Websites— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., 'short-video websites' or the platform name) and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: I often visit short-video websites (like Douyin or Kuaishou). They’re popular in China and I use them mainly to watch short clips about daily life and entertainment, which helps me relax after studying.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence naming the website type, then provide specific reasons and use linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., 'I spend up to ten hours a day on it') and avoid hesitations or incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: My favourite sites are short-video platforms. I spend a lot of time there because they offer quick, entertaining clips; sometimes I spend up to ten hours a day watching videos about cooking and travel.

Sugestão: Respond with a clear topic sentence and then explain specific changes using linking words. Use correct verb forms and clearer vocabulary (e.g., 'layout', 'buttons', 'familiar').

Exemplo: Yes, the layout changes frequently. For example, they move or remove familiar buttons, so I sometimes struggle to find the features I usually use.

Sugestão: Start with a direct statement about popular website types, then support with a specific example and clear numbers if possible. Improve grammar and word choice (e.g., 'attract', 'users').

Exemplo: Short-video platforms are very popular in my country. For example, one app has over 17 million users because it attracts people with short, engaging clips and personalised recommendations.

Sugestão: Give a clear preference then explain specific reasons with linking words. Use correct comparative forms and avoid awkward phrasing like 'the websites is'.

Exemplo: I prefer getting information from websites because they’re faster and more convenient. For instance, searching a specific detail online saves time compared with looking through books.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then give concrete plans or reasons using linking words. Improve grammar and vocabulary (e.g., 'related skills', 'learn how to build one').

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to have my own website, but I currently lack the technical skills. In the future I plan to learn web development and design so I can create a personal site to showcase my hobbies.

Sugestão: Start with a topic sentence about learning from websites, then give a specific example with clear sequence and correct tense. Use linking words (e.g., 'for example', 'because').

Exemplo: Websites have taught me practical skills. For example, I learned to cook a dish called Gomba Ji Ding from a short-video tutorial and was able to follow the steps successfully, which helped me improve my cooking.

× I usually visit the short video website like doing short video website is it is a popular website in China.

✓ I usually visit short-video websites, such as 'Douyin' which is a popular website in China.

The original sentence misuses 'doing' where a noun or compound adjective is needed. Use the noun phrase 'short-video websites' and give an example; hyphenate 'short-video' as a compound adjective. Also restructure the sentence for clarity and correct verb usage ('visit' with plural noun).

× I often visit this website to watch some short video.

✓ I often visit this website to watch some short videos.

Plural 'short videos' is required when referring to multiple items. The present infinitive 'to watch' is correct; only noun form needed adjustment to match quantity.

× My favorite website is doing short video website.

✓ My favorite website is a short-video website.

'Doing short video website' is ungrammatical. Use the noun phrase 'short-video website' to describe the type of website. Include an article 'a' before the singular countable noun.

× I usually spend much of my time on this website.

✓ I usually spend a lot of my time on this website.

'Much of my time' is awkward in this context; 'a lot of my time' or 'a lot of time' is more natural with habitual actions. 'Much' is normally used with uncountable nouns in negative or question forms.

× The longest time I spend on it maybe 10 hour a day.

✓ The longest time I spend on it is maybe 10 hours a day.

Tense and number errors: use present tense 'is' to describe a habitual maximum and plural 'hours' for more than one hour. Also include 'maybe' placement after 'is' for clarity.

× This uh, interesting website for me.

✓ This is an interesting website for me.

The original lacks the verb 'is'. Add the copular verb to form a complete clause: 'This is an interesting website for me.'

× I usually search watch the.

✓ I usually search for or watch videos on it.

The fragment 'search watch the' is incomplete and missing prepositions and objects. Provide a clear structure: 'search for' or 'watch' and specify the object 'videos' and location 'on it'.

× Yes, it's the website often change the buttons on the website layout.

✓ Yes, the website often changes the buttons on its layout.

Subject-verb agreement: singular 'website' needs 'changes' (third person singular). Also use possessive 'its layout' rather than repeating 'website layout'.

× I usually can't find the my familiar button on the website.

✓ I usually can't find my familiar button on the website.

Remove the unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'my familiar button'. Using both 'the' and 'my' is redundant; keep 'my'. Also 'familiar button' is odd—consider 'familiar button' is acceptable but 'familiar' might be better as 'usual'.

× It may be remove the web button on everywhere.

✓ They may remove the web button from everywhere.

Incorrect passive and preposition: use active 'They may remove' or passive 'The web button may be removed from everywhere.' 'On everywhere' is incorrect; use 'from everywhere' or 'everywhere' without a preposition.

× I think maybe also is though in short video websites it has more than 17,000,000 users to use this website.

✓ I think short-video websites may also be popular; one of them has more than 17,000,000 users.

Original is wordy and ungrammatical. Break into two clauses, use 'may also be popular' and rephrase to show that a specific site has many users. Avoid redundant 'users to use this website'.

× I think that's a successful website it attach many people to.

✓ I think that's a successful website; it attracts many people.

'Attach many people to' is incorrect verb choice. Use 'attracts' for drawing users. Also fix sentence run-on with a semicolon or conjunction, and use third person singular 'attracts'.

× I prefer getting information on websites because I think the websites is faster and convenient than the books.

✓ I prefer getting information from websites because I think websites are faster and more convenient than books.

Preposition 'from' is correct with 'getting information'. Subject-verb agreement: 'websites are' (plural). Comparative structure: use 'more convenient than books' and omit definite articles when speaking generally.

× If we want to search a detail on the books, we it may cost me much of time, but if you use website, it's the first choice for you to save.

✓ If we want to look up a detail in books, it may cost me a lot of time, but if you use a website, it's the first choice to save time.

Multiple issues: use 'look up' or 'search for' and preposition 'in books'. Remove extra pronoun 'we it'. Use 'a lot of time' and article 'a website' when referring to a single website. Simplify final clause for clarity.

× Yes, I would like to have my own website, but now I do not have enough knowledge to build a website.

✓ Yes, I would like to have my own website, but I do not have enough knowledge to build one now.

Generally correct modal usage; adjust word order for naturalness and replace repeated 'website' with pronoun 'one'. Move 'now' to the end for clarity.

× Maybe in the future I will try to learn more re relative skill to build a website for myself.

✓ Maybe in the future I will try to learn more relevant skills to build a website for myself.

Use 'relevant' instead of 're relative' and plural 'skills' to match 'learn more'. Grammar and word choice corrected.

× For example, I learned how to cook a dish, its name is Gomba Ji Ding.

✓ For example, I learned how to cook a dish called Gomba Ji Ding.

Use the reduced relative clause 'called' instead of 'its name is' for natural phrasing. 'Learned' past tense is appropriate.

× It's a flexible dish for me, but I be successful to follow the step in the short video website.

✓ It's an easy dish for me, and I successfully followed the steps in the short-video website's video.

'Flexible dish' is odd; 'easy' or 'suitable' is clearer. 'I be successful' is ungrammatical — use past tense 'I successfully followed'. Use plural 'steps' and indicate source 'in the short-video website's video' or 'in a short video on the website'.