Websites— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise, avoid filler words (uh), use a clear topic sentence then one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Use varied vocabulary (e.g., 'tutorials', 'educational channels') and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I often visit streaming websites such as YouTube. For example, I follow educational channels and cooking tutorials to learn new recipes and techniques, which helps my personal growth.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence naming the site, then add one specific reason. Remove hesitations and repeat information. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

Exemplo: My favourite website is YouTube because it hosts many cooking channels. For instance, I watch step-by-step videos that help me improve my cooking techniques.

Sugestão: Organize answer with a clear time contrast (past vs present) and use correct tense and plural forms. Replace fillers and use linking words like 'however' or 'now'. Provide one specific example of a study website and one entertainment site.

Exemplo: Yes. When I was preparing for public exams, I used educational websites with exam techniques and tutorials. However, now that I have finished, I mainly visit entertainment sites such as streaming platforms.

Sugestão: Answer directly and concisely: name the types and give a specific reason or example. Reduce pauses and use linking words like 'for example' or 'because'. Correct subject-verb agreement.

Exemplo: Social media sites are very popular in Hong Kong because people use them to communicate and share news. For example, during major events people post updates and discuss what is happening.

Sugestão: Good structure and clear contrast. Improve by using linking words ('if', 'however') and slightly richer vocabulary ('reliable', 'up-to-date'). Keep each part concise and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: It depends. For reliable, in-depth historical information I prefer books because they are more thorough. However, for current news or celebrity updates I use websites since they are more up-to-date.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear yes/no and give one or two specific reasons or examples; avoid repeating phrases and fillers. Use past tense correctly when referring to learning and mention the purpose for your website.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to create my own website to share my recipes and cooking tips. I learned basic web design in high school from a teacher, which gave me the confidence to start one.

Sugestão: Be specific about what you learned and use correct nouns (e.g., 'life skills' not 'life tests'). Use linking words like 'for example' and describe one concrete result. Remove hesitations and finish the sentence clearly.

Exemplo: Websites have taught me practical life skills, especially cooking. For example, I learned measurements and techniques from tutorial videos, which helped me prepare healthier meals at home.

× I frequently visit online streaming websites like YouTube where I can browse a lot of videos, uh, which is entertaining and beneficial for my personal growth.

✓ I frequently visit online streaming websites like YouTube where I can browse many videos, which are entertaining and beneficial for my personal growth.

The relative clause 'which is entertaining' refers to 'videos', a plural noun, so the verb should be plural ('are entertaining'). Also 'a lot of videos' is informal; 'many videos' is more appropriate. Improve by ensuring subject and verb agree in number and choosing suitable quantifiers.

× I use YouTube as a learning, as a media for me to learn how to do a lot of things like cooking, for example.

✓ I use YouTube for learning, as a medium for me to learn how to do many things like cooking, for example.

'A learning' is incorrect; we use 'for learning' or 'a learning resource'. 'Media' is plural; the singular is 'medium'. Also 'a lot of things' is informal; 'many things' is better. Correct by choosing proper noun forms and articles.

× My favorite website wouldbeyoutube.com is a uh, as I mentioned earlier, he say uh, video streaming websites which have a lot of content creators that are utilized to learn about cooking and I can improve on my, uh, cooking technique.

✓ My favorite website would be youtube.com. As I mentioned earlier, it is a video streaming website that has many content creators I use to learn about cooking, and I can improve my cooking techniques.

Sentence contains several issues: 'wouldbeyoutube.com' needs spacing and punctuation; 'he say' is incorrect pronoun and phrase; use 'it is' to refer to the website (third-person singular pronoun). 'Which have' should agree with 'website' (singular) so use 'that has' or refer to 'websites' plural. 'Are utilized to learn' is awkward; use 'I use' or 'I learn from'. Also pluralize 'technique' to 'techniques' for general skills.

× Definitely, uh, when I was studying for my public examination, I visits a website which uh tutors uh, about uh, project examinations technique a lot.

✓ Definitely. When I was studying for my public examination, I visited a website that tutored me a lot about project examination techniques.

Tense must be past ('was studying' requires 'visited' not 'visits'). Also 'tutors' should be past 'tutored' and agree with singular 'website' or be rephrased with 'that tutored me'. 'Project examinations technique' is ungrammatical; use 'project examination techniques'. Ensure tense consistency and subject-verb agreement.

× But however, once I pass my public examination, I use website to entertain myself.

✓ However, once I passed my public examination, I used websites to entertain myself.

'But however' is redundant; choose one. Tense should match past ('once I passed') because earlier clause refers to a past event. 'I use website' lacks an article and number; use 'websites' or 'a website'. Ensure consistent tense and correct article/number.

× I believe, uh, social media is one of the most, uh, popular websites in my country, uh, in Hong Kong, they are a lot of people utilize social media to interact with each other.

✓ I believe social media is one of the most popular types of websites in my country. In Hong Kong, many people use social media to interact with each other.

Original mixes clauses improperly and misuses 'they are a lot of people'. Use 'many people' and 'use' for correct verb choice. Also 'social media' is better described as 'types of websites'. Split into two sentences for clarity and correct pronoun/subject usage.

× And when there's major, uh, social events, uh, happen in real life, people would use social media.

✓ And when major social events happen in real life, people use social media.

Remove unnecessary commas and the auxiliary 'would' which changes modality; present simple 'use' is natural for habitual or typical behavior. 'Happen' should directly follow the noun phrase; correct prepositional and clause order.

× I would say it depends on what kind of information I would like to receive.

✓ I would say it depends on what kind of information I would like to get.

'Receive' is not incorrect but slightly formal; 'get' is more natural in conversational speech. This suggestion is stylistic; tense 'would like' is acceptable. Focus on natural word choice.

× If it's factual information about some of the past events, for example historical events, I would like to get it from books.

✓ If it's factual information about past events, for example historical events, I would like to get it from books.

Remove 'some of the' which is unnecessary and awkward. Prepositional phrase 'about past events' is sufficient. Ensure concise phrasing.

× Uh, I would love to create a website for my own. And in fact, I did learn about how to create a website when I was studying in high school.

✓ I would love to create my own website. In fact, I learned how to create a website when I was in high school.

'Create a website for my own' is unidiomatic; use 'my own website'. 'Did learn' is unnecessary emphasis; simple past 'learned' is natural. 'Studying in high school' -> 'in high school' for idiomatic phrasing.

× I was taught by my, I was taught by a high school teacher who, uh, teach me how to utilize the Internet too and.

✓ I was taught by a high school teacher who taught me how to use the Internet as well.

Avoid repetition 'I was taught by my, I was taught by a'. Use past tense 'taught' to match. 'Teach me' must be past 'taught me'. 'Utilize' is formal; 'use' is more natural. Remove trailing 'and'. Ensure concise past-tense structure.

× I have learned a lot of essential life tests, which is useful to my, uh, daily life.

✓ I have learned a lot of essential life skills which are useful in my daily life.

'Life tests' is incorrect; intended phrase is 'life skills'. 'Which is' should be 'which are' to agree with plural 'skills'. Use 'useful in my daily life' rather than 'to my daily life'. Correct word choice and subject-verb agreement.

× For example, uh, I have learned how to, uh, cook properly with the right technique in ingredients, uh, using the, uh, websites, uh, out and.

✓ For example, I have learned how to cook properly with the right techniques and ingredients by using websites.

Phrase 'technique in ingredients' is incorrect; separate 'techniques' and 'ingredients'. 'Using the websites out and' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'by using websites'. Ensure correct prepositions ('by using') and noun forms.