Websites— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammatical accuracy and use more specific vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and filler phrases.

Exemplo: I often use search engines such as Google because they are very convenient. For example, I can type keywords and quickly find relevant articles, videos, or the official websites I need, which saves me time when researching a topic.

Sugestão: Correct word choice and sentence structure. Use concise, natural phrases and one clear reason supported by a specific example. Avoid repeating words.

Exemplo: My favourite website is Google because it provides reliable search results with minimal intrusive ads. For instance, when I search for medical information, I can quickly find reputable sources and compare them.

Sugestão: Clarify meaning and use correct grammar. State a clear main idea, then give specific, well-linked examples of changes (use of AI, improved design, personalization). Avoid vague adjectives and incorrect forms.

Exemplo: Yes. Many websites have become more personalized and efficient by using AI. For example, news sites now recommend articles based on my interests, and customer-service chatbots give faster, more human-like responses.

Sugestão: Reduce hesitations and be specific. Begin with a clear statement about popular types of sites, then give concrete examples and explain why they are popular. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: AI-powered apps and productivity websites are very popular in my country because they help with work and daily tasks. For example, people use AI writing assistants to draft emails and virtual assistants to manage schedules.

Sugestão: Make the answer more natural and concise. Give one main reason and add a specific example or a brief contrast with books. Correct grammar and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: I prefer getting information from websites because I can access up-to-date information on my phone instantly. However, for in-depth research I still use books because they often offer more detailed and reliable coverage.

Sugestão: Remove fillers and use clear, organized sentences. State your intention clearly, give a reason, and provide a concrete example of what the website would include.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to create a website when I start my company because I need an online shop to showcase and sell my products. The site would include product pages, customer reviews, and an online payment system.

Sugestão: Be more specific and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two concrete examples with brief details of how the websites helped. Avoid repetition and fillers.

Exemplo: Websites have taught me many practical skills. For example, cooking blogs and videos provide step-by-step recipes I follow at home, and language-learning sites give structured exercises and useful study plans that improved my speaking and vocabulary.

× I usually visit search engine like Google because it's very convenient.

✓ I usually visit search engines like Google because they're very convenient.

Use plural 'search engines' to refer to the general category and 'they're' to agree with plural noun. Also use 'like' to compare examples of that category.

× I just type in keywords, they will give me good answer and if I need to know other websites they can give me too.

✓ I just type in keywords and they give me good answers, and if I need to find other websites they can show them to me too.

Comma splice corrected by connecting clauses. 'They give' matches plural subject 'they'. Use plural 'answers' for multiple results. 'Find' is better than 'know' for locating websites and 'show them to me' is natural English.

× My favorite website is Google because it's a liable and less ads than other websites and it's very smart.

✓ My favorite website is Google because it's reliable, has fewer ads than other websites, and is very smart.

'Liable' is wrong; use adjective 'reliable'. Compare quantity with 'fewer' with countable noun 'ads'. Maintain parallel structure: 'is reliable, has fewer ads, and is very smart.'

× I can type any keywords they they will give me a very good answer.

✓ I can type any keywords and they will give me very good answers.

Avoid repeated word 'they'. Keep 'they will give' to show future/expected result and plural 'answers' to agree with 'keywords'.

× Yes, the websites I often visit made many programs.

✓ Yes, the websites I often visit have made many programs.

Use present perfect 'have made' to describe a recent change or result that affects the present. 'Made' alone suggests a finished past without connection to present.

× For example they are more humanization and more efficiently and they use AI to better their.

✓ For example, they are more humanized and more efficient, and they use AI to improve themselves.

'Humanization' (noun) should be adjective 'humanized'. Use adjective 'efficient' instead of adverb 'efficiently'. 'Improve themselves' correctly completes the idea rather than 'better their' which is incomplete.

× In my country AI, uh, software is very popular.

✓ In my country, AI software is very popular.

Remove filler 'uh' and comma placement. No pronoun error here but cleaned sentence for clarity.

× Umm, many people use them to solve their work pro problem, uh, life problem, uh, it's very you, you just need talk to them, they can give you good answer.

✓ Many people use them to solve work problems and life problems. It's very easy: you just need to talk to them and they can give you good answers.

Use plural 'problems' and 'answers'. Replace 'you, you just need talk' with 'you just need to talk'. 'Very easy' completes the thought. Removed fillers and clarified pronoun references.

× I prefer getting information from websites rather than books because I can get the information just from my phone.

✓ I prefer getting information from websites rather than from books because I can get the information just on my phone.

Include 'from' before 'books' for parallel structure. Use 'on my phone' as common collocation for accessing information.

× But if I need to get the information from books, I will spend many time on it.

✓ But if I need to get information from books, I will spend a lot of time on it.

Use 'a lot of time' or 'much time' instead of 'many time'. Also drop 'the' before 'information' for general sense.

× I would like to have my own website one day because I plan to umm, open a company and uh, I need to place to uh, show and sell my umm, product products.

✓ I would like to have my own website one day because I plan to open a company and I need a place to show and sell my products.

Remove fillers, use 'a place' (article needed), plural 'products', and correct word order. Streamline sentence for clarity.

× I've got a lot of, uh, knowledge from websites.

✓ I've gained a lot of knowledge from websites.

'Gained' or 'got' both possible; 'gained' is more formal. Removed filler. No -ing needed here.

× For example, uh, when I uh, want to when I want to know how to cook, they give me recipe and uh, I want to how to study languages, they give me a good way to.

✓ For example, when I want to know how to cook, they give me recipes, and when I want to learn how to study languages, they give me good methods.

Eliminate fillers and repetition. Use plural 'recipes' and 'methods' and phrasing 'learn how to study languages' instead of 'want to how to study languages'. Complete the sentence rather than ending with 'to.'