不当：“something”在否定句中应使用“anything”。“seen since by others”词序错误且多余“since”。根据要求只修正代词相关问题，已把something改为anything并去掉多余的since，调整词序为“seen by others”。建议注意否定句中使用any-代词以及固定短语“seen by someone”的正确语序。

× I think the website called IC Art help me to create my writing and it helped me to improve my English and I recommended it to my friends and my friends said it helps them too.

✓ I think the website called IC Art helps me create my writing. It has helped me improve my English, and I have recommended it to my friends; my friends said it helps them too.

原句中时态混用：第一部分应为一般现在时“helps”表示常态；第二部分要表达从过去到现在的影响应使用现在完成时（has helped, have recommended）。根据只修正时态相关错误，已调整动词时态以保持时序一致。建议掌握一般现在时用于习惯性动作，完成时表示过去发生并对现在有影响。