Cars— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and correct small grammar issues (e.g., 'it gave me a feel of vomit' → 'it made me feel sick'). Keep within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Not really. I didn’t travel much by car as a child, but once I took a nine‑hour drive to visit my cousins. It made me feel quite motion‑sick, so I didn’t enjoy long car journeys.

Sugestão: Give a clear, single topic sentence naming the type you prefer, then explain why with specific reasons and correct vocabulary (use 'electric' rather than 'electrical' or 'electronical'; 'petrol' or 'gas' rather than 'pay fuel'). Avoid repetition and finish the sentence properly.

Exemplo: I prefer electric cars because they are more environmentally friendly and cheaper to run. In my family we actually have two electric cars and one petrol car, and I like the quietness and low running costs of the electrics.

Sugestão: Answer directly and improve grammar and phrasing. Use one topic sentence and one supporting detail about why you prefer being a passenger now, and a brief future intention. Correct phrasing: 'I'm waiting until I'm 18' or 'when I turn 18.'

Exemplo: At the moment I prefer to be a passenger because I'm still a student and I haven't learned to drive yet. When I turn 18 I hope to learn driving and then I will enjoy being the driver.

Sugestão: Provide a clear, coherent sequence using proper tense and linking words. Avoid irrelevant details like 'I woke up.' Use connectors (first, then) and correct verb forms. Be concise and specific about the mode of transport you choose.

Exemplo: When there is a traffic jam, I usually take public transport because it's convenient and close to my home. First I walk to the bus stop, then I take the bus and sometimes transfer to the subway to reach my destination.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly then give a specific personal preference with reasons. Correct small grammar (e.g., 'I have never seen anyone with a Tiffany‑coloured car') and avoid repeating the same idea. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I don't think car colours matter much practically, but personally I'd choose a Tiffany‑coloured car because it looks chic and unique. I’d like something different since I rarely see that colour on the road.

Sugestão: Give a clear position about buying an expensive car and provide specific reasons. Correct phrasing ('I care about my safety', 'reliable' rather than 'works'). Keep to 2–3 concise sentences using linking words like 'because' to explain your priorities.

Exemplo: I probably won't focus on buying an expensive car; I'd prefer a reliable and safe vehicle because safety and ease of driving are most important to me. If it’s both safe and comfortable, I don’t mind paying more for quality.

× When I was a child I didn't travel a lot by cars but once I went to my neighborhood city in my country to visit my cousins and it was 9 hours drive.

✓ When I was a child I didn't travel a lot by car but once I went to a nearby city in my country to visit my cousins and it was a 9-hour drive.

Use singular 'car' after 'by' to indicate mode of transport (preposition + vehicle uses singular). 'Neighborhood city' is unnatural; use 'nearby city'. '9 hours drive' needs hyphenation and singular 'hour' in a compound adjective: '9-hour drive'. Also maintain past tense consistently; sentence already uses past tense verbs correctly.

× I didn't really like it because it was it gave me a feel of vomit and it made me sick.

✓ I didn't really like it because it made me feel like vomiting and it made me sick.

Redundant 'it was it gave' removed. Use correct verb phrase 'made me feel like vomiting' or 'made me vomit'. Maintain past tense 'made'. 'Feel of vomit' is incorrect collocation.

× I like the electrical ones because they are very ecologic and convenient.

✓ I like the electric ones because they are very environmentally friendly and convenient.

Use adjective 'electric' not 'electrical' for vehicles. 'Ecologic' is awkward; use 'environmentally friendly' or 'eco-friendly'. Adjective order corrected.

× In our family we have three cars. Two of them are electronical, electrical, electrical, electrical and one of them is pay fuel.

✓ In our family we have three cars. Two of them are electric and one of them runs on petrol.

Remove repeated words. Use 'electric' (adjective) and proper phrase 'runs on petrol' or 'is petrol-powered' instead of 'pay fuel'. Also use article structure 'one of them' correctly.

× I prefer the ones.

✓ I prefer the electric ones.

Incomplete sentence; specify which ones you prefer. Add 'electric' to make the meaning clear.

× I'm still a student so I prefer to be a passenger because I can't drive yet.

✓ I'm still a student, so I prefer to be a passenger because I can't drive yet.

Add comma for clarity; tense and grammar are correct otherwise.

× When I grow up I would love to be a driver but for now I only can be a passenger so I'm waiting my 18 years old.

✓ When I grow up I would love to be a driver, but for now I can only be a passenger, so I'm waiting until I am 18 years old.

Place 'only' before 'can' for correct word order: 'can only'. Use 'waiting until I am 18 years old' rather than 'waiting my 18 years old'. Add commas for clarity.

× When there's a traffic jam, I usually use common transport.

✓ When there's a traffic jam, I usually use public transport.

Use 'public transport' or 'public transportation' instead of 'common transport' which is unnatural.

× It is very suitable for me and it's nearby my house.

✓ It is very suitable for me and it's near my house.

Use 'near' rather than 'nearby' before a noun in this structure: 'near my house'. Tense is present so present forms are fine.

× I woke up, I woke out of my home.

✓ I woke up and left my home.

'Woke out of my home' is ungrammatical. Use 'left my home' to express exiting. Past tense 'woke' and 'left' match sequence.

× I go to the bus station.

✓ I went to the bus station.

Context is past narrative, so use past tense 'went' instead of present 'go'.

× After that I get to the subway and from the subway I get to to the place I had to go.

✓ After that I took the subway and from the subway I went to the place I had to go.

Maintain past tense narrative: use 'took' and 'went'. Remove duplicated 'to'. Use appropriate verbs for travel.

× I don't really know the difference between the colors of cars, but if I had a car, I would prefer to have a Tiffany colored car because I think it's very chic and unique.

✓ I don't really know the difference between car colors, but if I had a car I would prefer to have a Tiffany-colored car because I think it's very chic and unique.

Hyphenate compound adjective 'Tiffany-colored'. 'Colors of cars' is awkward; 'car colors' is concise. Comma removed before 'I would' as it's a conditional clause.

× No one has. I never seen that someone had a Tiffany colored car so I would be the first to have it.

✓ No one I know has. I have never seen anyone with a Tiffany-colored car, so I would be the first to have one.

Use present perfect 'has' and 'have never seen' for experience. 'Someone had' incorrect; use 'anyone with'. Replace 'it' with 'one' to refer to a car.

× In the future I would love to have a nice vehicle because for me it is more important that it works and it it is safe because I really care of my safety and that the car would be easy to drive.

✓ In the future I would love to have a nice vehicle because for me it is more important that it works and that it is safe, because I really care about my safety and that the car is easy to drive.

Remove duplicate 'it'. Use 'care about' not 'care of'. Keep parallel structure 'that it works and that it is safe'. Use 'is easy to drive' for clarity.