Websites— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 句子需要更自然和有條理。開頭應直接回答問題，然後用一到兩句具體細節並用連接詞銜接。避免多餘的填充詞（uh, um）和語法錯誤（例如不定冠詞或動詞形式）。可以說明頻率、原因或舉例。

Exemplo: I often visit shopping websites like Amazon and eBay because I enjoy finding deals. For example, I usually browse them in the evenings and sometimes buy clothes or gadgets when they go on sale.

Sugestão: 回答要結構清晰，先直接說出最愛的網站，再用1–2句具體理由和例子。注意語法（主謂一致、動名詞或不定式）並減少語氣詞。可用連接詞使語意連貫。

Exemplo: My favourite website is a video streaming platform because watching TV dramas and reality shows helps me relax. Whenever I have spare time, I usually search for short reality episodes to watch online.

Sugestão: 回答需更精簡完整。先回答是否有變化，然後用具體時間點和原因說明。避免未完成的句子與語音填充。補充細節時用連接詞（since, because, so）。

Exemplo: Not really — I still mainly visit video streaming platforms. I started watching them when I was about five because I loved cartoons, and I have continued to enjoy TV shows and reality programmes ever since.

Sugestão: 語句要自然並注意單複數與冠詞使用。先給出總體類別，再用一兩個具體例子和情境。使用連接詞如 and, for example 使敘述更流暢。

Exemplo: Social media websites are very popular in my country, especially platforms with short video clips. For example, many people watch short videos during breaks or while commuting because the clips are quick and entertaining.

Sugestão: 回答應更精確並避免絕對化（only）。先直接表明偏好，再說明原因並給出例子或比較。語法上注意單複數和時態一致。

Exemplo: I prefer getting information from books because I trust their depth and accuracy. For example, I often read academic books for study, while I treat online articles more cautiously unless they come from reputable sources.

Sugestão: 回答要更簡潔和合乎邏輯。先直接回答願不願意，接着解釋原因與經歷，並提供具體細節（維護哪部分困難）。避免未完成句子與填充詞。

Exemplo: No, I would not like to have my own website right now because maintaining it is time-consuming. I tried creating one before, but I struggled with updates and technical issues despite help from friends who know computer science.

Sugestão: 應先簡要回答再用具體例子說明貢獻。注意正確拼寫與表達（Harvard, Cambridge），並把句子說完整。使用連接詞（for example, such as）增強流暢度。

Exemplo: Websites have helped me a lot, especially educational platforms. For example, I have taken online courses from professors at universities like Harvard and Cambridge, which improved my understanding of academic topics.

× I usually visit a shopping website such as eBay or Amazon, uh, because I'm obsessed with shopping.

✓ I usually visit shopping websites such as eBay or Amazon because I'm obsessed with shopping.

使用複數 'shopping websites' 比較恰當，因為說話者指的是多個網站的類型，而不是一個特定的網站。建議：當描述通常造訪多個站點或類別時用複數。

× I Moreover, I usually, uh, buy something that I don't need.

✓ Moreover, I usually buy things that I don't need.

原句中 'I Moreover' 和多餘逗號讓句子結構混亂；此外 'something' 可改為複數 'things' 更符合『常常買不需要的東西』的語意。建議：連接詞後直接接主要句子成分，避免在主語後插入連接詞；表習慣性動作時用複數或泛指名詞。

× I can't control myself to click in shopping websites.

✓ I can't control myself from clicking on shopping websites.

英文中常用 'cannot control oneself from doing something' 或 'can't help doing something'，且動名詞形式需使用 'clicking'，網站前常用介系詞 'on'。建議：記住固定片語 'control oneself from + -ing' 或使用 'can't help + -ing'。

× My favorite website is video streaming platform are watching TV dramas and reality shows is the most effective way for me to release stress Uh, every time, whenever I have spare time, I'll uh, find some reality show to watch.

✓ My favorite websites are video streaming platforms. Watching TV dramas and reality shows is the most effective way for me to relieve stress. Whenever I have spare time, I find some reality shows to watch.

原句包含多處結構錯誤：單複數不一致、子句無正確分割、動詞形式與時態不當。分成三句能使意思清楚：第一句用複數 'websites' 或 'platforms'；第二句用動名詞 'Watching' 作主語並用 'relieve stress'；第三句去掉多餘填詞並使動詞與主語一致。建議：避免句子過長，使用句號分開不同想法，注意主謂一致。

× I always love to visit video streaming platforms.

✓ I have always loved visiting video streaming platforms.

說者要表達從過去到現在持續的喜好時，用現在完成式 'have always loved' 比單純現在式更自然；動詞與非限定動詞搭配用 'visiting'。建議：表達持續狀態時使用現在完成時。

× I started to visit this kind of form when I was, uh, five years old.

✓ I started visiting this kind of platform when I was five years old.

'start to visit' 雖可接受，但更自然的是 'started visiting'；'form' 用詞不當，應為 'platform' 或 'website'。建議：固定搭配 'start + -ing' 更常用，並選用正確名詞。

× Till now, I still really.

✓ Till now, I still really enjoy watching them.

原句缺少主要動詞和賓語，造成不完整。補上 'enjoy watching them' 使句子完整並接續前文語意。建議：確保句子有主語和謂語；若省略會造成不完整句。

× A Social media websites is really popular in my country.

✓ Social media websites are really popular in my country.

原句有冠詞與單複數不一致：'A' 不應與複數 'websites' 並用；改為複數主詞 'websites' 並用複數動詞 'are'。建議：注意冠詞與名詞數一致，主謂一致。

× I believe it also popular across the world.

✓ I believe it is also popular across the world.

句中漏掉助動詞 'is'，導致謂語不完整。建議：完整句子需要連繫動詞 'is'。

× Uh, people can't stop scrolling through uh, short video clips, uh, when they have a short break or while commuting.

✓ People can't stop scrolling through short video clips when they have a short break or while commuting.

原句有過多語氣詞 'uh'，清除後句子即正確。建議：口語中減少頻繁填詞以提升流暢度。

× I'm an old school person so I definitely prefer to get information from books.

✓ I'm an old-school person, so I definitely prefer to get information from books.

此句主要問題是標點與形容詞連字符，原句語法大體正確。加入連字符 'old-school' 與逗號更自然。建議：注意複合形容詞格式與連接詞後停頓。

× I believe that only book can give me professional knowledge.

✓ I believe that only books can give me professional knowledge.

'book' 應為複數 'books' 或使用定冠詞 'a book' 視語意而定；此處指一般書籍，故用複數。建議：在泛指時使用複數名詞。

× I always thought about the reality of information from websites.

✓ I always worry about the reliability of information from websites.

原句 'thought about the reality of information' 用詞不當且意思模糊；改為 'worry about the reliability' 更符合想表達的擔心資訊真實性的意圖。建議：使用 collocation（搭配詞）如 'reliability of information'。

× No, to be honest, I have tried it before.

✓ No. To be honest, I tried it before.

這裡說明過去經驗時用簡單過去 'tried' 更自然；'have tried before' 也可，但前面用 'No' 需分句清楚。建議：敘述過去具體時間或經驗偏好用簡單過去。

× However, the website was too hard to sustain and maintain its function.

✓ However, the website was too difficult to sustain and to maintain.

'hard' 可用但在這裡 'difficult' 更書面；重複 'its function' 冗餘，可簡化為 'to sustain and to maintain' 或 'to maintain its functions'。建議：避免冗贅表達並選更準確的形容詞。

× I used to ask for help from my friends who learned about uh, artificial intelligence and computer science.

✓ I used to ask my friends who studied artificial intelligence and computer science for help.

調整語序使句子更自然，將 'for help' 放句末並用 'studied' 表示學習背景。建議：把動詞與賓語安排在自然位置，減少填詞。

× As for me, is it?

✓ As for me, I don't think so.

原句不完整且含義不明。根據上下文，說話者想表達自己不想要網站或不同意，改為完整句 'I don't think so'。建議：避免片語性尾問，直接表達意見。

× I've gained a lot, for example in educational websites I have access to get a professional knowledge from professors from umm famous university like Harford and Cambridge.

✓ I've gained a lot. For example, on educational websites I have access to professional knowledge from professors at famous universities like Harvard and Cambridge.

原句過長且有多處錯誤：'access to get' 用法錯誤，應為 'have access to' + 名詞；'a professional knowledge' 不需不定冠詞且應為複數 'universities'；'Harford' 拼錯為 'Harvard'。建議：使用 'have access to something' 結構，並注意專有名詞拼寫。

× So it.

✓ So it has been very helpful.

原句 'So it.' 不完整，缺動詞和說明。補上描述性動詞使句子完整並總結前文效果。建議：避免省略主幹句子，確保句子能傳達完整意思。