Websites— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific example and a brief reason. Reduce hesitations and filler words, and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I often visit educational websites, especially ones focused on IELTS preparation. For example, I regularly use a site with speaking practice tests because it helps me learn vocabulary and improve my fluency.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer naming the site type, then give one clear reason and a brief detail. Avoid vague phrasing and repetition; keep sentences compact and coherent.

Exemplo: My favourite websites are streaming platforms for web series and movies. I often spend three to four hours watching shows there because it helps me relax after study, and I switch to educational sites when I need to learn something.

Sugestão: Be specific and structured: give a clear yes/no topic sentence, then explain with one or two concrete details. Avoid too many hesitations and unclear statements about banning — state facts or your experience clearly.

Exemplo: No, the main websites I use have not changed. However, some sites have been blocked recently, so I simply avoid them and stick to the ones I trust for study and entertainment.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence listing 2–3 popular types, then explain why one is most popular with a specific reason and an example. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'because' to improve coherence.

Exemplo: In my country, educational sites, freelancing platforms, and live-streaming sites are very popular. Freelancing websites are the most widely used because many young people earn money online there — for example, people offer design or tutoring services to support their families.

Sugestão: Start with a clear preference, then give two concise reasons with linking words (because/so). Correct grammar (singular/plural, articles) and avoid repetition to sound more natural.

Exemplo: I prefer getting information from websites rather than books because many books are hard to find, while online resources are easily accessible. Also, since internet access is common here, websites are faster and more convenient for research.

Sugestão: Give a direct short answer, then explain with one or two concise reasons and a conditional future idea. Eliminate repetition and hesitations; use correct conditional phrasing.

Exemplo: Not at the moment because I don't know how to build a website and it seems complicated. However, if I learn web development in the future, I would consider creating my own site.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear statement about learning, then give a specific example and explain how it helped you. Use linking words like 'for example' and avoid vague phrasing.

Exemplo: Websites have taught me many useful skills for study, especially IELTS speaking. For example, an online course helped me practise fluency and gave sample answers I could model, which improved my confidence and pronunciation.

× I often visit some educational website, the purpose of my study, uh, as, as I am studying related to IELTS, so, uh, I, I often visit, uh, the website that is related to my study or, uh, related to the IELTS speaking.

✓ I often visit some educational websites for my studies, because I am studying for the IELTS, so I often visit websites related to my studies or to IELTS speaking.

Article and plural use: 'website' should be plural ('websites') when referring to more than one or in general. 'the purpose of my study' is awkward and unnecessary; use 'for my studies'. Use 'for the IELTS' not 'related to IELTS'. Also remove filler words and repeatings for clarity.

× OK, some sorts of movie website or online website is my favorite website because I would love to spend almost 3 to 4 hours in this in that website to see web series or movies and the other time I would like to spend the educational website.

✓ OK, some kinds of movie or online websites are my favorite because I would love to spend almost three to four hours on those websites watching web series or movies, and I spend the rest of the time on educational websites.

Subject-verb agreement and pluralization: 'website' should be plural ('websites') to match 'some sorts'/'kinds', so use 'are'. Preposition use: use 'on' websites not 'in' them. 'the other time' should be 'the rest of the time' and 'the educational website' should be plural 'educational websites'.

× Uh, actually, no, there is no changes uh, to the website that I often visit, but some kinds of website that are changed, uh, actually they are banned.

✓ Actually, no, there are no changes to the websites that I often visit, but some kinds of websites have been changed or banned.

Subject-verb agreement: 'there is no changes' is incorrect; use 'there are no changes' because 'changes' is plural. 'website' should be plural. Tense and voice: use present perfect passive 'have been changed or banned' to indicate the action affecting the websites.

× Uh, I don't know why, but uh, I didn't umm, uh, enter or uh, I didn't enter into the website so.

✓ I don't know why, but I did not enter the websites.

Tense and preposition: use simple past negative 'did not enter' correctly and omit unnecessary 'into' after 'enter' when referring to websites; say 'enter the websites' or better 'visit the websites'. Remove filler words and 'so' at the end.

× OK, there are many website popular in my country specially the educational website, freelancing website or the live streaming website cost most, most but most popular is the freelancing website.

✓ OK, many websites are popular in my country, especially educational websites, freelancing websites, and live-streaming websites, but the most popular are freelancing websites.

Word order and pluralization: say 'many websites are popular' not 'there are many website popular'. Use plural forms for categories. 'specially' should be 'especially'. 'cost most, most' is unclear; replace with 'but the most popular are freelancing websites'.

× By this the young generation keep earning and uh, they run their family.

✓ Because of this, the younger generation keeps earning and supports their families.

Verb agreement and word choice: 'young generation' -> 'younger generation'. Subject-verb agreement: 'the generation keeps' (singular collective) or 'younger people keep' (plural). Use 'supports their families' instead of 'run their family'. 'keep earning' can be 'keep earning' but 'keeps earning' fits singular 'generation'.

× I prefer getting information from website rather than the books because some books are not available but I can get information from the website easily and as long as the Internet service is very common in my country. So I prefer to getting information from website.

✓ I prefer getting information from websites rather than from books because some books are not available, but I can get information from websites easily since internet service is very common in my country. So I prefer getting information from websites.

Prepositions and articles: use 'from websites' and 'from books'. Pluralize 'website(s)'. 'as long as' is incorrect here; use 'since' or 'because'. Remove extra 'to' in 'prefer to getting' — correct form is 'prefer getting' or 'prefer to get'.

× Not really. I don't like to have my own website because I don't have any knowledge about how to develop a website and it's a very complicated issue. But in future if I get a chance to learn about how to develop my how to develop a website, that time I would like to have my own.

✓ Not really. I don't want to have my own website because I don't have any knowledge about how to develop one and it's very complicated. But in the future, if I get a chance to learn how to develop a website, I would like to have my own.

Modal and phrasing: 'I don't like to have' is better as 'I don't want to have'. Remove repetition 'how to develop my how to develop'. Use 'one' to avoid repetition. Add 'the' in 'in the future'. Use conditional 'would like' correctly.

× Actually I have learned many things from website recently I have learned how to speak fluently in IELTS speaking or IELTS test and that is a website.

✓ Actually, I have learned many things from websites. Recently I learned how to speak fluently for the IELTS speaking test from a website.

Articles and plurals: use 'websites' when referring generally. Separate into two sentences for clarity. Use 'for the IELTS speaking test' and 'from a website' to specify the source. Use simple past 'learned' for recent completed learning.

× And also I didn't find a book that is related to my studies and I found that in my in a website.

✓ Also, I couldn't find a book related to my studies, but I found the information on a website.

Articles and prepositions: use 'a book' and 'on a website' (not 'in a website'). Use 'couldn't find' for inability in the past and 'found the information on a website' for clarity.