Websites— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more fluent, correct repetitions and grammar, and provide one clear supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I often visit video websites like YouTube and Bilibili because they offer content in many categories. For example, I watch tutorials and documentaries there, which helps me learn new skills. In addition, these sites let me relax after studying.

Sugestão: Clarify which website you mean and correct vocabulary mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the site and then explain what you use it for with one or two specific details.

Exemplo: My favourite website is Overleaf, an online LaTeX platform. I use it to write and collaborate on publications with my supervisor, because it lets us edit the same document in real time and track changes easily.

Sugestão: Be specific about the changes and use correct tense and word choice. Use a linking word to explain how the changes affect you.

Exemplo: Yes. One site I use, ScienceOpen, has grown rapidly and now sends me regular updates and article suggestions. As a result, I receive more relevant uploads and finding new research has become much more convenient.

Sugestão: Avoid generalizations and correct grammar. Give one clear reason and an example, using linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Short-video platforms are very popular in my country because they are entertaining and easy to watch in small breaks. For example, people often browse dozens of short clips on apps like Douyin during their commute for quick relaxation.

Sugestão: Make a concise comparison, fix repetitions and grammar, and provide two clear reasons with linking words and a brief example.

Exemplo: I prefer getting information from websites because they are more convenient and often free. For instance, I can quickly search tutorials on any topic online, whereas buying specialized books can be expensive.

Sugestão: State your opinion clearly and correct vocabulary and phrasing. Give one or two concrete reasons linked with a linking word.

Exemplo: I would not like to have my own website because I feel I have little to share and maintaining it requires a lot of responsibility. For example, running a site means regular updates and responding to comments, which I find too time-consuming.

Sugestão: This answer is good but can be improved by adding a linking word and one more specific detail about how you applied the learning. Keep it concise.

Exemplo: I learned practical techniques from Bilibili and YouTube, such as cooking new dishes and fixing software problems on my computer. For example, I followed a tutorial to reinstall my operating system and solved the issue without paying for repairs.

× Personally, I like to visit video websites such as such as YouTube and Bilibili.

✓ Personally, I like visiting video websites such as YouTube and Bilibili.

When expressing preferences with 'like', the gerund (verb + -ing) is commonly used to indicate a general habit or preference. Also remove the duplicated phrase 'such as'. Use 'visiting' instead of 'to visit' for natural spoken English.

× This website includes countless video in many categories.

✓ These websites include countless videos in many categories.

The subject refers to multiple websites, so use the plural demonstrative 'These websites' and plural noun 'videos'. Ensure subject and noun number match.

× I can watch whatever I want.

✓ I can watch whatever I want.

Sentence is grammatically fine; no change required. It correctly uses 'can' + base verb to express ability or permission.

× My fear with the website is over live.

✓ My favorite website is Overlive.

The original is unclear and likely contains word choices errors. Replace 'fear' with 'favorite' and 'over live' with the proper site name 'Overlive' (or correct name). Ensure simple Subject-Be-Complement structure: 'My favorite website is Overlive.'

× It is an online lactase processing website.

✓ It is an online lactation processing website.

Likely intended meaning is related to 'lactation' or 'platform for processing lactase' is unclear. If the intended word is 'lactation', use that adjective; otherwise choose an accurate term. Ensure adjective-noun order 'online lactation processing website.' Clarify vocabulary to match intended meaning.

× I can manage my publication work with my supervisor here.

✓ I can manage my publications with my supervisor here.

Use plural 'publications' for general work outputs. 'Publication work' is awkward; 'manage my publications' or 'manage my publication tasks' is clearer.

× Yes, Science Overlap is a rapidly growing website.

✓ Yes, Science Overlap is a rapidly growing website.

Sentence is correct in present simple to describe a current characteristic; no change required.

× It will send me countless upload and make my use more convenient.

✓ It sends me countless uploads and makes my use more convenient.

The sentence mixes future 'will' with wrong noun forms. To describe habitual action, use present simple: 'sends' and 'makes'. Also use plural 'uploads' and add 'my' is awkward — 'my use' could be 'using it' or 'my usage'. Prefer 'and makes using it more convenient.'

× Definitely short video website because these websites are really attractive and short videos may cause addiction.

✓ Definitely short video websites, because these websites are really attractive and short videos may cause addiction.

Use plural 'websites' to match 'these websites' and general statement. Also add a comma before the reason clause.

× You may slide hundreds of short video is in an hour and have a great of relaxation.

✓ You may watch hundreds of short videos in an hour and feel very relaxed.

'Slide' is incorrect verb here; use 'watch'. Use plural 'videos'. Remove extraneous 'is' and replace 'have a great of relaxation' with 'feel very relaxed' or 'get great relaxation'. This corrects verb choice, plurality, and idiomatic expression.

× I prefer to get gaining knowledge from websites.

✓ I prefer gaining knowledge from websites.

'Prefer' followed by a gerund is more natural here. 'To get gaining' is ungrammatical; choose either 'prefer to get knowledge' or better 'prefer gaining knowledge'.

× There are two reasons addi.

✓ There are two reasons: firstly, ...

Original contains incomplete word 'addi'. Use a clear discourse marker and continue with reasons. Provide full structure 'There are two reasons.' followed by enumeration.

× First of all, get getting knowledge from website is very convenient.

✓ First of all, getting knowledge from websites is very convenient.

Use gerund 'getting' as subject. Remove duplicate 'get' and use plural 'websites'. Use 'from websites' for natural phrasing.

× I can check I I can learn every field in all over the world.

✓ I can look up and learn about any field from anywhere in the world.

Original repeats 'I' and is ungrammatical. Use verbs 'look up' and 'learn about' and phrase 'from anywhere in the world' for clarity.

× Additionally, I do not have to pay for that.

✓ Additionally, I do not have to pay for it.

Use pronoun 'it' to refer to the previously mentioned resource. 'That' is acceptable but 'it' is smoother. No article error significant here; change improves naturalness.

× For example, you may have to pay a lot to buy a official version of a book, but.

✓ For example, you may have to pay a lot to buy an official version of a book.

Remove trailing 'but.' Use 'an' before vowel sound 'official'. Complete the sentence without the unfinished conjunction.

× Uh, to be honest, I I will not choose to open a new website for me because I have a bear nothing to share with others.

✓ Uh, to be honest, I would not choose to create a personal website because I have almost nothing to share with others.

Use 'would' for preference conditional, 'create a personal website' is natural. Remove duplicate 'I'. 'have a bear nothing' is incorrect; replace with 'almost nothing'.

× Additionally, I think getting a personal website need to take responsibility for that.

✓ Additionally, I think having a personal website requires taking responsibility.

Use noun 'having' and verb 'requires' to agree with singular subject. 'Need to take responsibility for that' is awkward; 'requires taking responsibility' is clearer and grammatical.

× It is too heavy for me.

✓ It is too much for me.

'Too heavy' is literal; for abstract burden, 'too much' or 'too burdensome' is more idiomatic.

× I learned some useful practical techniques through Bilibili and YouTube.

✓ I have learned some useful practical techniques through Bilibili and YouTube.

Use present perfect 'have learned' to indicate experiences up to now that are relevant to the present. Present simple 'learned' is acceptable in some contexts, but present perfect is more natural here.

× For example, I can learn how to cook beautiful dishes to my family, and I can learn how to repair my software issues in my computer.

✓ For example, I can learn how to cook beautiful dishes for my family, and I can learn how to fix software issues on my computer.

Use preposition 'for' with 'my family' and 'fix' is more natural than 'repair' for software. Use 'on my computer' rather than 'in'. This corrects preposition and verb choice errors.